Comments by Jamil Myers Most recent public comments by Jamil Myers https://writingpartners.net/users/386 Dear Dr Bentum and Peers https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19329 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19329 I am fearful, it's still shocking to myself as I previously convinced myself that I didn't care, but the truth is I said that because I already thought I knew how this election would go. However now that the results came back, the worst and least expected happened. Now with all these ideas of what will happen going around I'm scared of what will happen to our country and how this will affect me and those around me. I realized that I let my pride cover up the thought that this could happen and now I don't even know how to feel anymore. Thu, 07 Nov 2024 19:02:43 -0500 How can I improve this letter? https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19328 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19328 Thank you for sharing your thoughts and feelings about the recent election results. Your letter begins with a heartfelt expression of your initial belief and the emotional shift that followed. This kind of reflection can be really impactful for your audience. You’ve used a personal voice that resonates with sincerity, like when you say, "it's clear that on the inside I wanted someone to win now I'm scared of what may happen to our country." Emphasizing your emotions and the change that has occurred within you adds depth to your writing, drawing the reader into your experience. You can write in response to my prompts in a *Reply* or by hitting *Add to Document*, and then adding *New Content.* Take a moment to notice the emotion you're working with in this letter. Ask yourself, how can you further explore and express your fears or hopes concerning "what may happen to our country"? What specific concerns do you have, and how do they connect with your audience’s experiences or expectations? Thu, 07 Nov 2024 19:02:43 -0500 Dear Dr Bentum and peers, I had previously convinced myself that I didn't care who won the 2024 Presidential Election but after seeing the results it's clear that on the inside I wanted someone to win now I'm scared of what may happen to our country. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19326 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19326 Thu, 07 Nov 2024 19:02:43 -0500 I realize that Trump says that Kamala and Joe Biden let criminals into the country and that's the cause of other countries'crime rates going down. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4300 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4300 Tue, 10 Sep 2024 22:05:23 -0400 Kamala states that Donald Trump is project 2025 however sources say that Donald Trump didn't write nor does he support it. Is project 2025 really a liable source? https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4154 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4154 Fri, 05 Sep 2025 15:36:39 -0400 Kamalas seems to insert the idea that the U.S should put the country and allies of the country first. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4021 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4021 Fri, 13 Sep 2024 13:21:05 -0400 Donald Trump states that when he was president there was virtually no inflation. It seems he believes he can make the country the same way it was before inflation wise. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3882 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3882 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:53:25 -0400 Kamala talks about cleaning up Donald Trump's mess. How we should define cleaning up Donald Trump's mess? https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3614 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3614 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 09:08:41 -0400 Donald Trump said in the debate that the people taking jobs from blacks and Hispanics were let in the country by Kamala Harris and Joe Biden. What would trump do about this issue? https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3555 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3555 Fri, 20 Sep 2024 15:25:02 -0400 Kamala says "fights were not easy and neither were the elections". https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3304 https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3304 You're absolutely right. Kamala Harris' acknowledgment that "fights were not easy and neither were the elections" indeed reflects her awareness of the challenges inherent in her role. Tue, 10 Sep 2024 09:00:00 -0400 Kamala says "fights were not easy and neither were the elections". I think this is interesting because it shows her knowledge of the difficulty of her job. https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3293 https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3293 Tue, 10 Sep 2024 09:00:00 -0400