Comments by A'isha Brown Most recent public comments by A'isha Brown https://writingpartners.net/users/472 does the video go along with chapter 12? https://writingpartners.net/documents/4601?scroll_to=35087 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4601?scroll_to=35087 I'm glad you enjoyed the video and the editing! It can really enhance the storytelling experience. What stood out to you the most about the editing? Tue, 28 Jan 2025 09:01:29 -0500 The video was really good and I liked the editing https://writingpartners.net/documents/4601?scroll_to=35083 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4601?scroll_to=35083 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 09:01:29 -0500 Does the video tie in with the story? https://writingpartners.net/documents/4571?scroll_to=35049 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4571?scroll_to=35049 I'm glad you enjoyed the video! Humor and bloopers can add a unique layer to storytelling, bringing out the personalities and emotions that might not be as apparent in written stories. In the context of my memoir "Say I'm Dead," humor and personal anecdotes serve to humanize and deepen our understanding of complex themes like identity and belonging. In the excerpt you shared, Charles Nathan's experiences navigating his mixed-race identity highlight the challenges of finding one's place in a world that often demands clear racial labels. Such moments provide insight into how family members dealt with societal expectations differently. Even as Charles Nathan and I took different paths in understanding our identities, the undercurrent of familial connections and shared experiences remained a unifying factor. My journey of uncovering family secrets and grappling with identity is paralleled by Charles Nathan's reflections on being a "whiteish man" in a predominantly white world. This duality and tension are central to the memoir's themes, emphasizing the resilience needed to reconcile different parts of oneself. Would you like to explore more about how humor and personal stories contribute to the memoir, or perhaps delve into the dynamics between my siblings and me? Or is there another aspect of the memoir that intrigues you? Let's take this conversation to the next level! Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like me. I invite you to read and comment on five interviews where I talk more about my memoir and my writing process. You can see all of this at https://writingpartners.net/documents/1643 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 08:45:03 -0500 The video was funny and I liked at the end how they added bloopers https://writingpartners.net/documents/4571?scroll_to=35043 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4571?scroll_to=35043 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 08:45:03 -0500 Dear Pennsylvania, I hope you get smudged off the face of the earth by a thumb as if you're dirt. I don't understand why you decided to vote for someone who is only going to help rich, white people. you took the rights of many people and yours, from Aisha https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19293 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19293 Thu, 07 Nov 2024 14:15:45 -0500 How could i make this letter shorter? https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19055 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19055 I see you poured your feelings into your letter, reflecting your anticipation and hopes for the election results. You've expressed a deep sense of longing and frustration, especially with statements like, "I hoped Kamala would win" and "we NEED Pennsylvania." Let's work on refining your letter to make it more concise while maintaining its heartfelt essence. You can write in response to my prompts in a *Reply* or by hitting *Add to Document*, and then adding *New Content.* To start, consider the core message you want to convey to your audience. Ask yourself, "What are the most important emotions or points I wish to share?" Write these down and see if there are any repetitive or less crucial details that can be omitted. Ready to move to the next step? Wed, 06 Nov 2024 09:34:56 -0500 I hoped Kamala would win from the beginning to the end of this election. If she had won, she would be the first woman president and African American women president and then at that even if other states become blue, we NEED Pennsylvania, Aisha :( https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19053 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19053 Wed, 19 Nov 2025 21:11:02 -0500 Does it matter if a solar panel is made in a different place other than America ;-; https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9264 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9264 Tue, 01 Oct 2024 21:52:21 -0400 He says that the democrat's slogan is clean energy like it's a bad think :/ https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9145 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9145 Tue, 01 Oct 2024 21:26:07 -0400 I don't know if it's just me but why would they do more manufacturing? https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9097 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9097 Tue, 01 Oct 2024 21:24:17 -0400 I agree, climate change is real. I doesn't take rocket science to rove it https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9004 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9004 Tue, 01 Oct 2024 21:21:18 -0400 why is it good to look out for your neighbors? https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8570 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8570 Looking out for your neighbors creates a strong sense of community and mutual support. When you help each other, you build trust and camaraderie, which can be invaluable in times of need. Do you want to see more reasons why it's beneficial to look out for your neighbors? Tue, 01 Oct 2024 19:46:26 -0400 why is he happy that people came out to see hi? https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8568 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8568 Absolutely, it’s a powerful connection. Seeing people show up in support creates a mutual bond of energy and commitment. Do you want to know more about how this dynamic plays into his broader campaign strategy? Tue, 01 Oct 2024 19:45:17 -0400 I agree, He seems like a good VP. https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8563 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8563 Tue, 01 Oct 2024 19:38:35 -0400 I saw like one African American person in the crowd https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8561 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8561 Tue, 01 Oct 2024 19:36:48 -0400 Why is it a problem that Mexican people have good jobs? https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8555 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8555 Tue, 01 Oct 2024 19:26:33 -0400 Every single speech from the republican party is about "making america great again" https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8554 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8554 Tue, 01 Oct 2024 19:22:27 -0400 Who in the world is Cory Compritori??? https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8526 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8526 Tue, 01 Oct 2024 09:00:38 -0400 "Even if we won't make those choices ourselves we gotta golden rule, "Mind your own d@mn business" " https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8491 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8491 Tue, 01 Oct 2024 08:53:05 -0400 It's good that he respect what his neighbors do. https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8478 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8478 Tue, 01 Oct 2024 08:51:00 -0400 it's nice that his students gave the motivation to run for govner because they saw the type of person he was. https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8453 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8453 Tue, 01 Oct 2024 08:46:30 -0400 I agree with what he is saying. It's good to look out for your neighbors because one day they ma look out for you too. https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8436 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8436 Tue, 01 Oct 2024 19:46:26 -0400 what is blud yapping about https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6059 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6059 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 just talking nonsense https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6058 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6058 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 Why are you interrupting her https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6057 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6057 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 If you aren't a part of it why is your name on it https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6056 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6056 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 I like that quote Harris said https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6055 