Comments by 2025 Owen Prince Most recent public comments by 2025 Owen Prince https://writingpartners.net/users/337 Very sad effect of light pollution https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40910 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40910 Tue, 18 Mar 2025 11:00:31 -0400 many human health effects as well as animals https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40909 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40909 Tue, 18 Mar 2025 11:00:00 -0400 ! https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40907 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40907 Tue, 18 Mar 2025 10:59:28 -0400 Highlights expanse of light pollution https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40905 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40905 Tue, 18 Mar 2025 10:58:43 -0400 Can cut visibility during the day https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40902 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40902 Tue, 18 Mar 2025 10:57:58 -0400 Light pollution can drift hundreds of miles https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40901 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40901 Tue, 18 Mar 2025 10:57:31 -0400 Highlights the beauty of a genuine night sky https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40899 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40899 Tue, 18 Mar 2025 10:56:33 -0400 The national park service has a Night sky team. https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40896 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6340?scroll_to=40896 Tue, 18 Mar 2025 10:55:56 -0400 Worth mentioning that its very doable to adjust business lighting. Ex) Harmons https://writingpartners.net/documents/6170?scroll_to=40541 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6170?scroll_to=40541 Thu, 13 Mar 2025 10:48:01 -0400 ^ https://writingpartners.net/documents/6170?scroll_to=40539 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6170?scroll_to=40539 Thu, 13 Mar 2025 10:47:13 -0400 Definitely worth researching https://writingpartners.net/documents/6170?scroll_to=40537 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6170?scroll_to=40537 Thu, 13 Mar 2025 10:47:03 -0400 Establishes negative health effects on humans https://writingpartners.net/documents/6170?scroll_to=40535 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6170?scroll_to=40535 Thu, 13 Mar 2025 10:46:50 -0400 Could research this further https://writingpartners.net/documents/6166?scroll_to=40527 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6166?scroll_to=40527 Thu, 13 Mar 2025 10:43:43 -0400 Took advantage of the publicity to further a solution https://writingpartners.net/documents/6166?scroll_to=40525 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6166?scroll_to=40525 Thu, 13 Mar 2025 10:42:54 -0400 Describes level of impact https://writingpartners.net/documents/6166?scroll_to=40524 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6166?scroll_to=40524 Thu, 13 Mar 2025 10:42:30 -0400 These are effective solutions that we can implement on a individual level. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5635?scroll_to=39364 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5635?scroll_to=39364 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 16:26:47 -0500 Explains in a detailed fashion the effects on birds. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5635?scroll_to=39363 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5635?scroll_to=39363 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 16:26:23 -0500 explains the degree to which we are upsetting the age old ecosystem https://writingpartners.net/documents/5635?scroll_to=39362 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5635?scroll_to=39362 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 16:25:33 -0500 Definition https://writingpartners.net/documents/5635?scroll_to=39361 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5635?scroll_to=39361 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 16:25:03 -0500 How can this initiative help us https://writingpartners.net/documents/5634?scroll_to=39359 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5634?scroll_to=39359 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 16:24:33 -0500 Key negative impacts https://writingpartners.net/documents/5634?scroll_to=39358 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5634?scroll_to=39358 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 16:24:16 -0500 Establishes monetary reasons for addressing the issue. Unfortunately this will motivate much more than other ones https://writingpartners.net/documents/5628?scroll_to=39353 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5628?scroll_to=39353 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 16:20:38 -0500 The U of U, which surrounds much of my personal area, is making progress with the issue. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5628?scroll_to=39352 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5628?scroll_to=39352 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 16:19:53 -0500 Author establishes credibility https://writingpartners.net/documents/5628?scroll_to=39351 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5628?scroll_to=39351 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 16:19:02 -0500 Key vocab https://writingpartners.net/documents/5628?scroll_to=39350 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5628?scroll_to=39350 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 16:18:36 -0500 Highlights effects of light pollution https://writingpartners.net/documents/5628?scroll_to=39349 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5628?scroll_to=39349 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 16:18:05 -0500 Points out the lack of government involvement with the issue. