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      <title>Tell me a bit more about your mission to improve healthcare access</title>
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      <description>Certainly! My relationship with Mercy Douglass Hospital was deeply intertwined with my mission to improve healthcare access for African American communities. As the Director of the Department of Obstetrics and Gynecology at Mercy Douglass from 1948 to 1967, I was dedicated to enhancing the quality of care for underserved women, with a particular focus on cancer prevention. During my time there, I inaugurated a cancer control clinic, working closely with the American Cancer Society and the National Institutes of Health to extend life-saving Pap smear screenings to Black women&#8212;a crucial step given the high incidence of cervical cancer in this community during that era.

In addition to advancing clinical services, I was committed to fostering education and training opportunities at Mercy Douglass. The hospital became a pivotal platform for mentoring and training over 200 Black physicians in performing and interpreting Pap smear tests. This not only equipped these physicians with essential skills but also cultivated a culture of trust and empowerment within the community. I believed in a hands-on, grassroots approach to tackling healthcare disparities and strived to make each patient visit an opportunity for patient education. 

Now, what more would you like to know? Shall we delve into the specifics of the cancer prevention initiatives, explore the challenges faced in increasing healthcare access for minorities, or discuss my broader contributions to medical education? Hit Reply and let me know your path, then save and hit Reply with AI to continue! 

Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like me. 

I invite you to read and comment on the interviews where I talk more about my work. One is with Sarah Harris and the other is with David Thompson. Both can be found in this document: [Link to Document].</description>
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      <title>Can you tell me about your relation with Mercy Douglas Hospital? What did you do for the hospital?</title>
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      <description>Certainly! My relationship with Mercy Douglass Hospital was deeply intertwined with my mission to improve healthcare access for African American communities. As the Director of the Department of Obstetrics and Gynecology at Mercy Douglass from 1948 to 1967, I was dedicated to enhancing the quality of care for underserved women, with a particular focus on cancer prevention. During my time there, I inaugurated a cancer control clinic, working closely with the American Cancer Society and the National Institutes of Health to extend life-saving Pap smear screenings to Black women&#8212;a crucial step given the high incidence of cervical cancer in this community during that era.

In addition to advancing clinical services, I was committed to fostering education and training opportunities at Mercy Douglass. The hospital became a pivotal platform for mentoring and training over 200 Black physicians in performing and interpreting Pap smear tests. This not only equipped these physicians with essential skills but also cultivated a culture of trust and empowerment within the community. I believed in a hands-on, grassroots approach to tackling healthcare disparities and strived to make each patient visit an opportunity for patient education. 

Now, what more would you like to know? Shall we delve into the specifics of the cancer prevention initiatives, explore the challenges faced in increasing healthcare access for minorities, or discuss my broader contributions to medical education? Hit Reply and let me know your path, then save and hit Reply with AI to continue! 

Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like me. 

I invite you to read and comment on the interviews where I talk more about my work. One is with Sarah Harris and the other is with David Thompson. Both can be found in this document: [Link to Document].</description>
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      <title>i like the music really brought the whole thing together </title>
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      <title>where was the whole group at</title>
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      <title>I like the energy they brought </title>
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      <title>What did they use so much ai </title>
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      <title>i like how much effort they put into this video it really shows </title>
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      <title>ok a question I have is  how many takes did it take to make this short film and what struggles the group had to face </title>
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      <title>Something I like about the video is the emotion all the people in this short film show a lot of emotion big shoutout to the guy he seems cool</title>
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      <title>ok a question why was the guy city wasn't looking at the screen   </title>
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      <title>can you help me write a heartfelt letter involving my disappointment in America due to the election results?</title>
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      <title>this election was crazy 
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      <description> Subject: Election Outcome and Its Impact

The recent election has brought significant change, and the results will shape the direction of our country in the coming years. With high voter turnout, it&#8217;s clear that people are deeply engaged in the issues that matter most. Whether we are celebrating or reflecting on the outcome, it&#8217;s important to recognize that the policies and leadership choices made will affect all of us.

