Comments by London Naylor Most recent public comments by London Naylor https://writingpartners.net/users/486 Dear fellow classmates, I am beyond disbelief that VP Harris did not win. If only people were more educated and cared about the world around them. But after VP Harris’ speech, I have hope that better days are coming. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19352 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19352 Fri, 08 Nov 2024 15:17:56 -0500 Help me write a letter, to express my disbelief in the election results to my fellow classmates https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19064 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2871?scroll_to=19064 I see you're reaching out to express your deeper feelings and thoughts about a significant American decision and how it impacts you. It's clear that this topic holds great importance for you, and you want to communicate it to your classmates in a letter that's rich in substance. You can write in response to my prompts in a *Reply* or by hitting *Add to Document*, and then adding *New Content.* To start, find a way to get comfortable. Shake out your hands, take a deep breath, settle into your chair. Close your eyes if you'd like to; relax. Find a way to be quietly and comfortably aware of your inner state. Ask yourself, "What's going on with me right now? Is there anything in the way of my writing today?" When you hear yourself answering, take a minute to jot down a list of any distractions or impediments that come to mind. Do you want to move to the next step? Fri, 08 Nov 2024 15:18:13 -0500 why is the race even this close? https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18971 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18971 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 22:27:35 -0500 so what does this mean for abortion rights? https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18918 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18918 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 21:31:10 -0500 are people able to cheat? https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18897 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18897 Let's break this question down using a Think Aloud routine, as we would in a Reading Apprenticeship approach. First, let's consider the phrase "are people able." This phrase indicates that we're talking about the capability or possibility of human actions. It's important to recognize that this isn't about a specific person but people in general. Next, let's look at the word "cheat." In this context, "cheat" refers to the act of being dishonest or breaking rules to gain an advantage. When we combine these chunks, we understand that the question is asking about the general capability of humans to engage in dishonest behavior. By thinking aloud, we can reflect on our own experiences and societal observations to see that, yes, people do have the ability to cheat. This understanding comes from recognizing human behavior and the choices individuals make in different situations. Now, I invite you all to think about this question further. How do you interpret the rest of this sentence? What connections can you make to your own experiences or observations? Feel free to share your own Think Alouds as we continue to explore this topic. Let's dive deeper into our comprehension, chunk by chunk, and see what insights we can uncover together! Tue, 05 Nov 2024 21:22:19 -0500 that was so ignorant and racist. To have normalize these actions is just wrong. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18889 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18889 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 21:18:44 -0500 this is getting too intense https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18845 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18845 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 21:05:48 -0500 would it even be possible to reinstate slavery? https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18841 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18841 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 22:32:20 -0500 trump is just deflecting from anyone questioning if he is cheating https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18835 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18835 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 21:03:20 -0500 how are they keeping the polls from being rigged? https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18829 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18829 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 21:01:26 -0500 what is the point of sending bomb threats to poll centers? https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18565 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18565 You seem to be expressing concern about the rationale behind sending bomb threats to poll centers. From what I understand, your main point is to question the purpose or motivation behind such actions. You might be highlighting the disruption and fear that these threats can cause, especially in a place meant for democratic processes like voting. One example you might be thinking about is how these threats can intimidate voters and potentially suppress voter turnout. Another point could be the strain it places on law enforcement and emergency services, diverting their attention from other important duties. It sounds like you are trying to understand the underlying reasons for such threats and their impact on society. You might be curious about the broader implications of these actions on public trust in the electoral process. Learn more about Sayback and add your comments in this document:https://writingpartners.net/documents/626?scroll_to=2461 Prepared by Erica Kaufman. Bard College Institute of Writing and Thinking. 2015. Tue, 05 Nov 2024 20:48:21 -0500 what’s the point of sending bomb threats to poll centers? https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18564 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=18564 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 20:48:21 -0500 Walz never directly answers questions that could make him look bad https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=10679 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=10679 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 He is saying bible verses and historical quotes to show that he is serious and cares https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=10352 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=10352 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 Walz and Vance are bringing wayy more respect than Trump brought which shows they came prepared and know better now https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=10317 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=10317 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 Walz actually understands that you win some and you lose some. It's okay https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=10303 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=10303 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 How did trump save Obama care? https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=10184 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=10184 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 So Vance doesn't agree with everything that Donald trump says? https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=10174 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=10174 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 There finally agreeing on something https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9919 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9919 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 Walz is right they should just leave it alone, before it came up everything was fine https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9831 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9831 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 Vance is agreeing to what Walz is saying but not connecting to what Trump believes and has said. Which is showing that he doesn't really want pro abortion to happen. https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9767 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9767 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 I like that Walz took accountability for his misspoken words which is honorable then being a known liar like trump https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9582 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9582 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 really making sure that everyone knows that he is for the people and are one of us https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9532 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9532 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 Majority of America is middle class and can relate more to Kamala and Walz https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9446 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9446 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 when did America ever have common sense? https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9385 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9385 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 Why is he so stuck on Kamala Harris and not answering the question? https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9342 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9342 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 They need to cut his mic off https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9238 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9238 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 Notice how all he has done so far is diminished Kamala's name so far and Walz has been protecting her name and actually answering the questions.. https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9206 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9206 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 He's saying as if that was her main goal when it was not her fault for any of it. https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9125 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9125 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 He just wants to ruin her name and spread lies about things Kamala Harris believes in and fights for https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9046 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=9046 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 No one wants to earn under the amount of minimum wage, that's insane https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=8998 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=8998 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 When has trump ever cared about making the earth clean or fixing climate change?? https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=8951 