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      <title>Is this true?</title>
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&lt;li&gt;Yes, that reading makes sense: the passage stacks up deaths, aging, and being forgotten to show that many years have passed.&lt;/li&gt;
&lt;li&gt;The pigs standing out as still active matters because it makes the farm feel stuck under the same kind of power, even while almost everyone else has faded.&lt;/li&gt;
&lt;li&gt;There is one small limit on your claim: not only the pigs survive here, because Clover and Benjamin are still alive too.&lt;/li&gt;
&lt;li&gt;So a tighter version of your idea would notice both things at once: a long stretch of time has passed, and the pigs still hold the center of control while most others are gone.&lt;/li&gt;
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That looks like a solid, good-enough reading of the passage for now; if you want, click &lt;i&gt;Your Thoughts&lt;/i&gt; and write one sentence about why Orwell lists the dead animals first, or choose either &lt;i&gt;Continue with AI&lt;/i&gt; or &lt;a href=&quot;https://writingpartners.net/documents/new&quot; target=&quot;_blank&quot;&gt;Create Document&lt;/a&gt; to keep working&#8212;what do you think Orwell wants you to feel when the pigs are still powerful after all that time?
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      <pubDate>Wed, 18 Mar 2026 12:17:45 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>But you also have to know when to stop and rest.</title>
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      <pubDate>Wed, 18 Mar 2026 12:16:07 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>Is this true?</title>
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  &lt;li&gt;It has a dramatic, praise-heavy style, so the comparison makes sense at first glance, but it is not actually Shakespeare.&lt;/li&gt;
  &lt;li&gt;This passage is from George Orwell&#8217;s &lt;i&gt;Animal Farm&lt;/i&gt;, in the poem praising Napoleon, and it is written to sound grand and exaggerated on purpose.&lt;/li&gt;
  &lt;li&gt;The effect is closer to a mock-ode or parody of elevated poetry than to an actual Shakespeare passage.&lt;/li&gt;
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If you click &lt;i&gt;Your Thoughts&lt;/i&gt;, what 1&#8211;2 words in the passage make it feel old, theatrical, or over-the-top to you&#8212;or would you rather click &lt;i&gt;Continue with AI&lt;/i&gt; or go to &lt;a href=&quot;https://writingpartners.net/documents/new&quot; target=&quot;_blank&quot;&gt;Create Document&lt;/a&gt; to upload a source to read and annotate or to start writing?
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      <pubDate>Wed, 18 Mar 2026 12:06:11 -0400</pubDate>
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      <title>I wonder how long they can take this.</title>
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      <pubDate>Wed, 18 Mar 2026 12:04:26 -0400</pubDate>
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