Comments by Dylan Central

I like this use of literature we've used in class and your analysis of it is well worded and fitting for this essay

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:18:05 -0400

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Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:13:39 -0400

I think agree with the last line and it is very well worded

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Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:11:09 -0400

I liked the personal connection to social justice you demonstrated. You included ur own as experiences and perspective as a young Black man in America. It is important to share these stories and I commend you for that.

I love how you included this

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:05:05 -0400

Something I think is sometimes forgotten in the conversation about social justice, is the journey to action and radicalization, which is first understandng. People to be educated before they are motivated to take action and I appreciate how you took to the time to point that out. great job

Great example of a real life influences on your values. Social justice is such a personal topic and I like how you demonstrated how it shaped you since it is such a prevalent thing in our society

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:58:15 -0400

Very nice integration of the topic

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:52:44 -0400

The transition from the quote into your topic was very good. It was a good set up and eases the reader into your essay. I also enjoy how to chose a unique perspective while still staying on topic

Pretty good intro

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:46:32 -0400

Your intro paragraph is very good. I like how to established your idea of social justice then gave an example of this ideal world. My only note is to add details on what action needs to or is happening to get to his ideal world

is this a good title

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 13:00:06 -0400

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