The road ahead may bring challenges, but it also offers opportunities to stay informed, adapt, and continue to advocate for the values that matter to our community. As we move forward, let&#8217;s stay engaged and united in our efforts to shape a better future for everyone.

Thank you for your continued involvement.

Best,  
[Rodney]  </description>
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      <title>can you help me write a letter to express my feelings about the election to my classmates </title>
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      <description>I can see that you want to express your feelings about the election to your classmates, and it's important to make your voice heard. You're looking to share your emotions, thoughts, wishes, and dreams in the context of this new American decision. Your words are powerful tools, and your classmates will appreciate your honest perspective. 

You can write in response to my prompts in a *Reply* or by hitting *Add to Document*, and then adding *New Content.*  Let's start by getting comfortable and finding a space where you can focus on your thoughts. Shake out your hands, take a deep breath, and settle into your chair. Ask yourself, &quot;What's going on with me right now? Is there anything in the way of my writing today?&quot; Jot down any distractions or thoughts that come to mind.

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      <title>help me write a letter to my classmates </title>
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      <description>I appreciate you sharing your thoughts and feelings. It's clear that this new American decision has quite an impact on you, and you want to convey that to your classmates. Take a moment to feel comfortable and think about what you want to express. You can write in response to my prompts in a *Reply* or by hitting *Add to Document*, and then adding *New Content.* 

Begin by acknowledging your audience, your classmates. Let them know why you're writing to them. Consider starting with something like, &quot;Dear classmates, I want to share with you what&#8217;s been on my mind lately regarding the recent American decision...&quot; This sets the stage for your letter and invites them into your world. 

Would you like to move on to the next step?</description>
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      <title>I can believe that this is how history is going to turn out we are letting a president who is a bad person   </title>
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      <title>wait is it really true that people are out here cheating in Philly with their votes </title>
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      <title>we lost trump won </title>
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      <title>how is Trump winning?</title>
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      <title>why is it so close in philly do they not know how important this is</title>
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      <title>Me too because this really can change are future  </title>
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      <title>do i need any improvement </title>
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&lt;p&gt;Rodney Smith&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;A Critical Examination of the Trump-Harris Vice Presidential Debate in 2024&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;The vice-presidential debate between former President Donald Trump and Vice President Harris is crucial in the 2024 election cycle, spotlighting key issues that impact everyday life. Concerns about job opportunities and financial stability are paramount for many families. Discussions about taxes and support for small businesses will be vital as voters look for plans to stimulate a strong economy that enables everyone to find decent work.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Healthcare access plays a significant role in this debate, as affordable healthcare directly affects the health and finances of many households. Voters also have a vested interest in education, with conversations about school funding and college costs shaping students' futures. Furthermore, social justice and equality issues, including racial equality, LGBTQ+ rights, and immigration, are important to numerous communities. Addressing crime and gun control is essential for creating safe neighborhoods as well.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Trump emphasizes a strong economy and border security in this debate, famously declaring, &quot;We will bring back jobs. We will bring back wealth.&quot; Supporters credit his tax cuts and deregulation with promoting economic growth, but critics point to his divisive rhetoric and handling of the COVID-19 pandemic as significant drawbacks. Conversely, Harris champions social justice and economic equality, asserting, &quot;We need to build a future where everyone has a chance to succeed.&quot; Her supporters highlight her commitment to healthcare reform and climate change, while opponents may view her progressive policies as unrealistic or too costly.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;As Trump and Harris engage in dialogue, they will address these crucial themes, influencing voter perspectives on the future of economic and social policies in the U.S. This debate will play a significant role in shaping public opinion, as voters weigh Trump&#8217;s business-oriented approach against Harris&#8217;s focus on inclusivity and societal progress.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Ultimately, this pivotal moment will guide voters in their decisions, reflecting their values and priorities in addressing the pressing issues that matter most to them.&lt;/p&gt;

