Most recent public comments by Alton Griffin https://writingpartners.net/users/3592 https://writingpartners.net/documents/10133?scroll_to=56412 https://writingpartners.net/documents/10133?scroll_to=56412 I wonder why the author throws in a paragraph of Amina's diary at the end of each chapter; like this one. I think that the author is including different paragraphs of Amina's diary as the story progresses each chapter primarily to provide more context as to what the chapter was talking about; just as the paragraph at the end of chapter 19 was relevant to the text in the chapter. What I found interesting in this chapter is the sensory & figurative language involved. Thu, 19 Feb 2026 09:46:37 -0500