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      <title>chapter 30 </title>
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      <description>- what i find interesting is that once the robbers find out that Malo is muslim, they give him all his stuff back 
- A question i have is where is Malo going to go after he's been to all his &quot;known spots&quot;
- I predict that malo is going to eventually contact Nia &amp; tell her everything</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 05 Mar 2026 11:40:17 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>chapter 29</title>
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      <description>- what I find interesting is that the people who turned Malo into a gangster is now preaching to Malo that the life is foolish &amp; bad 
- I wonder where Malo is going to go now 
- I predict that Malo is going to get into trouble since he don't have none of his stuff
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      <pubDate>Wed, 04 Mar 2026 14:10:35 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>chapter 28</title>
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      <description>- what I find interesting is that it took for Malo to read her journal for her to kick him out
- A question I have is where did she do with Malo's things?
- I predict that Malo is going to try to with Nia</description>
      <pubDate>Wed, 04 Mar 2026 13:54:17 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>chapter 27</title>
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      <description>- what I find interesting is that Malo deleted every voicemail except Nia's 
- I wonder if Nia only reached out  because Malo bestfriend died</description>
      <pubDate>Wed, 04 Mar 2026 13:49:29 -0500</pubDate>
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      <description>- what I find interesting is that the school he goes to is like most schools today
- I wonder why he doesn't like this school if the public school he went to in middle school, he didn't listen to them &amp; wanted to get sent back to public school 
- I predict that Malo would get into a lot of problems with the boy who teased him about his name</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2026 11:50:18 -0500</pubDate>
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      <description>- I'm surprised that Malo had a thought that killing the person who killed his best friend doesn't do him any good
- I wonder if Malo is still going to hang out with bad crowd 
- I predict that Malo will continue selling drugs &amp; to hang with the bad crowd &amp; start trouble </description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2026 11:34:22 -0500</pubDate>
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      <description>- Malo kept his &quot;speech&quot; short
- I wonder if he didn't have much to say because he is numb due to his death 
- I predict Malo would try to figure out who did this to his friend </description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2026 11:20:13 -0500</pubDate>
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      <description>-its interesting why Malo goes to these places knowing the outcome
- I wonder if he likes this stuff or he's just doing it because he thinks thats the only way of living life
- I predict that he would get more reckless after this situation</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 26 Feb 2026 11:16:32 -0500</pubDate>
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      <description>- what i find interesting is that the mom was stealing when she was younger
- a question i have is do Uzi &amp; Malo know that their mom stole when she was a young girl?
- i predict that the dad is going to try to talk Malo out of selling weed &amp; for him to live with him indefinitely </description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 12 Feb 2026 11:18:13 -0500</pubDate>
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      <description>-what i find interesting is that malo is going down the same path is brother did knowing that was what landed him in jail
-i predict that malo is going to be smarter then his brother with the &quot;thug life&quot; since he knew why Uzi landed in jail in the first place 
- a question i have is how is the mom making her source of income with her &quot;condition&quot; &amp; how much is she making being as though malo feels like he has to sell drugs</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 05 Mar 2026 11:41:28 -0500</pubDate>
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