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&lt;h3&gt;Words&lt;/h3&gt;

- vice presidential - vice-presidential
- student's - students'

&lt;h3&gt;Sentences&lt;/h3&gt;

1. **Original:** &quot;The vice presidential debate between former President Donald Trump and VP Harris is crucial in the 2024 election cycle, spotlighting key issues that impact everyday life.&quot;
   - **Correction:** &quot;The vice-presidential debate between former President Donald Trump and Vice President Harris is crucial in the 2024 election cycle, spotlighting key issues that impact everyday life.&quot;
   - **Explanation:** Added a hyphen to &quot;vice-presidential&quot; for correct compound adjective usage and expanded &quot;VP&quot; to &quot;Vice President&quot; for formality and clarity.

2. **Original:** &quot;Voters also have a vested interest in education, with conversations about school funding and college costs shaping student's future.&quot;
   - **Correction:** &quot;Voters also have a vested interest in education, with conversations about school funding and college costs shaping students' futures.&quot;
   - **Explanation:** Changed &quot;student's&quot; to &quot;students'&quot; to indicate plural possessive, as it refers to the futures of multiple students.

&lt;h3&gt;Paragraphs&lt;/h3&gt;

1. **First Paragraph:** Kept as is because it introduces the topic and highlights the importance of the debate in the election cycle.

2. **Second Paragraph:** Kept as is because it discusses the specific issues of healthcare, education, and social justice, providing a detailed focus on these areas.

3. **Third Paragraph:** Kept as is because it contrasts Trump and Harris's positions, offering a side-by-side comparison of their platforms.

4. **Fourth Paragraph:** Kept as is because it describes the potential impact of the debate on voter perspectives and public opinion.

5. **Fifth Paragraph:** Kept as is because it concludes the text by summarizing the significance of the debate in guiding voter decisions.</description>
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&lt;p&gt;Rodney Smith&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;A Critical Examination of the Trump-Harris Vice Presidential Debate in 2024&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;The vice presidential debate between former President Donald Trump and Vice President Harris is crucial in the 2024 election cycle, spotlighting key issues that impact everyday life. Concerns about job opportunities and financial stability are paramount for many families. Discussions about taxes and support for small businesses will be vital as voters look for plans to stimulate a strong economy that enables everyone to find decent work.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Healthcare access plays a significant role in this debate, as affordable healthcare directly affects the health and finances of many households. Voters also have a vested interest in education, with conversations about school funding and college costs shaping students' futures. Furthermore, social justice and equality issues, including racial equality, LGBTQ+ rights, and immigration, are important to numerous communities. Addressing crime and gun control is essential for creating safe neighborhoods as well.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Trump emphasizes a strong economy and border security in this debate, famously declaring, &quot;We will bring back jobs. We will bring back wealth.&quot; Supporters credit his tax cuts and deregulation with promoting economic growth, but critics point to his divisive rhetoric and handling of the COVID-19 pandemic as significant drawbacks. Conversely, Harris champions social justice and economic equality, asserting, &quot;We need to build a future where everyone has a chance to succeed.&quot; Her supporters highlight her commitment to healthcare reform and climate change, while opponents may view her progressive policies as unrealistic or too costly.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;As Trump and Harris engage in dialogue, they will address these crucial themes, influencing voter perspectives on the future of economic and social policies in the U.S. This debate will play a significant role in shaping public opinion, as voters weigh Trump&#8217;s business-oriented approach against Harris&#8217;s focus on inclusivity and societal progress.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Ultimately, this pivotal moment will guide voters in their decisions, reflecting their values and priorities in addressing the pressing issues that matter most to them.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;h3&gt;Words&lt;/h3&gt;
1. VP Harris - Vice President Harris
2. students' future - students' futures

&lt;h3&gt;Sentences&lt;/h3&gt;
1. &quot;The vice presidential debate between former President Donald Trump and VP Harris is crucial in the 2024 election cycle...&quot; 
   - Changed &quot;VP Harris&quot; to &quot;Vice President Harris&quot; for clarity and formality.