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=8951 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 The start of the Hamas war crimes on civilians in palestine. https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=8877 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=8877 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 why does it sound like he is he trying to help Donald trump? https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=8787 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=8787 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 He's too distracted on people knowing who he is https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=8697 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=8697 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 I guess they learnt from trump to mute the mics when the time is over. https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=8639 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=8639 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 I hope he asks where the decency is too because when that was said I was in shock because the amount of disrespect in that moment was wild. https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=8615 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1340?scroll_to=8615 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 He's really trying to show a part of him that not a lot of political people would normally show https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8602 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8602 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 he really wants everyone to know that he is human so he knows what it's like to go through things. But, also that everyone belongs and matters https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8596 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8596 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 He is showing his humor so that people can connect with him instead of all business. https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8589 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8589 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 I like how he showed respect by first thanking people. https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8580 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1341?scroll_to=8580 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 Where is he getting animal eating from, he just wants to distract everyone from the point but it's clearly not working. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5920 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5920 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 Trump does not know a word that's coming out of his mouth https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5919 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5919 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 he swears he can say anything because he has the money to back it up https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5916 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5916 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 Where is he getting this info from because it sounds dumb. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5692 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5692 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 He needs to be at least answer yes or no to one question. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5675 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5675 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 He's talking about Biden badly knowing they besties https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5672 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5672 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 he claims he's so badly against the abortion ban but knows that would be the first thing he'd do if elected. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5669 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5669 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 You cant have an abortion your 9th month, that's just cold blood murder of a fully grown human. That's not okay. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5649 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5649 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 I can see where Kamala is coming from she actually wants to make america great again. She believes she can be the change. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5637 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5637 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 Why is he so obsessed with china? https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5607 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5607 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 Why lie when he whole hearted supported project 2025. He said himself that he came up with most of the things on it. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5595 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5595 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:33 -0500 He acts like he is innocent when he was the president during a huge pandemic and left everyone to die when it came the big stuff of the pandemic. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5582 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5582 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 She takes him and everything he says as a complete joke. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5571 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5571 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 I love how she told us where she comes from what she cares about. Before she gets into the deeper things of the debate unlike how trump just got right down to it. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5566 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5566 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 He did not have to bring up his racist comment about eating animals https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5538 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=5538 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 He was already in the wrong for even bringing it up, but calling innocent human beings aliens is outrageous. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4970 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4970 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 What did trump mean by "pay us back for all we have done"? https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4908 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4908 When Trump says "pay us back for all we have done," he is likely referring to various forms of acknowledgment he believes the U.S. deserves from other countries or entities. This could include financial compensation, policy concessions, or some form of reciprocal action. Trump often frames his statements in terms of deals or transactions, suggesting that the U.S. has provided significant benefits or support to other nations and should be compensated in return. Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 That's what he is best at https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4875 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4875 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 He says that she paid her supporters to be at her rallies but wasn't that him? https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4865 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4865 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 Why is America okay with electing a convicted felon? https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4856 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4856 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 trump is very ignorant and condescending https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4849 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4849 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 Trump doesn't want to talk about women's rights in being incontrol of our bodies because he knows he wants to be the one to control them. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4847 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4847 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 Kamala really voiced her opinion and what causes she supports https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4842 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4842 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 did trump sell American chips to china? https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4599 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4599 Let's dive into this claim made by Kamala Harris about Trump allegedly selling American chips to China. To properly fact-check this claim, we need to understand the context and specifics of any transactions involving American semiconductor chips and China during Trump's administration. Would you like to see more? Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 It shows that kamala cared enough to prepare a speech about her future plans and intentions, while trump just cares about looking good. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4115 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=4115 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 he's ignorant but wants to put on a big act https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3996 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3996 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 He's so stuck on defending himself instead of telling us his plans after the election. https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3977 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3977 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 his feelings are hurt so he's deciding to attack her and make up lies https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3916 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3916 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 he's actively dodging the questions but replying to what she says https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3885 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3885 Wed, 12 Mar 2025 23:13:39 -0400 even she knows he's wrong https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3803 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3803 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 Trump is trying to pin kamala as the bad guy https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3687 https://writingpartners.net/documents/743?scroll_to=3687 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500 He doesn't really care about it being unfair, he just doesn't want them here at all. https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3275 https://writingpartners.net/documents/769?scroll_to=3275 Tue, 05 Nov 2024 19:27:32 -0500