Comments by 2025 Malen Semerad Most recent public comments by 2025 Malen Semerad https://writingpartners.net/users/359 Now this is interesting, I hadn't ever thought about AI reviews https://writingpartners.net/documents/5926?scroll_to=39904 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5926?scroll_to=39904 Fri, 07 Mar 2025 13:46:08 -0500 Very relatable https://writingpartners.net/documents/5926?scroll_to=39902 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5926?scroll_to=39902 Fri, 07 Mar 2025 13:45:35 -0500 Key ideas on how to better your chances in getting accepted https://writingpartners.net/documents/5926?scroll_to=39901 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5926?scroll_to=39901 Fri, 07 Mar 2025 13:45:15 -0500 Application numbers are increasing https://writingpartners.net/documents/5926?scroll_to=39900 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5926?scroll_to=39900 Fri, 07 Mar 2025 13:44:51 -0500 This is perhaps the most important few sentences of the whole article. It gives you as a reader an up-front view into what they are gonna read about https://writingpartners.net/documents/5926?scroll_to=39898 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5926?scroll_to=39898 Fri, 07 Mar 2025 13:43:44 -0500 demographics of students applying for college vary, not maintaining straight-lined predictions of increased college application numbers from 2007 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5533?scroll_to=37836 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5533?scroll_to=37836 Wed, 26 Feb 2025 11:56:40 -0500 college admission rates are actually lower than it was in 2012 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5533?scroll_to=37832 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5533?scroll_to=37832 Wed, 26 Feb 2025 11:55:18 -0500 cite - “The BABY BOOM ECHO.” Diverse: Issues In Higher Education, Apr. 2008, https://www.diverseeducation.com/institutions/community-colleges/article/15087069/the-baby-boom-echo. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5242?scroll_to=37359 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5242?scroll_to=37359 Fri, 21 Feb 2025 13:19:21 -0500 This quote demonstrates so of the biases with aid and also that aid is necessary to and increased number of students https://writingpartners.net/documents/5242?scroll_to=37352 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5242?scroll_to=37352 Fri, 21 Feb 2025 13:17:54 -0500 this is gonna be the main focus of my research, How do we deal with continuing increases in college apllicanties https://writingpartners.net/documents/5242?scroll_to=37347 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5242?scroll_to=37347 Fri, 21 Feb 2025 13:16:40 -0500 Specific to 2007, there was an increase https://writingpartners.net/documents/5242?scroll_to=37343 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5242?scroll_to=37343 Fri, 21 Feb 2025 13:15:50 -0500 Increase in number of college applicants https://writingpartners.net/documents/5242?scroll_to=37340 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5242?scroll_to=37340 Fri, 21 Feb 2025 13:15:20 -0500 The spike in 2007 was only in 2007 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4985?scroll_to=36635 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4985?scroll_to=36635 Tue, 11 Feb 2025 12:57:04 -0500 Personally, this reality of not having enough counseling staff has become true. Although for many of my colleges the attention to me as a student has been adequate. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4985?scroll_to=36631 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4985?scroll_to=36631 Tue, 11 Feb 2025 12:56:32 -0500 Colleges need to be ready to accommodate this class and meet needs emotionally and financially https://writingpartners.net/documents/4985?scroll_to=36626 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4985?scroll_to=36626 Tue, 11 Feb 2025 12:55:27 -0500 Predicted in 2015, trends in birth rates and diversification graphs show that this year will have the largest college application number up to this point https://writingpartners.net/documents/4985?scroll_to=36622 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4985?scroll_to=36622 Tue, 11 Feb 2025 12:54:19 -0500 Orwell has predicted that the dictionary and language as a whole would shrink. I disagree with his prediction as the dictionary has expanded every year.https://premium.oxforddictionaries.com/us/words/how-have-dictionaries-changed-over-the-years https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=36001 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=36001 Tue, 04 Feb 2025 12:23:20 -0500 the newspeak dictionary is constantly getting smaller https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35959 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35959 Tue, 04 Feb 2025 12:06:03 -0500 winston has moved passed the act of thoughtcrime https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35954 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35954 Tue, 04 Feb 2025 12:05:00 -0500 there seems to be a lack of care as far as being watched by the telescreen https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35953 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35953 Tue, 04 Feb 2025 12:04:07 -0500 this shows the continued reduction of language in the form of newspeak https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35951 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35951 Tue, 04 Feb 2025 12:03:09 -0500 obrien is a figure that seems to carry a deeper friendship with winston https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35949 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35949 Tue, 04 Feb 2025 12:01:37 -0500 what specific tools can I use to further explain my evidence https://writingpartners.net/documents/4064?scroll_to=32864 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4064?scroll_to=32864 You've laid a solid foundation by identifying Rita Dove's personal anecdotes and advanced diction as key rhetorical choices. Your analysis of Dove's personal stories, like her Pulitzer Prize win and tenure as a professor, effectively highlights how they bolster her credibility. Consider diving deeper into the "150% prepared" anecdote to show how it directly imparts a lesson to the graduates on preparedness and resilience. Additionally, your mention of advanced vocabulary lends itself well to discussing how Dove's language respects and elevates her audience, bridging a connection between speaker and listener. However, probing into how these combined choices contribute to Dove’s overarching message of empowerment could deepen your analysis. What insights or connections about Dove’s rhetorical strategies do you seek to explore further? Would you like to discuss the role of ethos in her speech, extend your analysis to include more examples, or explore another rhetorical device used by Dove? Let’s dive in! Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Fri, 17 Jan 2025 13:49:42 -0500 How well does my essay demonstrate an understanding of the rhetorical situation? https://writingpartners.net/documents/4064?scroll_to=32851 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4064?scroll_to=32851 Your essay demonstrates a good understanding of the rhetorical situation by highlighting Rita Dove’s strategic use of personal historical anecdotes and sophisticated diction to connect with her audience. You effectively illustrate how her achievements, such as the Pulitzer Prize, add credibility and weight to her wishes for success and hard work. Your analysis of Dove's advanced vocabulary and references, like "a cloud of gossamer" and Percy Bysshe Shelley, showcases her respect for the graduates’ intellect, fostering a shared respect and mutual understanding. To further enrich your analysis, consider more deeply examining how Dove’s use of personal stories empowers graduates with a sense of agency. You could also explore how the specific rhetorical choices align with the themes of uncertainty and perseverance. Would you like to delve into how Dove's humorous approach affects tone, discuss more on ethos, or explore the nuance of her “wishes”? Let me know your path, or blaze a new trail! Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Fri, 17 Jan 2025 13:47:33 -0500 How well did I explain the evidence I used to support my line of reasoning? https://writingpartners.net/documents/4064?scroll_to=32847 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4064?scroll_to=32847 You've laid a solid foundation by identifying Rita Dove's personal anecdotes and advanced diction as key rhetorical choices. Your analysis of Dove's personal stories, like her Pulitzer Prize win and tenure as a professor, effectively highlights how they bolster her credibility. Consider diving deeper into the "150% prepared" anecdote to show how it directly imparts a lesson to the graduates on preparedness and resilience. Additionally, your mention of advanced vocabulary lends itself well to discussing how Dove's language respects and elevates her audience, bridging a connection between speaker and listener. However, probing into how these combined choices contribute to Dove’s overarching message of empowerment could deepen your analysis. What insights or connections about Dove’s rhetorical strategies do you seek to explore further? Would you like to discuss the role of ethos in her speech, extend your analysis to include more examples, or explore another rhetorical device used by Dove? Let’s dive in! Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Fri, 17 Jan 2025 13:49:42 -0500 How well did I respond to the prompt with a thesis that analyzes the writer’s rhetorical choices? https://writingpartners.net/documents/4064?scroll_to=32835 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4064?scroll_to=32835 Your thesis does a good job pinpointing key rhetorical choices Rita Dove makes, such as personal historical appeals and diction, to give impactful advice to graduates. You successfully support this claim by discussing how Dove's achievements and vocabulary bolster her message, aligning with the goal of your rhetorical analysis. However, to enhance your analysis, consider more explicitly connecting each rhetorical choice you discuss to Dove’s overall purpose and the impact on her audience. For instance, while you highlight the credibility aimed through personal anecdotes, ensure you're connecting how these anecdotes specifically empower or inspire her audience. Also, when addressing her diction and references, you might delve deeper into how these create ethos or resonate with her audience. Think about where else you might take your analysis! You could further explore contrast and definitions Dove uses, examine additional rhetorical appeals like pathos or logos, or discuss the speech’s organizational pattern. Intrigued? Let’s dive in! Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Fri, 17 Jan 2025 13:46:20 -0500 This loss of thought I find to be significant as Winston is one of the Brotherhood's greatest minds. He is trying to grapple the situation of the world in which he lives in https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=32336 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=32336 Tue, 14 Jan 2025 13:02:39 -0500 the position of the telescreen seems oddly important. I wouldn't mention it as an author unless it was significant https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=32335 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=32335 Tue, 14 Jan 2025 13:01:44 -0500 the party or the over arching power in the book is controlling and undiplomatic https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=32334 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=32334 Tue, 14 Jan 2025 13:00:45 -0500 This is a statement that summarizes the fear the society has! It is truly crazy how controlling the party is https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=32333 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=32333 Tue, 14 Jan 2025 12:59:31 -0500 Come back to this https://writingpartners.net/documents/3369?scroll_to=25581 https://writingpartners.net/documents/3369?scroll_to=25581 Tue, 03 Dec 2024 12:40:47 -0500 This to me is the best form of efficiency. https://writingpartners.net/documents/3369?scroll_to=25580 https://writingpartners.net/documents/3369?scroll_to=25580 Tue, 03 Dec 2024 12:40:27 -0500 Again, a very important point. This definition is a universal one, seen on urban dictionary https://writingpartners.net/documents/3369?scroll_to=25571 https://writingpartners.net/documents/3369?scroll_to=25571 Tue, 03 Dec 2024 12:36:36 -0500 This is the prime idea of the article. Citizens want their government to take care of them. https://writingpartners.net/documents/3369?scroll_to=25569 https://writingpartners.net/documents/3369?scroll_to=25569 Tue, 03 Dec 2024 12:35:57 -0500 Trump at this time in his speech is talking abut border control and the admitting of illegal immigrants into the country. This relates to Orwell because he talked about being spoken for and not forming your own political views. https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3404 https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3404 Tue, 10 Sep 2024 13:00:45 -0400 This section of the speech that Harris is giving relates to Orwell because he talks about the influence of language. Kamala's mom taught her the value of hard work and she cites the language her mother used. The likely formed some of her political ideals. https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3394 https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3394 Tue, 10 Sep 2024 12:59:00 -0400