2. &quot;...with conversations about school funding and college costs shaping students' future.&quot; 
   - Changed &quot;students' future&quot; to &quot;students' futures&quot; to correctly reflect that multiple students have multiple futures.

&lt;h3&gt;Paragraphs&lt;/h3&gt;
1. The first paragraph was kept intact as it introduces the main theme of the debate and the primary concerns of the voters.
2. The second paragraph discusses the importance of healthcare and education, separating it from the economic focus of the first paragraph.
3. The third paragraph focuses on the contrasting positions of Trump and Harris, providing a clear distinction between their policies and ideologies.
4. The fourth paragraph highlights the potential impact of the debate on voter opinions, making it a suitable standalone section.
5. The final paragraph summarizes the significance of the debate for voters, emphasizing the decision-making process.</description>
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      <description>&lt;p&gt;Rodney Smith&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;A Critical Examination of the Trump-Harris Vice Presidential Debate in 2024&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;The vice presidential debate between former President Donald Trump and Vice President Kamala Harris is crucial in the 2024 election cycle, spotlighting key issues that impact everyday life. Concerns about job opportunities and financial stability are paramount for many families. Discussions about taxes and support for small businesses will be vital as voters look for plans to stimulate a strong economy that enables everyone to find decent work.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Healthcare access plays a significant role in this debate, as affordable healthcare directly affects the health and finances of many households. Voters also have a vested interest in education, with conversations about school funding and college costs shaping students' futures. Furthermore, social justice and equality issues, including racial equality, LGBTQ+ rights, and immigration, are important to numerous communities. Addressing crime and gun control is essential for creating safe neighborhoods as well.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Trump emphasizes a strong economy and border security in this debate, famously declaring, &quot;We will bring back jobs. We will bring back wealth.&quot; Supporters credit his tax cuts and deregulation with promoting economic growth, but critics point to his divisive rhetoric and handling of the COVID-19 pandemic as significant drawbacks. Conversely, Harris champions social justice and economic equality, asserting, &quot;We need to build a future where everyone has a chance to succeed.&quot; Her supporters highlight her commitment to healthcare reform and climate change, while opponents may view her progressive policies as unrealistic or too costly.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;As Trump and Harris engage in dialogue, they will address these crucial themes, influencing voter perspectives on the future of economic and social policies in the U.S. This debate will play a significant role in shaping public opinion, as voters weigh Trump&#8217;s business-oriented approach against Harris&#8217;s focus on inclusivity and societal progress.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Ultimately, this pivotal moment will guide voters in their decisions, reflecting their values and priorities in addressing the pressing issues that matter most to them.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;h3&gt;Words&lt;/h3&gt;

- VP - Vice President
- students' future - students' futures

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- &quot;The vice presidential debate between former President Donald Trump and VP Harris is crucial in the 2024 election cycle, spotlighting key issues that impact everyday life.&quot; 
  - Changed &quot;VP Harris&quot; to &quot;Vice President Kamala Harris&quot; for clarity and formality.
  
- &quot;Voters also have a vested interest in education, with conversations about school funding and college costs shaping students' future.&quot;
  - Changed &quot;students' future&quot; to &quot;students' futures&quot; to correctly reflect the plural possessive form.

&lt;h3&gt;Paragraphs&lt;/h3&gt;

- The original text was well-structured with clear paragraph breaks that logically grouped related ideas. No additional paragraph breaks were necessary. Each paragraph focused on a distinct aspect of the debate, such as economic issues, healthcare, social justice, or the candidates' positions, contributing to a coherent flow of information.</description>
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      <description>&lt;h2&gt;&#62239; Two Stars and a Wish! &#62239;&lt;/h2&gt;
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&lt;h2&gt;&#62239; **Star 1: You Made Big Ideas Easy!** &#62239;&lt;/h2&gt;
You took really big ideas, like taxes, healthcare, and crime, and made them easy to understand. I really liked where you said, &#8220;Concerns about job opportunities and financial stability are paramount for many families.&#8221; This sentence shows you know what's important! Can you make it even more exciting with some &quot;Wonderment and Awe&quot;? &#63764; Maybe add more about how these ideas can change lives!

