Comments by Ilyas Central

response

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:06:40 -0400

I understand why you think this will help control gun violence but most people who commit heinous crimes with guns get them illegally so making it harder to get firearm legally wont really do anything. In my opinion the American government is spending their funding the wrong way.

references

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:51:52 -0400

It really adds so much more depth using your own experience and using evidence from the book it makes the essay so much more meaningful Also the title of the essay justice through my eyes is so intriguing and makes me want to read more.

personal evidence

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:36:20 -0400

I feel like using evidence from the book and evidence from your life adds so much more depth to the essay it makes it so much more better I really like it.

I'm ready for step 2

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 17:17:53 -0400

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I'm ready to upload

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 17:17:58 -0400

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I'm ready to go public

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:58:48 -0400

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