Comments by Josh H Josh Hale Most recent public comments by Josh H Josh Hale https://writingpartners.net/users/489 Summarize this https://writingpartners.net/documents/6450?scroll_to=41210 https://writingpartners.net/documents/6450?scroll_to=41210 The document explores the role of AI in educational settings, particularly at Judge, focusing on how to effectively use AI to support students without it replacing critical thinking and learning. It expresses interest in understanding AI's benefits and challenges in schools, noting both positive applications, like using AI for checking work in English classes, and drawbacks, such as the risk of cheating and the unreliability of AI-generated information. The writer acknowledges the controversial nature of AI's use in education, where some advocate for its full integration while others oppose it due to potential misuse. The document suggests that AI will become an integral part of the future, and therefore, its use in schools should be optimized early. Various perspectives on AI's role in education are summarized, highlighting the balance between leveraging AI's advantages and addressing its limitations. Fri, 21 Mar 2025 11:40:10 -0600 There are many aspects of AI that could be beneficial to schooling but there could also be some drawbacks. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4989?scroll_to=36655 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4989?scroll_to=36655 Tue, 11 Feb 2025 10:59:50 -0700 AI doesn't guarantee that the information you're getting is correct which could be a big problem. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4989?scroll_to=36651 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4989?scroll_to=36651 Tue, 11 Feb 2025 10:58:55 -0700 There can be problems with AI use in schools. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4989?scroll_to=36644 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4989?scroll_to=36644 Tue, 11 Feb 2025 10:58:06 -0700 AI is already in use by many students at schools. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4989?scroll_to=36633 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4989?scroll_to=36633 Tue, 11 Feb 2025 10:56:39 -0700 George Orwell predicts that sex becomes something that should be avoided and shamed. However, history has shown us that sex has only become more open and a more common occurrence. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=36016 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=36016 Tue, 04 Feb 2025 10:30:48 -0700 Winston explains that him buying a prostitute was an act of rebellion against the party. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=35111 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=35111 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 09:14:46 -0700 This paragraph shows how effective the party's methods have been to discourage sex. https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=35110 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=35110 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 09:12:09 -0700 To maintain control the party has tried to steer people away from having romantic relationships so people don't have a bigger commitment then the party https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=35109 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4009?scroll_to=35109 Tue, 28 Jan 2025 08:59:44 -0700 How well did I respond to the prompt with a thesis that analyzes the writer’s rhetorical choices? https://writingpartners.net/documents/4075?scroll_to=32852 https://writingpartners.net/documents/4075?scroll_to=32852 Your thesis effectively recognizes Rita Dove's use of rhetorical choices like ethos and repetition to connect with the audience and convey wishes, rather than advice. You've pointed out how she establishes ethos by mentioning her long history at the university and her accomplishments, which indeed bolsters her credibility. To elevate your response, delve further into how these rhetorical strategies align with her ultimate purpose: inspiring graduates to embrace growth and uncertainty. Perhaps exploring Dove's playful use of language, such as her "contrary fairy godmother" analogy, could add depth. Consider these: How might Dove's style—brimming with wit and subtext—impact her audience? How do her anecdotes reinforce her ethos? Does her nuanced definition of "hunger" represent more than just a wish? Choose any direction or even all! Let this analysis soar to new heights! Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like your helpful AP English Language teacher in room 126. Fri, 17 Jan 2025 11:47:41 -0700 It feels like the election was dependent on what PA's vote was. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=20374 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2862?scroll_to=20374 Tue, 12 Nov 2024 08:50:14 -0700 Kamal Harris uses precise language in her speech but is very vague about how she is going to get what she wants done. She never gives her plans on what she will do. https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3389 https://writingpartners.net/documents/772?scroll_to=3389 Tue, 10 Sep 2024 10:58:22 -0600