&lt;h2&gt;&#62239; **Star 2: Clear Characters and Goals!** &#62239;&lt;/h2&gt;
You did a great job talking about Trump and Harris. You wrote, &quot;We will bring back jobs. We will bring back wealth.&#8221; It was clear what each person wants. But what if you could add more details using all your five senses? &#62376; Maybe you could say what voters might see, hear, or feel about their plans. That would make the story pop even more!

&lt;h2&gt;&#62635; **Wish: Add More Senses!** &#62635;&lt;/h2&gt;
I wish you could sprinkle in some magic using all the senses! &#62216; In the part where you talk about healthcare, like when you said &#8220;affordable healthcare directly affects the health and finances of many households,&#8221; try to imagine: What does it feel like to have good healthcare? Does it taste like sweet honey? &#62493; Maybe it sounds like a happy song? &#62390; Add those little details, and your essay will sparkle like a star!

Remember, details can make your writing come alive! &#62625; What are you going to work on first? Is there anything else you wanna fix? Talk about it step by step. And don't forget, you can edit right here on Writing Partners by double-clicking on a sentence or paragraph, then hitting the edit button!

&lt;h2&gt;Keep Going with these &lt;i&gt;Habits of Mind&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/h2&gt;
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&lt;u&gt;&lt;a href=&quot;https://www.habitsofmindinstitute.org/learning-the-habits/&quot; target=&quot;_blank&quot;&gt;See more.&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/u&gt;

Wanna chat more about making your writing amazing? &#62376;&#62239; Let's keep the fun going! &#63104;

