Comments by Eve Conner Most recent public comments by Eve Conner https://writingpartners.net/users/3335 This line depicts an equivocation and a claim begging fallacy. equivocation as the meaning of the word equal is changed from something that defines status and rights, stretching it into a justification of hierarchy. https://writingpartners.net/documents/9994?scroll_to=56779 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9994?scroll_to=56779 And Claim begging with the term "some animals" is used, adjacent to the original rule of "all animals are equal" This scentece is manipulative as it conceals a hierarchal belief while sounding like it comes from a place of agreement with the original principal that all animals are equal. while it still "keeps" but rather refers to the revolutions slogan, it actually reverses the whole meaning . Sun, 01 Mar 2026 19:11:12 -0500 squealer is slowly manipulating the rest of the animals by rewriting history. Using logos and pathos to make the animals who are already is a scared and fragile state due to the high tenions on the barn and there starvation. https://writingpartners.net/documents/9993?scroll_to=55280 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9993?scroll_to=55280 Tue, 03 Feb 2026 22:30:55 -0500 these rules seem like a way for sven to see your soul and the vibe it has rather then what people present themselves to be https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50853 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50853 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500 dosent like assholes, his whole interview outlines what he looks for when bouncing people in and out https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50852 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50852 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500 feels like he uses his body only as a vessle for his soul, as an expression of his souls intrest in art, not as a marker of his value in the world https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50851 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50851 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500 sve wanted to go against the norm https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50850 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50850 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500 why this club is so diffrent and so exclusive, it looks for people who go against the social norms, tribute to punks in eighties germany https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50849 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50849 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500 the clubs principals https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50848 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50848 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500 the enviorment the club wants https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50847 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50847 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500 shows that sven looks for vibe of the person over anything else https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50846 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50846 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500 dosent care for lables which mean the club dosent care abut lables https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50845 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50845 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500 orgin of what sven finds interesting https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50844 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50844 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500 the club looks for people who present rebellious as a tribute the the rebels during that time https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50843 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50843 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500 the club take the opposite approch, whats in there, rather then whats out there https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50842 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50842 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500 Reluctante because it is supposed to stay underwrapps what the club looks for. https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50841 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50841 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500 Why the club has so much allure https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50840 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50840 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500 What berghain is looking for, rebellion to a dicttorship, more figurative https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50791 https://writingpartners.net/documents/9206?scroll_to=50791 Sun, 07 Dec 2025 21:31:38 -0500