Comments by Jesse Central

Using Violence

Fri, 01 Nov 2024 22:30:31 -0400

I agree because if violence is shown, people around you are going to suffer the consequences and people will be watching. This reminds me of a classroom setting where the teacher punished the whole class for one person misbehaving.

Ego

Fri, 01 Nov 2024 22:28:36 -0400

I agree with this, I think that ego plays a huge role in unfair treatment. It also proves how fragile their ego is. They are willing to bring others down to build up their brittle pedestal for their fragile ego.

Impact

Fri, 01 Nov 2024 22:15:57 -0400

One false accusation and confirmation can have a major negative impact on a person. I have experienced this and it took a long time for its effects to no longer affect me. Some people however, aren't so fortunate. It reminds me of the youngest person sent to death row who turned out to be innocent.

Assuming

Fri, 01 Nov 2024 22:09:29 -0400

I agree that people can't help you if they don't know the situation. Most people assume the situation which is terrible and can lead to the situation deescalating. I feel like this is the number one reason why people fight.

Guns

Fri, 01 Nov 2024 22:06:03 -0400

How would guns protect lives? From an individual standpoint, yes, you are defending your life and the people you cherish. On the other hand, guns are used in wars to defend one's country. Gun usage varies from place to place, but overall, it depends on the situation.

Guns

Fri, 01 Nov 2024 18:01:47 -0400

I agree because people are still fearful of guns even if they own one. One story I've heard is when a mother had no other choice but to defend herself and her three year old toddler from an armed intruder. From the 911 call, she was scared, but still picked up a gun and shot the intruder. Seeing/wielding something that can take a person's life can be terrifying.

Learning from mistakes

Fri, 01 Nov 2024 17:14:38 -0400

I agree, when people grieve, they learn something new. From realizing that cherished moments aren't going to last, to experiencing something so traumatic that you wish would never happen to anyone else. Yes we are still experiencing injustices but its overlooked and it becomes the norm.

Favoritism

Fri, 01 Nov 2024 16:28:59 -0400

I think that this is common in households with two or more kids. The law prohibits more than one wife because you will favor one more than the other. This also applies to children, but there is no law prohibiting more than one child. We all know that prohibiting more than one child created a huge problem back in China.

Racism

Fri, 01 Nov 2024 07:30:23 -0400

Since this is happening in a school environment, it means that the school is used to this, but isn't doing anything about it.

Online

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 14:59:47 -0400

I often see people talking about their experience expecting people to side with them. It's honestly pathetic and it really shows how people like them never admit that they're in the wrong and take to the internet to get people to back them up.

Can you give me a headline for this essay?

Thu, 31 Oct 2024 08:06:54 -0400

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