Comments by 2025 Dylan Anderson Most recent public comments by 2025 Dylan Anderson https://writingpartners.net/users/362 Initial thoughts? https://writingpartners.net/documents/6442?scroll_to=41238 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6442?scroll_to=41238 This seems to be a WRITING project. Let's dive into your thoughts and notes to identify some potential inquiry topics for exploration. Here are five inquiry topics that you seem most interested in, based on your comments and notes: 1. **Impact of Tariffs on Consumer Goods Prices:** - Why are tariffs causing a significant increase in the prices of consumer goods? - This topic is interesting because it directly affects your personal finances and consumer behavior. You seem concerned about how tariffs drive up costs, as indicated by your notes: "Tariffs are also just increasing the price of goods and will continue to do so" and "Higher gas prices will affect almost everyone I know, including myself." 2. **Economic Consequences of Trade Wars:** - What are the broader economic consequences of the trade war initiated by Trump's tariffs? - This topic holds potential for exploration because it addresses the larger economic landscape and its impacts on various stakeholders, as you noted: "This is a problem in our country. everyone is divided into two or three groups with vary different opinions." 3. **Tariffs and Their Effect on International Relationships:** - How do tariffs affect the United States' relationships with its trading partners, such as Canada, Mexico, and China? - This is intriguing as it delves into international diplomacy and trade relations, something you touched on with: "It describes everything happening between Canada, Mexico, China, and the US and how each country is affecting each other." 4. **Role of Tariffs in Combating Illegal Drug Trade:** - Are tariffs an effective measure in slowing the flow of illegal drugs like fentanyl into the US? - Your interest in this topic is clear from your notes: "I have learned that tariffs aren't the best option, for slowing down the flow of fentanyl into the US." 5. **Personal Impacts of Economic Policies:** - How do current economic policies, like tariffs, personally affect young adults with limited financial resources? - This topic resonates personally with you, as seen in your reflection: "I am an 18-year-old boy, who doesn't by any means have unlimited money to buy things." Would you like to explore any of these inquiry questions further? Let me know if you want to see more or if you're ready to start writing about one of these topics! Sun, 23 Mar 2025 21:10:41 -0400 every other country retaliating and putting tariffs on the US is also not what we want in the slightest. espetially our 3 main trade partners https://writingpartners.net/documents/5935?scroll_to=40937 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5935?scroll_to=40937 Tue, 18 Mar 2025 12:28:05 -0400 what a president doesnt want to do is hurt American businesses, and that's exactly what trump appears to be doing. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5935?scroll_to=40934 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5935?scroll_to=40934 Tue, 18 Mar 2025 12:25:39 -0400 This is the opposite of what we want happening. This will only increase prices more and more. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5935?scroll_to=40933 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5935?scroll_to=40933 Tue, 18 Mar 2025 12:24:26 -0400 One way to combat this could be to find a solution to both the Russia-Ukraine war but also end the trade war that was just started by trump. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5532?scroll_to=40932 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5532?scroll_to=40932 Tue, 18 Mar 2025 12:23:23 -0400 This is a problem in our country. everyone is divided into two or three groups with vary different oppinions https://writingpartners.net/documents/5532?scroll_to=40931 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5532?scroll_to=40931 Tue, 18 Mar 2025 12:21:27 -0400 Summary https://writingpartners.net/documents/5925?scroll_to=39884 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5925?scroll_to=39884 This article talks about what Trump's tariffs are doing to goods ranging from produce to electronics and toys. It describes everything happening between Canada, Mexico, China, and the US and how each country is affecting each other. It talked about gas which is a particular concern for me. Fri, 07 Mar 2025 13:34:48 -0500 This is good news, as the prices won't rise too much more. The Avian flue is mostly responsible for that rise. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5925?scroll_to=39882 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5925?scroll_to=39882 Fri, 07 Mar 2025 13:32:19 -0500 This could be a smart move, as China is potentially going to invade Taiwan in the near future which could disrupt the production of electronics for all of us. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5925?scroll_to=39879 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5925?scroll_to=39879 Fri, 07 Mar 2025 13:30:07 -0500 I really enjoy avocados, so if they increase in price, that will be unfortunate. The US gets more than just avocados as well from Mexico. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5925?scroll_to=39878 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5925?scroll_to=39878 Fri, 07 Mar 2025 13:28:36 -0500 This could be a problem for many people, as gas is a necessity. Higher gas prices will affect almost everyone I know, including myself. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5925?scroll_to=39876 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5925?scroll_to=39876 Fri, 07 Mar 2025 13:25:41 -0500 Summary https://writingpartners.net/documents/5532?scroll_to=38340 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5532?scroll_to=38340 This article talks about how Trump is now receiving less support than he did before, as he is implementing tariffs that are doing more damage than they would help out, and the prices of goods are skyrocketing. It mentions how he is blaming Biden instead of taking partial responsibility. Fri, 28 Feb 2025 13:33:21 -0500 True, but I belive trump isnt going to help solve the war in any way. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5532?scroll_to=38287 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5532?scroll_to=38287 Fri, 28 Feb 2025 12:55:45 -0500 yes it is, and I hope he figure it out becasue its a big problem https://writingpartners.net/documents/5532?scroll_to=38282 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5532?scroll_to=38282 Fri, 28 Feb 2025 12:53:16 -0500 I think this isn't exactly correct. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5532?scroll_to=37841 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5532?scroll_to=37841 Wed, 26 Feb 2025 13:09:17 -0500 I didn't know they were souring, I thought it would be the opposite https://writingpartners.net/documents/5532?scroll_to=37837 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5532?scroll_to=37837 Wed, 26 Feb 2025 11:58:00 -0500 Summary https://writingpartners.net/documents/5239?scroll_to=37329 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5239?scroll_to=37329 This document is basically explaining how inflation works, what the current rates are, and what to expect in the future. Fri, 21 Feb 2025 13:13:23 -0500 This is a very interesting image showing interest rates in the 2000s https://writingpartners.net/documents/5239?scroll_to=37323 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5239?scroll_to=37323 Fri, 21 Feb 2025 13:11:38 -0500 53% is kind of wild, and I think that Tariffs are maybe a little responsible for this https://writingpartners.net/documents/5239?scroll_to=37321 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5239?scroll_to=37321 Fri, 21 Feb 2025 13:10:56 -0500 while that isn't as high as it has been, that rate is higher than it was in November https://writingpartners.net/documents/5239?scroll_to=37320 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5239?scroll_to=37320 Fri, 21 Feb 2025 13:09:36 -0500 Summary https://writingpartners.net/documents/4984?scroll_to=36845 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4984?scroll_to=36845 Trump's tariffs, are going to have a negative impact on the consumers. when you buy a good, its not China paying the tariff. Its the seller paying it which than increases the price of the good for you. Trump is doing this to slow fentanyl, but the crisis was already I decline. Thu, 13 Feb 2025 13:53:56 -0500 Wamsley, Laurel. “Here’s How Trump’s Tariffs Could Impact You and Your Wallet.” NPR, 5 Feb. 2025. NPR, https://www.npr.org/2025/02/05/nx-s1-5284991/trump-tariffs-higher-prices-inflation-mexico-canada-china. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4984?scroll_to=36654 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4984?scroll_to=36654 Tue, 11 Feb 2025 12:59:48 -0500 $2,700 per car is kind of outrageous https://writingpartners.net/documents/4984?scroll_to=36649 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4984?scroll_to=36649 Tue, 11 Feb 2025 12:58:39 -0500 This is something that I personally will have to deal with, as I love avocados https://writingpartners.net/documents/4984?scroll_to=36643 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4984?scroll_to=36643 Tue, 11 Feb 2025 12:58:05 -0500 I know for a fact that this will lead to the prices of goods going up as well. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4984?scroll_to=36628 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4984?scroll_to=36628 Tue, 11 Feb 2025 12:56:19 -0500 That's unfortunate that everyone in the US will be affected by these tariffs. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4984?scroll_to=36625 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4984?scroll_to=36625 Tue, 11 Feb 2025 12:55:19 -0500 Orwell predicts a group of people who plan to fight against the state and revolt. This comes true in a way, like, for example, on January 6th when a big group of people stormed the capital because they believed the election was rigged + they were cheated. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=36010 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=36010 https://americanoversight.org/investigation/the-january-6-attack-on-the-u-s-capitol/ Tue, 04 Feb 2025 12:27:55 -0500 I feel like this is how many people in our country are. They don't know about certain problems so they don't care enough to do anything. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35222 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35222 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 22:38:39 -0500 This is very similar to Earth. There never seems to be a time when no conflict is happening somewhere on the planet. This is happening in a smaller region though. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35221 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35221 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 22:36:05 -0500 This is somewhat similar to Romeo and Juliet. It's under different circumstances, but the idea of two lovers committing suicide because of passionate love and to escape something. The Dystopian society could be compared to feuding families. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35220 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35220 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 22:31:40 -0500 This reminds me of the looting that takes place during times of civil unrest and protest. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35219 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35219 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 22:24:19 -0500 can you go more into detail about how I should explain how these contribute to her aims https://writingpartners.net/documents/4074?scroll_to=32979 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4074?scroll_to=32979 Your essay effectively demonstrates an understanding of the rhetorical situation in Rita Dove’s speech by analyzing her use of emotional appeal, anecdotes, and informal language. You've highlighted Dove's emotional connection to the audience with lines like "this is personal," showing how this appeals to the listeners' emotions. You did well in identifying anecdotes, such as conversations with students and her father's advice, illustrating how these personal stories make Dove relatable and trustworthy. However, while you mention rhetorical techniques, delve more into how these choices tie back to Dove’s overall message and purpose. Provide deeper insight into how humor and informality, like "I googled it," enhance her relatability and engagement with the audience. Explain how these contribute to her aims: inspiring hunger, hard work, and embracing uncertainty. What would you like to know more about? Should we explore how to enhance connections to Dove's message, strengthen analysis of informal language, or suggest more precise textual evidence? Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Sun, 19 Jan 2025 10:51:50 -0500 How well does my essay demonstrate an understanding of the rhetorical situation? https://writingpartners.net/documents/4074?scroll_to=32905 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4074?scroll_to=32905 Your essay effectively demonstrates an understanding of the rhetorical situation in Rita Dove’s speech by analyzing her use of emotional appeal, anecdotes, and informal language. You've highlighted Dove's emotional connection to the audience with lines like "this is personal," showing how this appeals to the listeners' emotions. You did well in identifying anecdotes, such as conversations with students and her father's advice, illustrating how these personal stories make Dove relatable and trustworthy. However, while you mention rhetorical techniques, delve more into how these choices tie back to Dove’s overall message and purpose. Provide deeper insight into how humor and informality, like "I googled it," enhance her relatability and engagement with the audience. Explain how these contribute to her aims: inspiring hunger, hard work, and embracing uncertainty. What would you like to know more about? Should we explore how to enhance connections to Dove's message, strengthen analysis of informal language, or suggest more precise textual evidence? Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Sun, 19 Jan 2025 10:51:50 -0500 Compound https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31947 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31947 This kind of thing reminds me of the white house in a way. Far more tyrannical feeling and being locked up, but the same in that both are compounds, that arent easy to enter. Sun, 12 Jan 2025 15:14:05 -0500 Pyramids https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31946 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31946 This reminds me of what the Pyramids in Egypt are said to have looked like when they were first built: all white with gold scattered around. Sun, 12 Jan 2025 15:09:03 -0500 Memory https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31944 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31944 Is this due to a lack of memory or a coping method to forget it because it was so bad? Sun, 12 Jan 2025 15:02:59 -0500 Propoganda https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31942 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31942 This reminds me of the show, The Silo. In which a society lives under the control of a dictative leadership, and propaganda is present throughout their society. Sun, 12 Jan 2025 14:56:03 -0500 very important, without the snow Utah might not be able to thrive https://writingpartners.net/documents/3391?scroll_to=25631 https://writingpartners.net/documents/3391?scroll_to=25631 Tue, 03 Dec 2024 12:50:41 -0500 This is music to my ears. I just adore winter and snow in general. Like its genuinely my favorite season. https://writingpartners.net/documents/3391?scroll_to=25626 https://writingpartners.net/documents/3391?scroll_to=25626 Tue, 03 Dec 2024 12:50:02 -0500 I wish the snow would come all winter heavily instead of just after the new year https://writingpartners.net/documents/3391?scroll_to=25608 https://writingpartners.net/documents/3391?scroll_to=25608 Tue, 03 Dec 2024 12:46:28 -0500 that is good news for us this year. https://writingpartners.net/documents/3391?scroll_to=25598 https://writingpartners.net/documents/3391?scroll_to=25598 Tue, 03 Dec 2024 12:44:09 -0500 To be more relatable to the general population, Kamala uses clear and concise words when talking about her family and upbringing. This also makes her more "humanlike". https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3396 https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3396 Tue, 10 Sep 2024 12:59:27 -0400 This thought uses clear and concise words, but it could be seen as a euphemism, due to his views that greatly contrast some democrat's views. https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3385 https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3385 Tue, 10 Sep 2024 12:57:14 -0400