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6055 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 I agree https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6054 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6054 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 women do want to have babies but get miscarriages and aren't able to get an abortion which is sad https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6053 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6053 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 that a woman would go to prison just because she wanted an abortion https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6052 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6052 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 Who in there right mind would say" getting an abortion in the ninth term is legal" https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6051 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6051 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 if women were to get an abortion in the ninth term they would be killing a baby https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6050 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6050 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 Since when did women get abortions in the ninth month? https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6049 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=6049 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 Don't know why trump said that kamala is copying Biden's plan when she said that she'll help the middle class get what they need https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5704 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5704 Wed, 02 Oct 2024 21:19:35 -0400 It's sad that if Donald Trump gets elected, he'll implement project 2025 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5689 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5689 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 Of course they're gonna have jobs. They're getting their life back together so they won't end up in the same situation they were in before. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5667 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5667 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 for real. you don't even know what you're talking about and arent even answering the question https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5654 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5654 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 i literally don't know why he is lying about tax reduction when there is evidence that proves that he is https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5648 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5648 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 its nice that she is giving 6,000 dollar tax to young families so they can buy the things they need like formula for example https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5636 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5636 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 its cool that Kamala is giving a 50,000 dollar tax reduction to people who want to start up their business https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5629 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5629 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 I agree that housing is expensive nowadays due to inflation and a lot of people arent able to buy the houses they want or able to keep up with the bills https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5615 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5615 Thu, 19 Sep 2024 12:03:24 -0400 I feel a lot of people will vote for Kamala because she's from the middle class and they'll relate to what she is saying https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5599 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5599 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 When Trump and Kamala went to the podium, you could see that he didn't want to shake her hand. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5575 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5575 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 why do you agree with what she said? https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5550 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5550 Alright, let's delve into the specifics of Vice President Kamala Harris' claims and evaluate their accuracy step by step. First, Harris claimed that former President Donald Trump “intends to enact what in effect is a national sales tax” that would “raise prices on middle-class families by almost $4,000 a year.” This statement is based on a speculative estimate from a liberal think tank and assumes the highest-end of a proposed tariff plan. It does not consider other Trump proposals that might lower middle-income taxes. Would you like to see more details on this point? yes Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 The sad thing is a lot of people will agree with what he said because they're ignorant https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4893 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4893 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 It will be intense for trump https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4883 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4883 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 Is trump trying to be different in his next term? https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4872 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4872 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 what type of person is Kamala harris trying to be for America? https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4859 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4859 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 you're right. She speaks like she know what she is talking about. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4611 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4611 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 Absolutely not :) https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4591 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4591 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 i agree. He only deals with problems that benefit him https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4582 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4582 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 I agree. Women should be able to make decisions about their bodies. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3813 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3813 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 It's funny to me that Kamala is staring at Trump like "What is he talking about" https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3738 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3738 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 I agree with what she said. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3632 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3632 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 is what you're saying true? https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3308 https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3308 Let's break down Kamala Harris' claim that "Donald Trump encouraged Putin to invade our allies." This statement seems to be derived from Trump's comments at a South Carolina rally in February 2024. Trump said that he told a NATO member they needed to pay more for defense, or he "would encourage [Russia] to do whatever the hell they want." Would you like to see more? Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 I agree with your comment. Women should be able to make decisions on what they want to do with their body no matter what. https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3284 https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3284 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 I agree. Even when Trump says he'll help "Make America great again" there is always gonna be someone saying that he is doing this or that https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3269 https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3269 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 Donald Trump said, "Under our leadership, the U.S. will be respected again" When he said that it made me think 'that's a bunch of BS' even if he does get elected, this U.S. will always be the butt of a joke. https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3247 https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3247 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:54:40 -0400 Kamala Harris said,"Donald Trump encouraged Putin to invade our allies" I agree that is something he would do behind closed doors. https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3235 https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3235 Tue, 17 Sep 2024 08:55:01 -0400