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5628?scroll_to=39348 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5628?scroll_to=39348 Thu, 06 Mar 2025 16:17:49 -0500 Predicts speech will be reduced to much fewer words. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35896 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35896 This is wrong as we have continuously gained words throughout history. https://premium.oxforddictionaries.com/us/words/how-have-dictionaries-changed-over-the-years Tue, 04 Feb 2025 11:04:05 -0500 Pretty obvious foreshadowing that his future is grim. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35895 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35895 Tue, 04 Feb 2025 10:08:22 -0500 he is now taking leap towards his goals. Finally doing something past thoughtcrime. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35894 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35894 Tue, 04 Feb 2025 10:07:58 -0500 If I remember correctly, this is what Syme was most excited about. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35893 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35893 Tue, 04 Feb 2025 10:06:49 -0500 Winston has a heart,and misses his friends. this is uncommon in this society https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35892 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35892 Tue, 04 Feb 2025 10:05:25 -0500 O brien is very reassuring and a guiding figure for Winston https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35891 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35891 Tue, 04 Feb 2025 10:02:47 -0500 is there any way i could make it better https://writingpartners.net/documents/4037?scroll_to=32669 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4037?scroll_to=32669 I'm glad you're seeking ways to improve your essay! Let's focus on your thesis and structure. You've made great points about Sonia Sotomayor's use of anecdotes and emotional diction, but ensure that your thesis clearly states your argument about how these rhetorical choices convey her message about identity. A strong thesis sets the tone for your entire essay and guides your analysis. Would you like to dive deeper into refining your thesis, explore how to make your analysis more cohesive, or focus on enhancing the discussion of Sotomayor's ethos and credibility? Feel free to choose one or more topics, or suggest another area you want to improve. Let's take your essay to the next level! Revise or edit your writing right now. If this is your document, click on a sentence or a paragraph number in the left panel, then hit *Edit*, make your changes, and hit *Update*. You can also hit *Suggest Revision* on a document that you have been invited to. Another option is to hit *Add to Document*, and then you can add *New Content* for deeper, multi-paragraph rewrites. Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Thu, 16 Jan 2025 16:23:55 -0500 How well did I explain the evidence I used to support my line of reasoning? https://writingpartners.net/documents/4037?scroll_to=32654 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4037?scroll_to=32654 You did a commendable job explaining your evidence to support your line of reasoning. You effectively highlighted how Sonia Sotomayor uses specific anecdotes and emotional diction to convey her connection to her Latina identity. Your analysis of her childhood memories, such as playing at her grandmother's house, clearly illustrates how these experiences shaped her personal identity. Additionally, you emphasized how her choice of words, like describing her identity as "wonderful" and "magical," underscores her deep emotional connection to her culture. These insights demonstrate a solid grasp of the rhetorical choices made by Sotomayor in her speech. Would you like more feedback on how you structured your analysis, insights into how to deepen your explanation of Sotomayor's ethos, or suggestions for enhancing the connection between your evidence and your thesis? Perhaps you'd like a mix of these topics or have another area in mind. Let me know where you'd like to focus next to elevate your analysis further! Revise or edit your writing right now. If this is your document, click on a sentence or a paragraph number in the left panel, then hit *Edit*, make your changes, and hit *Update*. You can also hit *Suggest Revision* on a document that you have been invited to. 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Thu, 16 Jan 2025 16:23:55 -0500 That is a lot of bits https://writingpartners.net/documents/3351?scroll_to=25527 https://writingpartners.net/documents/3351?scroll_to=25527 Tue, 03 Dec 2024 11:19:35 -0500 This is intriguing as thus far, I have viewed them as simply having different uses and specialities. https://writingpartners.net/documents/3351?scroll_to=25521 https://writingpartners.net/documents/3351?scroll_to=25521 Tue, 03 Dec 2024 11:16:48 -0500 Quantum computing seems like it could streamline many services and tasks that typically are very strenuous. https://writingpartners.net/documents/3351?scroll_to=25519 https://writingpartners.net/documents/3351?scroll_to=25519 Tue, 03 Dec 2024 11:15:56 -0500 I don't think Harris does this very much either. She is quite clear with her points. https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3334 https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3334 Tue, 10 Sep 2024 11:17:01 -0400 I think Trump does not utilize these things Orwell talked about that much. He is blunt and clear in his points. https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3326 https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3326 Tue, 10 Sep 2024 11:14:20 -0400