Comments by Karen Central

The essay goes very in depth about the author's view on social justice. It uses multiple books to explain the social injustice faced by people, especially people of color. This paragraph helps the readers understand what social in justice is through books

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:26:17 -0400

I like how it has a theme throughtout.

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:21:56 -0400

Making the essay mainly about abortion rights creates a well rounded theme about a specific topic.

Provokes emotional feeling

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:12:57 -0400

The personal experience used does a good job at evoking emotion in the essay. As the author describes how they have faced injustice, it provokes an emotional feeling as we read. I like how it also wraps around to talk about how it affected the author and what they would do to uphold social justice.

The theme of the essay is very clear.

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:02:30 -0400

The essay starts off well as it talks about social justice in America. It continues to go on to talk about a personal experience about a group of people who were affected by social injustice in the US. This makes the essay stronger as it shows how much social injustice in the US can impact people. The essay does a good job at criticizing America's social justice system with it's strong reasoning.

The use of figurative language helps make the essay clear.

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:04:45 -0400

Throughout the essay, figurative language is used to further explain some of the points used. It also talks about personal experience and their perspective on social justice. The use of figurative language makes the essay flow really well as it gives a better understanding of the author's point

The essay does a good job at describing ways social injustice is important and why we need it.

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:45:02 -0400

The paragraph about other factors in social justice is well explained. It provides the reader with new ideas and different perspectives. Overall the essay talks about what social justice is and how it affects our lives.

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Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:45:09 -0400

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