Comments by 2025 Ella Still Most recent public comments by 2025 Ella Still https://writingpartners.net/users/354 Consequences of lack of Health Literacy https://writingpartners.net/documents/5715?scroll_to=40643 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5715?scroll_to=40643 When a patient does not comprehend the medicine, they may lack the ability to make good choices for themselves, in the hospital and in their everyday lives, leading to poor health outcomes. Thu, 13 Mar 2025 12:29:56 -0400 Role of Doctors in Health Literacy https://writingpartners.net/documents/5715?scroll_to=40642 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5715?scroll_to=40642 Doctors can help patients understand the medicine and empower them to make their own, well informed decisions. Thu, 13 Mar 2025 12:28:54 -0400 Patient Empowerment https://writingpartners.net/documents/5715?scroll_to=40639 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5715?scroll_to=40639 In healthcare settings, patients make their own decisions, but it is essential that they understand what is happening. Thus, the need for health literacy rises substantially. Thu, 13 Mar 2025 12:28:10 -0400 Importance of health literacy https://writingpartners.net/documents/5715?scroll_to=40635 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5715?scroll_to=40635 As medicine advances and at home DIY remedies continue to expand, it is vital that patients know how to read medical information on the internet. Thu, 13 Mar 2025 12:26:51 -0400 Corrections https://writingpartners.net/documents/5715?scroll_to=38360 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5715?scroll_to=38360 Many people correct misinformation but by doing so, put further false information out there. Fri, 28 Feb 2025 13:56:52 -0500 Social Media/Google/etc https://writingpartners.net/documents/5715?scroll_to=38358 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5715?scroll_to=38358 The frequent exposure to various perspectives, information, studies, and healthcare professionals of various accuracy is dangerous. Fri, 28 Feb 2025 13:56:19 -0500 Reading Level https://writingpartners.net/documents/5240?scroll_to=37339 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5240?scroll_to=37339 Medical information should be written at a comprehensible reading level, so that the average audience is able to understand (if being published onto the internet). Fri, 21 Feb 2025 13:15:19 -0500 Variability of information https://writingpartners.net/documents/5240?scroll_to=37333 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5240?scroll_to=37333 You can find a wide variety of answers on the internet from accurate to incorrect. Our teachers and educators should be knowledgable about the most up-to date information. Fri, 21 Feb 2025 13:14:24 -0500 Intended Audience https://writingpartners.net/documents/5240?scroll_to=37325 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5240?scroll_to=37325 When looking for answers and information about medicine and personal health, the average audience tends to want simplistic and straightforward answers while scientists and doctors are more drawn to clinical studies and cases. Fri, 21 Feb 2025 13:12:17 -0500 Orwell's Prediction https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=36008 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=36008 Orwell predicts that there will be constant surveillance that can even detect a glance of the eyes or movement of the lips. He is incorrect that the government will use this technology to this extent; however, he is correct in his prediction that we have the technology to do so. This is used in places like casinos where gambling surveillance is used. https://www.aclu.org/documents/whats-wrong-public-video-surveillance Tue, 04 Feb 2025 12:27:15 -0500 Julia is resourceful, mentally and in the real world. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35167 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35167 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 12:24:45 -0500 Julia's optimism. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35166 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35166 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 12:24:19 -0500 Julia is looking for happiness and doesn't look to deep into the idea that that's impossible, Winston is more realistic. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35165 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35165 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 12:24:03 -0500 People commit suicide to avoid arrest. Julia is a rule breaker and adventurous. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35163 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35163 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 12:22:16 -0500 He thinks that men are more vulnerable to corruption due to their uncontrollable sex instincts. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35161 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35161 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 12:21:33 -0500 Her lack of memories is so surprising. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35158 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35158 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 12:20:44 -0500 It's crazy that even a mere conversation or a glance can give them away. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35156 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35156 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 12:20:20 -0500 They are meeting in secret in blind sight. They are interacting in the streets. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35155 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35155 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 12:19:32 -0500 They are fighting for their survival but also indulging in each others company because it would be impossible for them to interact inside. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35152 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35152 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 12:18:40 -0500 The media sources are different from each other in that they give insight and comments based on their political tendencies. Each are still providing live updates on the presidential election. They have target audiences based on the issues they focus on. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=19365 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=19365 Sat, 09 Nov 2024 15:39:05 -0500 All the swing states voted for Trump. This was a crucial event in the movement of the election. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=19364 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=19364 Sat, 09 Nov 2024 15:35:01 -0500 Matthew states that no matter who wins presidency, their agenda will depend on who controls Congress. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=19363 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=19363 Sat, 09 Nov 2024 15:31:11 -0500 Communicating with stories is very effective. She tells many stories about her life leading to where she is today in order to help her audience understand her values and from which they are derived. https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=4701 https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=4701 Wed, 11 Sep 2024 15:08:39 -0400 Both candidates start their speeches with euphamisms. This helps to hook the audience. https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=4700 https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=4700 Wed, 11 Sep 2024 15:04:43 -0400 Harris's speech is intentionally very relatable. Citizens from many classes can find inspiration, especially the working class which she refers to several times. https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3398 https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3398 Tue, 10 Sep 2024 12:59:33 -0400