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      <title>Incorrect prediction</title>
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      <description>Although language has definitely changed over the last century, I would argue it has in no way changed to narrow our range of thought and although works like Shakespeare use different language than we do today, they still hold the same meaning and message.
https://www.languagewire.com/en/blog/how-language-evolves
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      <pubDate>Thu, 06 Feb 2025 10:23:17 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Denial/Brainwash</title>
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      <description>This is an example of how propaganda has clearly disillusioned a large portion of the population. Parsons seems to be convinced the Ministry has been successful over the year, yet he does not have access to necessities such as a razor blade.</description>
      <pubDate>Wed, 22 Jan 2025 00:06:34 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Orthodoxy has no room for self expression</title>
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      <description>In this passage, Winston is disinterested in what this man is saying because he knows the orthodox ideology of Big Brother has no room for interpretation and will always be identical to what the government propagates.</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 21 Jan 2025 23:57:59 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Removing nuance from language </title>
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      <description>This seems to me like an attempt to make language  more black and white and objective, instead of nuanced and subjective with a variety of ways to interpret. This reminds me of what the Trump administration has said about the existence of only two genders, instead of respecting the individuality and differences we have in the US.</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 21 Jan 2025 23:51:03 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Supressing ideas/words the government doesn't align with</title>
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      <description>This seems like it could be another way for Big Brother to moderate difference of opinions through the control of the language used in this new speak.</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 21 Jan 2025 23:45:54 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>How well did I respond to the prompt with a thesis that analyzes the writer&#8217;s rhetorical choices?
How well did I explain the evidence I used to support my line of reasoning?
How well does my essay demonstrate an understanding of the rhetorical situation?</title>
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      <description>Let's dive into this piece together and see how well it responds to the prompt by analyzing the rhetorical choices made by Sonia Sotomayor. First off, let's consider how well the thesis is constructed. It seems your thesis centers around the idea that Sonia Sotomayor uses personal experiences and political ideas to convey a powerful message about cultural identity. This is a solid foundation for your analysis, as it sets up an exploration of how her personal narrative and political context intertwine to form her argument. Do you feel this thesis effectively captures the essence of Sotomayor's rhetorical strategy? Want to see more about how the evidence supports this thesis?</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 16 Jan 2025 16:19:39 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>is this accurate to his speech</title>
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      <description>Let's dive into the accuracy of former President Donald Trump's speech and his understanding of the separation between church and state. Trump has often blurred the lines between religious and governmental roles, which raises several questions about his interpretation of this foundational principle.

Would you like to see more?</description>
      <pubDate>Mon, 23 Sep 2024 13:29:31 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Trump does not seem to have a clear idea of what the separation between church and state should look like in the federal government and makes multiple questionable points regarding that in this video</title>
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      <pubDate>Mon, 23 Sep 2024 13:29:31 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Kamala makes a lot of promises here but at least she seems to have a clear vision for the country's future and how to better and solve the social issues of today</title>
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      <pubDate>Mon, 23 Sep 2024 13:25:36 -0400</pubDate>
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