Comments by 2025 Belinda Hernandez- Padilla Most recent public comments by 2025 Belinda Hernandez- Padilla https://writingpartners.net/users/365 Educating more people https://writingpartners.net/documents/5953?scroll_to=40005 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5953?scroll_to=40005 Mon, 10 Mar 2025 00:38:32 -0400 training that drug manufacturers are required to make available to prescribers. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5953?scroll_to=40004 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5953?scroll_to=40004 Mon, 10 Mar 2025 00:38:06 -0400 BLUEPRINT https://writingpartners.net/documents/5953?scroll_to=40003 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5953?scroll_to=40003 Mon, 10 Mar 2025 00:36:08 -0400 Opioids should not be our first option https://writingpartners.net/documents/5953?scroll_to=40002 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5953?scroll_to=40002 Mon, 10 Mar 2025 00:35:51 -0400 durations of use! https://writingpartners.net/documents/5953?scroll_to=40001 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5953?scroll_to=40001 Mon, 10 Mar 2025 00:35:24 -0400 40 people dying everyday https://writingpartners.net/documents/5953?scroll_to=40000 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5953?scroll_to=40000 Mon, 10 Mar 2025 00:34:45 -0400 I also think it would be a good idea to look into what medications are prescribed within each disease https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=38503 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=38503 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:59:51 -0500 How far are we really from making this a reality? https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=38502 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=38502 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:58:40 -0500 Can medications be the ones leading to these heart failure deaths? https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=38501 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=38501 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:58:10 -0500 I think it would be good to go into a deep dive on what medications older people are most commonly prescribed https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=38500 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=38500 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:57:36 -0500 75% of older adults!!! https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=38499 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=38499 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:56:33 -0500 Learn more about naloxone https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38498 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38498 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:43:31 -0500 I can try to get more information about pill mills https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38497 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38497 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:42:55 -0500 I can talk about the difference between men and women https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38496 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38496 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:42:17 -0500 It would be great to touch upon specific drugs used. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38495 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38495 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:41:37 -0500 ooooo it would be great to touch upon the amount of money the U.S spends on medication and then helping those who get addicted https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38494 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38494 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:40:50 -0500 I mean it's quite obvious where everything starts.... prescribed medication https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38493 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38493 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:39:56 -0500 More overdose deaths than heroin and cocaine combined!!!!! https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38492 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38492 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:39:20 -0500 Crazy to think that a drug that was to help you feel better then led to heroin use https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38491 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38491 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:38:07 -0500 Abuse of drugs is so huge! How do people get hold of these?? https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38490 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38490 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:37:28 -0500 Another good statistic https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38489 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38489 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:37:03 -0500 I really want to emphasize on opiods since they are the causing factor https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38488 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38488 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:36:37 -0500 Good statistic https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38487 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5778?scroll_to=38487 Sun, 02 Mar 2025 22:36:06 -0500 66 million doctors’ appointments. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37454 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37454 Sun, 23 Feb 2025 22:23:04 -0500 Valium, Xanax, Klonopin, and Ativan, https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37453 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37453 Sun, 23 Feb 2025 22:22:46 -0500 tolerance increasingly develops to the pain reduction effects of these drugs https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37452 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37452 Sun, 23 Feb 2025 22:22:33 -0500 83.1% of the global volume of ADHD medications in circulation. https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37451 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37451 Sun, 23 Feb 2025 22:21:42 -0500 Stimulants- high prescribed drug https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37450 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37450 Sun, 23 Feb 2025 22:18:23 -0500 Opioids- high prescribed drug https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37449 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37449 Sun, 23 Feb 2025 22:18:08 -0500 Benzodiazepines- high prescribed drug https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37448 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37448 Sun, 23 Feb 2025 22:17:57 -0500 Antibiotics- high prescribed drug https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37447 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37447 Sun, 23 Feb 2025 22:17:39 -0500 47 million antibiotic courses https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37446 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37446 Sun, 23 Feb 2025 22:16:56 -0500 30% of prescribed medication aren't necessary https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37445 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37445 Sun, 23 Feb 2025 22:16:26 -0500 The death rate is extremely high https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37444 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37444 Sun, 23 Feb 2025 22:15:06 -0500 "prescribing cascade" - getting sick because of medication https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37443 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37443 Sun, 23 Feb 2025 22:14:46 -0500 So much medication a day! https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37442 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37442 Sun, 23 Feb 2025 22:13:57 -0500 Older patients ages 65 and over! https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37441 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5308?scroll_to=37441 Sun, 23 Feb 2025 22:13:36 -0500 Its hard to keep track of all the medication https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=36889 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=36889 Thu, 13 Feb 2025 15:58:18 -0500 This is a crazy statistic and can be very helpful for a quote for my essay! https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=36888 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=36888 Thu, 13 Feb 2025 15:57:20 -0500 Polypharmacy- The use of multiple drugs https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=36885 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=36885 Thu, 13 Feb 2025 15:54:32 -0500 Why is it especially for older adults? https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=36884 https://writingpartners.net/documents/5074?scroll_to=36884 Thu, 13 Feb 2025 15:54:00 -0500 https://watson.brown.edu/costsofwar/costs/social/rights/surveillance#:~:text=The%20U.S.%20used%20post%2D9,for%20racial%20and%20labor%20justice. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=36038 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=36038 Orwell basically predicts that in the future we would be constantly surveillanced. In same ways I do think he is correct. Especially since 9/11, the U.S upped their surveillance to monitor citizens. I also feel like he's correct in the way of media and technology and how people think the government is always watching us through our phone. "https://watson.brown.edu/costsofwar/costs/social/rights/surveillance#:~:text=The%20U.S.%20used%20post%2D9,for%20racial%20and%20labor%20justice." This website touches more on how the government has tried to monitor all of U.S citizens "The U.S. used post-9/11 terrorist fears to expand its monitoring of U.S. citizens who have nothing to do with terrorism." Tue, 04 Feb 2025 12:46:51 -0500 I don't know how the are going to meet at this place without getting caught. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35157 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35157 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 12:20:38 -0500 They are very smart with how they do everything to not seem suspicious https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35153 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35153 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 12:19:13 -0500 He felt like night time was a time of peace for him as long as he was quiet https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35150 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35150 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 12:17:36 -0500 Love gave him a reason to live! https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35149 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=35149 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 12:16:57 -0500 They cant even have a conversation in person its insane https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34465 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34465 Fri, 24 Jan 2025 12:27:50 -0500 does she actually mean it? https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34464 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34464 Fri, 24 Jan 2025 12:23:26 -0500 An order to commit suicide is insane. The fact that they live in fear of not knowing what's going to happen is very scary. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34462 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34462 Fri, 24 Jan 2025 12:08:51 -0500 It's terrifying how they always felt watched and had no privacy so they had to do everything in secret. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34460 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34460 Fri, 24 Jan 2025 12:05:19 -0500 It was really interesting to me how creative people started getting with hiding things! https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34458 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34458 Fri, 24 Jan 2025 12:01:32 -0500 He uses detailed words to how isolated life is under the party without saying it directly https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34456 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4012?scroll_to=34456 Fri, 24 Jan 2025 11:49:43 -0500 do you think my introduction paragraph is strong enough https://writingpartners.net/documents/4076?scroll_to=32887 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4076?scroll_to=32887 You've crafted a promising thesis by identifying Dove's use of ethos, logos, and pathos. This sets a solid foundation for analyzing her rhetorical strategies. Your essay insightfully links ethos to Dove's experience, effectively demonstrating her credibility with the audience. The quote "I have been teaching for the past twenty-seven years" illustrates this nicely. However, while discussing logos and pathos, consider deepening your analysis. Highlighting how these elements influence the audience would strengthen your argument. Shall we explore how Dove's pathos creates an emotional bond with her listeners or examine how her use of statistics makes her message more relatable? Analyzing how her anecdotes foster a shared experience between speaker and audience could be intriguing too. Which area would you like to delve into for a deeper analysis, or do you have another focus in mind? You can choose one or more paths or suggest another exciting direction! Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Fri, 17 Jan 2025 13:54:23 -0500 Do you think i should change what rhetorical choices i chose for this essay https://writingpartners.net/documents/4076?scroll_to=32881 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4076?scroll_to=32881 You've crafted a promising thesis by identifying Dove's use of ethos, logos, and pathos. This sets a solid foundation for analyzing her rhetorical strategies. Your essay begins by insightfully linking ethos to Dove's experience, effectively demonstrating her credibility with the audience. Your reference to "I have been teaching for the past twenty-seven years" illustrates this well. However, when discussing logos and pathos, consider deepening your analysis. While you mention Dove's personal anecdotes and statistics, stating how these elements influence the audience would strengthen your argument. Let's discuss how Dove's pathos creates an emotional bond with her listeners or explore how using statistics can make her message more relatable. We could also analyze how her anecdotes foster a shared experience between speaker and audience. Which of these areas would you like to dive into for a deeper analysis, or do you have another focus you'd like to explore? Feel free to choose one or more paths, or suggest another exciting direction! Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Fri, 17 Jan 2025 13:54:23 -0500 How well did I respond to the prompt with a thesis that analyzes the writer’s rhetorical choices? https://writingpartners.net/documents/4076?scroll_to=32856 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4076?scroll_to=32856 You've crafted a promising thesis by identifying Dove's use of ethos, logos, and pathos. This sets a solid foundation for analyzing her rhetorical strategies. Your essay begins by insightfully linking ethos to Dove's experience, effectively demonstrating her credibility with the audience. Your reference to "I have been teaching for the past twenty-seven years" illustrates this well. However, when discussing logos and pathos, consider deepening your analysis. While you mention Dove's personal anecdotes and statistics, stating how these elements influence the audience would strengthen your argument. Let's discuss how Dove's pathos creates an emotional bond with her listeners or explore how using statistics can make her message more relatable. We could also analyze how her anecdotes foster a shared experience between speaker and audience. Which of these areas would you like to dive into for a deeper analysis, or do you have another focus you'd like to explore? Feel free to choose one or more paths, or suggest another exciting direction! Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Fri, 17 Jan 2025 13:54:23 -0500 I agree with you Achol! They are also both very descriptive. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31844 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31844 Sat, 11 Jan 2025 01:27:59 -0500 In this sentence he uses imagery and metaphors to convey the oppressive atmosphere of the regime https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31843 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31843 Sat, 11 Jan 2025 01:26:10 -0500 Orwell uses lots of imagery and diction in this sentence which helps build a vivid picture of the world the character lives in. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31842 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31842 Sat, 11 Jan 2025 01:19:38 -0500 Orwell is very descriptive really helping the reader envision the scene. His sensory details help convey a sense of poverty and discomfort. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31841 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=31841 Sat, 11 Jan 2025 01:03:14 -0500 I think it is insane how people make so many things about race. No way georgia is getting bomb threats causing the ballot boxes to be pushed back. Just let the people vote. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=19032 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=19032 Wed, 06 Nov 2024 00:18:50 -0500 I thought it was interesting how worried Trump is about cheating in the election while Kamala hasn't really mentioned the topic. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=19031 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=19031 Wed, 06 Nov 2024 00:15:01 -0500 the electoral votes are so extremely close for so many states. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=19025 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=19025 Wed, 06 Nov 2024 00:03:12 -0500 I agree with you I feel like he does that quite a lot and is never direct. https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3403 https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3403 Tue, 10 Sep 2024 13:00:20 -0400 I was thinking the same thing! https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3397 https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3397 Tue, 10 Sep 2024 12:59:31 -0400 He took a good amount of the beginning of his speech talking about how his ear was bleeding so much and in a way complimenting himself for being so brave. It just felt really insincere and more like he was just trying to get people to feel sorry for him. https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3390 https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3390 Tue, 10 Sep 2024 12:58:24 -0400