Comments by Yaretzy Central

Commentary

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 23:06:25 -0400

While reading this I felt a sense of empathy for hard-working people who get discriminated against for no real reason. I like how you include past events that you have seen which impacted how you see things today and how you feel about certain things.

Commentary

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 22:55:59 -0400

I like how statistics are included so that we have a clear idea of how serious this problem with healthcare is and how it's been happening for a pretty long time. I also like the inclusion of the "American Dream" in someway making it seem hypocritical for when thinking of a dream you think of something unrealistic and amazing but not having something simple like reasonable healthcare makes it seem less of a dream to live in. Overall the writing topic of having reasonable prices for healthcare is important so that we have something less to worry about.

Agreement/Relatability

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 22:41:32 -0400

I agree with the topic of allowing women to have a choice in their lives with legal rights. Abortion seems to take much of the space when talking about women right's rights. With agreeing to be in a scenario of having a medically unsafe pregnancy abortion would be best to not risk me knowing the harm that will come if the pregnancy is continued. Being Catholic myself I relate to being told abortion is wrong and a sin but, I don't see it that way abortion should be a legal right for every women who needs it.

Clear and Well Explained

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 22:26:40 -0400

This essay really gives a clear understandment on the difference of equity and equality while still regrading the topic of social justice. That the misleading idea that equality is connected more with social justice rather than equity but in reality it being vise versa.

Agreement

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 18:33:29 -0400

I agree with the topic that women should be treated better and regulations to make society safer. Having a safe environment/society is important for everyone. Also I like the approach to the topic of women's rights and how some think of these rights as foolish while some politicians try to get rid of some of these rights. Taking away these rights is like taking away some basic human for women.

Commentary

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 13:13:02 -0400

Reading through the writing I realized the importance of using your voice to be heard. Using your voice implements acting against injustice so, that when you see something that isn't right like discrimination you express your dissatisfaction towards injustice.

Agreement

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:51:01 -0400

Reading through it opened my mind to how harsh society is. To the point where society has normalized acts of injustice like what you said in your writing. I agree Standing up to discrimination is important because if we don't we will live in a cruel world were their is no empathy for others. This is why it's important to advocate against discrimination.

I appreciate your writing making me feel some connection to it.

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 12:44:07 -0400

Reading through the essay, I'm in awe of how often injustices occur in society. It makes me think deeply about how society tries to cover up these acts of injustice by not talking about them. I like that you talked about these topics, which affect us all somehow showing the seriousness of these injustices is important.

Step 3

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:54:11 -0400

Step 3: Commenting on Other Documents

In Step 3, you’ll be engaging with other students by commenting on their documents in the Youth Voices Collection. Here’s how you can participate: - You can leave comments in various parts of a document, such as: – Specific sentences or paragraphs – Sections of an image – Time-stamped moments within a video – General Document Comments - Check out these “Annotation Instructions” [here](https://writingpartners.net/documents/1876) for tips on commenting effectively. - Remember, you can enhance your comments by adding images (using URLs) and videos (with embed codes). Once you’re comfortable with these steps, feel free to delete or archive this guide. Enjoy contributing to the conversation!

Tips on how to create a good head line

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:46:19 -0400

Prompts and Strategies for Writing Your Own

1. **Use Power Words**: Start by thinking of words that evoke strong emotions or curiosity related to your topic. What words can you use to make your headline pop and grab attention instantly? For example, consider the emotional impact of words like "transformative," "astonishing," or "revealing." Craft a sentence that uses such words to ignite interest. 2. **Incorporate Numbers**: Consider if your topic can be broken down into a list or series of points. Numbers like "3 Ways to..." or "Top 5 Tips for..." can promise concise, useful information, making your headline more appealing. Think about the key points you want to highlight and create a headline that suggests a list format. 3. **Create Urgency**: How can you give your headline a sense of urgency? Phrases like "Act Now" or "Limited Time Offer" can encourage readers to engage quickly. Reflect on any time-sensitive elements of your content and weave them into a compelling headline. 4. **Ask Provocative Questions**: What question can you pose that would intrigue your readers and prompt them to seek answers? Consider what your audience cares about or is curious about, and form a question that directly addresses these interests, sparking curiosity and engagement. 5. **Use Humor or Puns**: Can you think of a clever play on words or a humorous twist that relates to your topic? Humor can make your headline memorable and engaging. Think about puns or light-hearted phrases that could relate to your subject matter and draw readers in with a smile. Choose one of these strategies and write your headline in a *Reply*. Then, in a separate *Reply with AI*, ask me for feedback on your headline. Remember to also ask your teacher or other students for their thoughts on your creation.

Step 2

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:45:03 -0400

Step 2: How to Publish Your Document

When you’re ready to publish your document, follow these steps to add it to the Youth Voices Collection: - First, make sure you’ve joined the Youth Voices group or have been added by an admin. You can join here: [Youth Voices Group](https://writingpartners.net/groups/youthvoices). - Create an engaging headline for your document. Use the [Headline Hero Writing Partner](https://writingpartners.net/partners/247) to craft an amazing title.

Here's how to change your title:

– To change your title, hover over More and click on Properties, then Edit. Scroll down to the Title box, write your new title, and hit the Finish button at the bottom.

Here's how to add your document to the Youth Voices public collection

- While viewing your document, hover over the More tab at the top and select Add to a Collection. - In the Collection drop-down menu, choose Youth Voices, then click Add. If prompted that your document will become public, confirm by clicking Yes, continue. - Write a two-sentence preview of your document in the Excerpt text box. Make it intriguing! - Add an image by clicking on Choose File next to “Add an Image”, then hit Add. Once you’re done with Step 2, let me know if you’re ready for Step 3!

Step 2

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:54:11 -0400

Step 2: How to Publish Your Document

Here's how to change your title:

– To change your title, hover over More and click on Properties, then Edit. Scroll down to the Title box, write your new title, and hit the Finish button at the bottom.

Here's how to add your document to the Youth Voices public collection

I'm ready to upload

Wed, 30 Oct 2024 12:43:31 -0400

Great! Let's start with Step 1.

Step 1: Get Ready to Go Public

- We’re going to add your document to the Youth Voices Collection. This means your work becomes part of a public conversation: – Anyone on the Internet can see it. – Others can comment on it if they’re part of Writing Partners. – You can always edit your document and control comments on it.

Going public is exciting, so let’s make sure your work shines by focusing on three things:

– A catchy headline that’s full of energy and draws readers in. – An eye-catching image that grabs attention. – A two-sentence teaser that hooks readers and gives them a taste of what’s inside. Let me know when you’re ready for Step 2!