Comments by Sean Central

The introduction was good, starting with a very good hook about how Americans can't afford healthcare. Backing it up with statistics and a picture to show the drastic impact.

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:12:53 -0400

Abortion is a good topic and a very controversial topic to speak up. I liked how there were multiple examples/ information that showed the distress and the unfairness of not being able to have an abortion.

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:09:35 -0400

I think that the economy is a good example of social justice, showing personal experiences, and giving us prior information that 67% of a nation's wealth is from the top population and the heinous activities that ensue because of that imbalance.

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:06:30 -0400

The introduction was very good, showing us the ideas, examples, and even personal things for the introduction, showing the discrimination and oppression of African Americans.

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:03:17 -0400

I like the introduction, hooking us up with a good example, of workload, and unfairness. With a unique taste of social justice, it is different from the other ones like freedom.

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:00:30 -0400

The first paragraph was elite, showing a personal experience mixed with different situations of discrimination and ignorance, overall on a personal level. It also includes good examples that wee recently read or is reading like animal farm.

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:56:12 -0400

I liked how you gave an example of Philly, where most if not all, of us live. You showed relatable things such as insufficient funding, wealth disparity, and the struggle for health services.

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:53:17 -0400

I liked how you gave a real-world example of how 63 percent of people experience racism every day. Showing the atmosphere of the situation.

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:50:52 -0400

Good examples included women's rights personal experience, racism, and unfairness in rights. Overall it's good to go in full depth of freedom rights, racism, bias, and just overall the freedom that people get or given based on if they're a certain race.

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:48:01 -0400

Ì liked how he used Martin Luther King Jr. Same quote as I did. With also mentions real-life scenarios and things that happen daily, with the reasoning for all this is because of ignorance. A great word for putting them into a better idea and perspective.

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 13:16:39 -0400

Im ready for step 2

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:45:02 -0400

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Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:45:02 -0400

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