Comments by Sadie Central Most recent public comments by Sadie Central https://writingpartners.net/users/872 This sentence, "Will I lose my life if I don’t have safe access to an abortion?" is important, because it shows that even if some think abortion is "morally wrong," this is less important than a woman's life https://writingpartners.net/documents/2341?scroll_to=17422 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2341?scroll_to=17422 Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:00:25 -0400 Book https://writingpartners.net/documents/2446?scroll_to=17398 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2446?scroll_to=17398 Using a book as an example of what happens with social injustice, someone fighting against others insulting them, and then getting punished for it, is a good way for the author to show the reader what social justice is to them with an example. Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:56:08 -0400 Paragraph 2 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2404?scroll_to=17382 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2404?scroll_to=17382 Your personal experience in this paragraph is relatable for many students, which shows just how prevalent of an issue this is and how we need to stop this issue Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:52:10 -0400 Figurative Language https://writingpartners.net/documents/2346?scroll_to=17368 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2346?scroll_to=17368 This metaphor, "their insults kept shooting at me like a water gun" really shows how the others acted towards the author and adds to the author talking about their personal experience. Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:49:58 -0400 Quote https://writingpartners.net/documents/1874?scroll_to=17351 https://writingpartners.net/documents/1874?scroll_to=17351 This quote by Las Hermanas Mirabal, "It’s about time we women had a voice in running our country." really resonates with me right now, as there is currently a woman running for president, while the other candidate is trying to remove a woman's right to have an abortion Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:46:40 -0400 Paragraph 3 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2362?scroll_to=17333 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2362?scroll_to=17333 The author writing about their own experience and using descriptive language really adds to the understanding of the author's views of social justice and injustice Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:43:51 -0400 Paragraph 2 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2336?scroll_to=17322 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2336?scroll_to=17322 This paragraph discusses the humanitarian crisis occurring in Sudan and shows how the writer educated themself on that topic. This shows that the writer really cares about this, because often people do not try to educate themselves on issues, which is a threat to social justice. Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:41:12 -0400 Figurative Language https://writingpartners.net/documents/2364?scroll_to=17303 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2364?scroll_to=17303 This metaphor, "Social justice, the act of fighting against a collective injustice, is just one thread in the weave that connects us all as people" really helps the reader understand what social justice is to the writer, something that connects people Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:38:32 -0400 Paragraph 2 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2366?scroll_to=17299 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2366?scroll_to=17299 Paragraph 2 really shows your personal experience and how it affects what social justice is to you Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:36:40 -0400 Hook https://writingpartners.net/documents/2373?scroll_to=17291 https://writingpartners.net/documents/2373?scroll_to=17291 Starting with a statistic is a good way to hook readers, tell them what the essay is about, and engage them Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:32:12 -0400