Comments by Khloe Williams Most recent public comments by Khloe Williams https://writingpartners.net/users/3593 something that stood out to me in chapter 18 was edris getting shot https://writingpartners.net/documents/10133?scroll_to=56406 https://writingpartners.net/documents/10133?scroll_to=56406 I wonder what was the beef and why did they shoot him? I think the person / people who shot him is gonna end up getting shot or killed Thu, 19 Feb 2026 09:34:07 -0500 In chapter 16, something that stood out to me was the thug life codes because the UPK members shall live and die by them https://writingpartners.net/documents/10133?scroll_to=56301 https://writingpartners.net/documents/10133?scroll_to=56301 I Wonder why did they give these codes? What I think will happen in the next chapter I think a member will obey or resist following the rules or one of the rules. Wed, 18 Feb 2026 11:32:30 -0500