Comments by 2025 Oliver Skanchy Most recent public comments by 2025 Oliver Skanchy https://writingpartners.net/users/334 both Peter attia and huberman recommended not eating three hours before you sleep https://writingpartners.net/documents/5640?scroll_to=39263 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5640?scroll_to=39263 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 13:41:47 -0500 like Andrew huberman said when we eat before bed not only are we likely introducing more sugars into our body but we are diverting energy from getting rid of it to digesting food https://writingpartners.net/documents/5640?scroll_to=39262 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5640?scroll_to=39262 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 13:40:34 -0500 Americans have so much sugar in their diet now and I think more than we realize have an addiction to sugar. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5640?scroll_to=39260 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5640?scroll_to=39260 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 13:38:53 -0500 Not only does it lend itself to longer life but it makes you more capable of doing tasks that require lifting heavy things and it can prevent injury. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5649?scroll_to=39259 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5649?scroll_to=39259 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 13:20:52 -0500 when we eat before going to bed our boys energy in diverted from rejuvenating our body to digesting food which can make us feel less rested and have negative consequences down the road. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5642?scroll_to=39258 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5642?scroll_to=39258 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 13:13:41 -0500 not only does it improve longevity and health, but I have found that I feel better when I don't eat large meals at the beginning of the day. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5642?scroll_to=39257 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5642?scroll_to=39257 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 13:12:08 -0500 the relatively new invention of light has caused a break in most peoples circadian rhythm and our body's have not had time to evolve to fully cope with this change our dan is still programed to go to sleep when the sen sets and wake up when the sun rises https://writingpartners.net/documents/5642?scroll_to=39256 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5642?scroll_to=39256 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 13:10:09 -0500 not only do these things help you live longer but they improve your mental function, thus one could relate things that improve your mental function help you live longer. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5646?scroll_to=39250 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5646?scroll_to=39250 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 12:28:42 -0500 the more you resist things that provide you with a rush of dopamine the more you become resistant to it, just like weight lighting. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5646?scroll_to=39249 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5646?scroll_to=39249 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 12:26:36 -0500 different tasks can cause brain growth for different people. it depends on what you find hard https://writingpartners.net/documents/5646?scroll_to=39248 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5646?scroll_to=39248 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 12:24:57 -0500 In this paragraph the woman is alluding to someone watching or possibly watching them and with the word safer it shows that even their hiding spot is not completely safe. I connected this to Edward Snowden https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35909 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35909 In this paragraph the woman is alluding to someone watching or possibly watching them and with the word safer it shows that even their hiding spot is not completely safe. I connected this to Edward Snowden he exposed the extent to which the government was spying on its own citizens which was against our constitutional rights. https://www.theguardian.com/world/2013/jun/09/edward-snowden-nsa-whistleblower-surveillance Tue, 04 Feb 2025 11:06:23 -0500 despite Winstons best attempts to hide his true feelings towards the party it can still be picked up by some. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35000 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35000 Mon, 27 Jan 2025 14:57:24 -0500 The only way to avoid suspicion is to follow along with what the party to the letter. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34999 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34999 Mon, 27 Jan 2025 14:55:38 -0500 The party chocolate like most of the party created items seems to be a cheap almost imitation of the real thing. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34998 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34998 Mon, 27 Jan 2025 14:53:09 -0500 There is almost no place where someone cannot be overheard even in the country https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34997 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34997 Mon, 27 Jan 2025 14:47:10 -0500 how can I make the conclusion better https://writingpartners.net/documents/4054?scroll_to=32704 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4054?scroll_to=32704 To enhance your conclusion, consider tying together the main points of your analysis in a way that reinforces Sonia Sotomayor's exploration of identity. Emphasize how she masterfully employs rhetorical strategies to address the complexities of identity, not just as a Latina but as an American navigating a multicultural landscape. You could highlight how her ability to intertwine personal anecdotes with her professional ethos creates a powerful narrative that resonates with diverse audiences. Do you want to explore more about how to incorporate a powerful closing statement, how to address the broader implications of her message, or how to mirror your introduction for a cohesive essay? Let me know which path you'd like to take, or if there's another area you want to delve into! Remember: Revise or edit your writing right now. If this is your document, click on a sentence or a paragraph number in the left panel, then hit *Edit*, make your changes and hit *Update*. You can also hit *Suggest Revision* on a document that you have been invited to. Another option is to hit *Add to Document*, and then you can add *New Content* for deeper, multi-paragraph rewrites. Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Thu, 16 Jan 2025 16:34:52 -0500 how can I specify the impact on her audiences understanding of identity complexity? https://writingpartners.net/documents/4054?scroll_to=32676 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4054?scroll_to=32676 Your essay does a good job of identifying Sotomayor's use of personal connection and ethos, but let's delve deeper into how her anecdotes impact her audience's understanding of identity complexity. When she shares her cultural experiences, such as eating traditional Puerto Rican foods or listening to merengue, she paints a vivid picture of her life that goes beyond simple definitions of identity. This approach invites the audience to consider identity as multifaceted, not just a label but a rich tapestry of experiences. Do you want to explore more on how you can enhance your explanation of Sotomayor's ethos, how these anecdotes affect the audience, or how to further connect these elements to the broader message about identity complexity? Feel free to let me know, or suggest another area you'd like to refine! Let's elevate your analysis to new heights. Revise or edit your writing right now. If this is your document, click on a sentence or a paragraph number in the left panel, then hit *Edit*, make your changes and hit *Update*. You can also hit *Suggest Revision* on a document that you have been invited to. Another option is to hit *Add to Document*, and then you can add *New Content* for deeper, multi-paragraph rewrites. Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Thu, 16 Jan 2025 16:25:41 -0500 can you give some ideas on how I could strengthen my thesis? https://writingpartners.net/documents/4054?scroll_to=32661 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4054?scroll_to=32661 Your response to the prompt effectively establishes a thesis that explores Sonia Sotomayor's rhetorical choices. You've identified how she uses personal connection and ethos to convey her complex identity, which is a solid foundation for your analysis. Your thesis could be strengthened by clearly articulating how these rhetorical strategies contribute to Sotomayor's overall message about identity. Consider specifying how the personal anecdotes and ethos not only define her identity but also impact her audience's understanding of identity complexity. Would you like more feedback on how you explained the use of personal anecdotes, how you described her ethos, or how you connected these elements to her audience? Let me know which of these areas you'd like to explore further, or if there's another aspect of your essay you'd like to discuss. I'm here to help you take this essay to the next level! Revise or edit your writing right now. If this is your document, click on a sentence or a paragraph number in the left panel, then hit *Edit*, make your changes and hit *Update*. You can also hit *Suggest Revision* on a document that you have been invited to. Another option is to hit *Add to Document*, and then you can add *New Content* for deeper, multi-paragraph rewrites. Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Thu, 16 Jan 2025 16:25:41 -0500 How well did I respond to the prompt with a thesis that analyzes the writer’s rhetorical choices? https://writingpartners.net/documents/4054?scroll_to=32650 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4054?scroll_to=32650 Your response to the prompt effectively establishes a thesis that explores Sonia Sotomayor's rhetorical choices. You've identified how she uses personal connection and ethos to convey her complex identity, which is a solid foundation for your analysis. Your thesis could be strengthened by clearly articulating how these rhetorical strategies contribute to Sotomayor's overall message about identity. Consider specifying how the personal anecdotes and ethos not only define her identity but also impact her audience's understanding of identity complexity. Would you like more feedback on how you explained the use of personal anecdotes, how you described her ethos, or how you connected these elements to her audience? Let me know which of these areas you'd like to explore further, or if there's another aspect of your essay you'd like to discuss. I'm here to help you take this essay to the next level! Revise or edit your writing right now. If this is your document, click on a sentence or a paragraph number in the left panel, then hit *Edit*, make your changes and hit *Update*. You can also hit *Suggest Revision* on a document that you have been invited to. Another option is to hit *Add to Document*, and then you can add *New Content* for deeper, multi-paragraph rewrites. Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Thu, 16 Jan 2025 16:25:41 -0500 This reminds me of the law suit against apple that started in 2019, because Siri was listening to conversations when not activated and suggesting ads for those conversations. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31782 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31782 Thu, 09 Jan 2025 18:07:07 -0500 this is interesting the cultures you have been raised have different values that they holdover other cultures this would explain some of the differences in cultures they prioritize certain values https://writingpartners.net/documents/3350?scroll_to=25538 https://writingpartners.net/documents/3350?scroll_to=25538 Tue, 03 Dec 2024 11:25:21 -0500 on thing that comes up a lot in his book is 10000 hours. this is another sign of success this shows that hard work trumps pure ability https://writingpartners.net/documents/3350?scroll_to=25533 https://writingpartners.net/documents/3350?scroll_to=25533 Tue, 03 Dec 2024 11:21:14 -0500 Malcom is saying the first sign of success is opportunity https://writingpartners.net/documents/3350?scroll_to=25522 https://writingpartners.net/documents/3350?scroll_to=25522 Tue, 03 Dec 2024 11:17:23 -0500 Fox News seems to go over more of the statistics of the election than democracy now does. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18931 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18931 Wed, 06 Nov 2024 11:07:10 -0500 one of the topics that they address is First Nation rights. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18905 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18905 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 21:27:19 -0500 It is interesting how this lady on Fox News is talking about the necessity of a peaceful transfer of power when it is trump that I think of when I see resistance to the election decision. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18860 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18860 Wed, 06 Nov 2024 11:08:02 -0500 I think that trump doesn't use big words like Orwell said to do when writing but does ramble a little bit and that may be the way he masks his true meaning https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3358 https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3358 Tue, 10 Sep 2024 11:26:21 -0400