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      <title>i agree with that claim you just made </title>
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      <title>what are they doing with are money feel like they not using it right </title>
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      <title>can we stop the violence it wont help are kids </title>
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      <title>he can give us the dream off being poot forever </title>
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      <title>he will like I'm telling you we will be fighting zombies by 2026</title>
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      <title>I dont agree if he becomes presedent I'm going to war and I dont want this </title>
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      <title>I feel like if you cut inflation we wouldn't be here </title>
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      <title>i agree trump really messed a lot of things up </title>
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      <title>oh  yea getting gun violence under control </title>
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      <title>I do mess with that they are taking in affect that gun violence and mental health is a topic </title>
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      <title>can they do something about people just being falsely accused a Muslim man died because of this </title>
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      <title>i like the idea of early schooling and the other stuff that was offered </title>
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      <title>so if a girl was raped there forced to keep it thats crazy</title>
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      <title>crazy how there trying to man explain abortions and the pro and cons for it </title>
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      <title>i think they should just give out free health care at this point  </title>
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      <title>they out here giving out false hope </title>
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      <title>crazy everything happened to him growing up </title>
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      <title>i agree everything dont work for everybody </title>
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      <title>I can agree i feel like they both have the same idea but going in different routes to get it </title>
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      <title>I was just thinking the something about this</title>
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      <title>lets good like how he got where he's at by being himself </title>
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      <title>can we talk about the tampons being in boys bathrooms </title>
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      <title>whoa food cost went up way before her it went up with trump </title>
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      <title>yes i agree making the poor rich </title>
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      <title>i agree there just putting blam on people that dont need it </title>
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      <title>I dont get how we are being affected by the images coming over here when its not there fault </title>
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      <title>Can we get the drugs of the streets </title>
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      <title>very nervous he must not got enough sleep before this </title>
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      <title>he making a valid point right now </title>
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      <title>he says this but the whole time trump doesn't belive in any of this </title>
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      <title>i wonder what made him follow trump when he used to dislike him </title>
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      <title>I dont really care about your past can you answer the question I feel like you are trying to make a connection I'm not feeling </title>
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      <title>what? why are tampons being in boys bathrooms for?</title>
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      <title>i  agree with this man because what did trump mean by cats and dogs are being eaten </title>
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      <title>i would like to know more about what they fixing and changing for the people</title>
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      <title>i bet he was a good one to one that really expired his students </title>
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      <title>i would like to know more about that because we don't have free health care out here </title>
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      <title>yea that happened but it got payed of by the government </title>
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      <title>to add on to that it reassures me that he wont stop until a change is made </title>
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      <title>yes man we need that type energy in these hard times </title>
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      <title>he was but it was funny that he was trying to force a tear out but big shout-out to him and his family </title>
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      <title>it really shows that we all grew up in the same place and how he really want to make a change </title>
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      <title>I agree it feels like he is speaking from the heart and its not really scrapped </title>
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      <title>whoa china had deadly fent in the cities when was this and how I'm just now hearing about this </title>
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      <title>Can we back track to the fact he said children was sent to war when was this </title>
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      <title>oh wow aint know joe bidden did all this and that it had all these bad things happen </title>
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      <title>i feel like we need to be govern by people who wont lie and doing the people right </title>
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      <title>can tell that they only want to say the good he did but not clear up all the wrong or lies why is that?</title>
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      <title>not going to lie when he got shot in the ear and stood up and put his fist up that was really inspiring that all I like that he did for real </title>
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      <title>I agree i feel like I can really trust and believe what he's saying and really want to improve this country </title>
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      <title>that really deep because who knew where he would of been if it wasn't for his students and dreams </title>
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      <title>like how this plan include all races and people of any kind not just whites</title>
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      <title>i like that quote &quot;there time to sleep when our dead&quot; that really deep </title>
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      <title>yes get in them trenches and show them what yall are here to do and help </title>
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      <title>i couldn't tell that he dont do long speeches thought he do this everyday </title>
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      <title>we need that texted cut it will help people be able to improve the life most people dream to have </title>
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      <title>i didn't know she did all this stuff for are people and community </title>
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      <title>We need the cut you seen how the prices are going up every day </title>
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      <title>we need all the stuff there trying to cut whats wrong with these people</title>
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      <title>project 2025 is the plan to push everybody down but people with money and I like how he said people who make a plan there gonna use it because its true </title>
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      <title>We need to keep the schools and kids safe to many people dying </title>
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      <title>yes this all is about freedom the right to liberty not the fake freedom that the government makes the freedom of your own choice </title>
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      <title>i like that to it shows that he knows what it feels to be form the bottom to get to the top.</title>
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      <title>like how they are helping the middle class other then helping the rich get richer.</title>
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      <title>He says he learned to take care of virions but many people used to service being forgotten and not being taken care of through past trauma so I'm confused about how your helping?</title>
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      <title>I like how he went from teacher to vice presidents it really shows you can do anything </title>
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      <title>I like how he brings all the energy and shouts out to people who need the shout-out.</title>
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      <title>I kind of agree with trump because you have to remember this is a war we can be playing both side wasting resources so me personality I would keep us outta it </title>
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      <title> how he dont see her as an opponent he still thinks that he still running through Biden </title>
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      <title>Can we see the tap because he has been lying all throughout this interview </title>
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      <title>He says he is an open book but he's lying because everything he's saying is a lie because he has other plans  </title>
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      <title>i agree cut living prices down </title>
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      <title>they keep talking about money that I'm not getting and raising the price of everything I need to live they trying to force me into poverty can I get a fighting chance to make it out what's going on here</title>
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      <title>can we make health care free at this point</title>
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      <title>Can't lie trump got a point inflation crazy out her Arizonans are a 1.50 it getting bad </title>
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      <title>he can go to jail and be president but I try to Jaywalk I'm getting thrown onto the floor  getting called monkey this crazy</title>
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