Comments by Ashley Central Most recent public comments by Ashley Central https://writingpartners.net/users/851 Your title is very attention grabbing and gives the readers insight to what your point in your essay is about which is that its important that people as a whole understand injustice and fight for equality. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2438?scroll_to=17574 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2438?scroll_to=17574 Thu, 31 Oct 2024 14:54:34 -0400 I like that even tho you have not experienced racism first hand, you can see how it affects others, it's important because you are not speaking up about a topic just because it relates to you, it shows selflessness and compassion to others in your essay https://writingpartners.net/documents/2369?scroll_to=17571 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2369?scroll_to=17571 Thu, 31 Oct 2024 14:52:15 -0400 I like that the quote you use shows how social just not only negatively affects the person being victimized but how the person taking advantage of others is negatively impacted as well due to others having cynical view towards them. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2341?scroll_to=17566 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2341?scroll_to=17566 Thu, 31 Oct 2024 14:46:01 -0400 I like that you stated simple things like giving your seat to an elderly person and returning someone else's dropped belongings can have such a strong impact on the way people can contribute to social justice for others and how it can enlighten you. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2446?scroll_to=17552 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2446?scroll_to=17552 Thu, 31 Oct 2024 14:39:39 -0400 I like how you stated reasons how you personally can contribute to social justice, I think this is important because social justice starts with recognizing problems and thinking of what you can do to change them. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2311?scroll_to=17533 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2311?scroll_to=17533 Thu, 31 Oct 2024 14:29:51 -0400 You did a good job analyzing your quotes they are very in depth, I agree that economic injustice should be discussed more and more recognised as well https://writingpartners.net/documents/2375?scroll_to=17521 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2375?scroll_to=17521 Thu, 31 Oct 2024 14:22:43 -0400 The way that you described the effect of how not having access to Internet can result in missing out on educational tools is clearly explained in your essay. I liked that this example is a relevant issue that happens around the world currently. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2355?scroll_to=17466 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2355?scroll_to=17466 Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:13:23 -0400 You stated a good example that protesting and raising awareness can make a positive change in society. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2453?scroll_to=17446 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2453?scroll_to=17446 Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:06:05 -0400 I liked the quote that you used because it displays that women want to stand up to the violence that is brought on upon them. You made a good example of how this quote affects you personally due to the violence and injustice that's spread around the world https://writingpartners.net/documents/1874?scroll_to=17372 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1874?scroll_to=17372 Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:50:40 -0400 I like that you used the information on how women get paid less than men to relate to how it could affect your future. You also clearly and effectively wrapped up your main points in the conclusion. https://writingpartners.net/documents/2340?scroll_to=17330 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2340?scroll_to=17330 Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:43:05 -0400 give me an engaging headline relating to my essay https://writingpartners.net/documents/2316?scroll_to=16884 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2316?scroll_to=16884 Let's start with some prompts and strategies to help you craft an engaging headline for your essay. These strategies are inspired by the Engaging Headline Writing Strategy guide. Choose one of these strategies to write your own headline: ### Prompts and Strategies for Writing Your Own 1. **Use Power Words** Think about the most emotionally charged aspect of your essay. What powerful emotions are you trying to evoke in your readers? Words like "freedom," "empowerment," or "rights" could be compelling. For example, a headline could be, "Empowerment in the Face of Opposition: A Teen's View on Abortion Rights." Consider what power words best capture the essence of your essay. 2. **Incorporate Numbers** Consider making a numeric promise to your reader. Maybe you want to highlight a number of reasons or arguments you present in your essay. For example, "3 Reasons Why Abortion Rights Matter to Teens Today." This approach can help organize your ideas and make them more appealing to a reader. 3. **Create Urgency** What about your essay's topic is urgent or time-sensitive? Highlight that to compel readers to engage immediately. For instance, "Act Now: The Fight for Abortion Rights is Every Teen's Battle." This kind of headline suggests that the issue is pressing and requires immediate attention. 4. **Ask Provocative Questions** Can you frame your essay's central argument as a question that challenges your readers? A question like "Should Teens Have a Say in Abortion Rights?" can provoke thought and curiosity, encouraging readers to seek out your perspective. 5. **Use Humor or Puns** If appropriate, consider a light-hearted or clever twist on your topic. Humor can be a powerful way to engage readers, making serious topics more approachable. You might try something like "Right to Choose—or Lose?: A Teen's Take on Abortion Rights." Play around with words to find a unique angle that fits your voice. Now it's your turn! Choose one of these strategies and write your own headline in a *Reply*. Once you've done that, ask in a *Reply with AI* and select me to give you feedback on your headline. Also, remember to ask your teacher or other students what they think of your headline. Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:51:19 -0400 I am ready for step 2 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2316?scroll_to=16840 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2316?scroll_to=16840 **Step 2: How to Publish Your Document** When you’re ready to publish your document, follow these steps to add it to the Youth Voices Collection: 1. **Join the Youth Voices Group:** Make sure you’ve joined the Youth Voices group or have been added by an admin. You can join here: [Youth Voices Group](https://writingpartners.net/groups/youthvoices). 2. **Create an Engaging Headline:** Use the [Headline Hero Writing Partner](https://writingpartners.net/partners/247) to craft an amazing title for your document. - **How to Change Your Title:** - Hover over "More" and click on "Properties," then "Edit." - Scroll down to the Title box, write your new title, and hit the Finish button at the bottom. 3. **Add Your Document to the Youth Voices Public Collection:** - While viewing your document, hover over the "More" tab at the top and select "Add to a Collection." - In the Collection drop-down menu, choose "Youth Voices," then click Add. - If prompted that your document will become public, confirm by clicking Yes, continue. 4. **Write a Two-Sentence Preview:** In the Excerpt text box, make it intriguing! 5. **Add an Image:** Click on Choose File next to “Add an Image,” then hit Add. Once you’re done with Step 2, let me know if you’re ready for Step 3! Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:51:19 -0400 I'm ready to publish https://writingpartners.net/documents/2316?scroll_to=16819 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2316?scroll_to=16819 Great! Before we proceed with publishing, let's make sure your work is ready to shine by focusing on the three key elements mentioned in Step 1: 1. **Catchy Headline:** Make sure your headline is full of energy and draws readers in. You might want to use something like "Empowering Choice: My Stand on Abortion Rights" or "Fighting for Freedom: A Teen's Perspective on Abortion." 2. **Eye-Catching Image:** Choose an image that is relevant to your topic and grabs attention. You can find free images from sites like Unsplash or Pixabay, but make sure it's appropriate for public sharing. 3. **Two-Sentence Teaser:** Write a teaser that hooks readers and gives them a taste of what’s inside your document. For example, "In a world where women's rights are increasingly under threat, I explore the critical importance of choice and autonomy over one's body." Once you have these elements ready, let me know when you're ready for Step 2! Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:51:19 -0400 I liked the way you clearly stated your quote but you should add a couple paragraphs https://writingpartners.net/documents/1874?scroll_to=14748 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1874?scroll_to=14748 Thu, 17 Oct 2024 13:05:41 -0400