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Wed, 06 Nov 2024 13:07:12 -0500

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Thu, 31 Oct 2024 22:52:12 -0400

I really enjoy the photo you used. It emphasizes your talking points in the paragraph making it feel very powerful.

hi

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:13:55 -0400

I like how you acknowledge that change isn't easy. I feel that many people think that changing someone's mindset is simple when in reality its not.

Hi Dylan :3

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:09:00 -0400

I find this essay very engaging and intelligent. It's incredibly clear that you are well educated on the topic of social justice and you're essay reflects that. Reading it,I felt even more informed about the injustice of minorities. Your views of social justice are very strong and make your essay incredibly insightful and engaging.

Hi Renzo Huffman

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:01:25 -0400

I like how you used Philly in your paragraph. It gives it a sense of familiarity as I and many others live in Philly. That familiar feeling makes your paragraph more engaging and makes you want to read.

HI :3

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:56:03 -0400

I think your view on Social justice is a very interesting concept. Karma being social justice is not a common stance and I think your essay does a good job expanding your view.

Hi Sammy Elnafe

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:51:58 -0400

I really enjoy this paragraph due to its vocabulary. Every sentence speaks to you and grabs your attention, making you want to read more.

Hi Saddiq Vegas

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:45:43 -0400

I found this essay very unique but impactful. The use of stereotypes to describe discrimination and quote of a powerful like MLK make this essay special.

Hi Jacob Chin

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:41:09 -0400

I really enjoyed this essay as it was very insightful and engaging. Your vocabulary gave your topics impact while also allowing them to be understandable.

Hi Cason lee

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:56:48 -0400

I like the literature you used in the essay. It really complements your talking points as it builds on what you've discussed by showing other points of view from professionals.

what is a good title for this essay

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:54:43 -0400

Let's explore some options for your essay title that weave together your personal journey and the larger theme of social justice. You could consider something like "Walking Through Shadows: A Personal Journey of Social Justice" or "Breaking Chains: Personal Reflections on Social Justice." These titles aim to encapsulate your experiences and the broader societal context. Would you like more suggestions, or is there a particular direction you're leaning toward?

what is a good header for this essay

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:54:43 -0400

Your essay dives deep into personal experiences and broad social issues, so a good header would need to reflect that depth and insight. How about something that captures the essence of both personal narrative and the broader fight for justice? Are you thinking more along the lines of a direct statement or something metaphorical? Let me know if you'd like to hear more ideas.

Im finished with step 2. Im ready with step 3

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:47:27 -0400

Step 3: Commenting on Other Documents

In Step 3, you’ll be engaging with other students by commenting on their documents in the Youth Voices Collection. Here’s how you can participate: - You can leave comments in various parts of a document, such as: – Specific sentences or paragraphs – Sections of an image – Time-stamped moments within a video – General Document Comments - Check out these “Annotation Instructions” [here](https://writingpartners.net/documents/1876) for tips on commenting effectively. - Remember, you can enhance your comments by adding images (using URLs) and videos (with embed codes). Once you’re comfortable with these steps, feel free to delete or archive this guide. Enjoy contributing to the conversation!

Im ready for step 2

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:47:27 -0400

Step 2: How to Publish Your Document

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Im ready to publish

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:47:27 -0400

Great work on getting your document ready to go public! Now, let’s proceed to Step 1: Get Ready to Go Public. Here's what you need to focus on before publishing: - **Catchy Headline:** Create a headline that is full of energy and draws readers in. - **Eye-catching Image:** Choose an image that will grab attention. - **Two-sentence Teaser:** Write a two-sentence teaser that hooks readers and gives them a taste of what’s inside. Once you’ve crafted your headline, selected your image, and written your teaser, let me know and we can move on to Step 2.