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What does he mean the american dream because everyone has a different perspective on the american dream

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put people first but when he was president he put him his family and his billionaire friends first so what will make him change?

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is this accurate

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To address your question about Coach Walz’s strategy, let’s break down each claim one paragraph at a time.

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First, regarding his focus on protecting reproductive health care: Walz has indeed been vocal about supporting reproductive rights. This aligns with his broader Democratic platform and the statements he has made in various speeches and interviews. His stance on this issue is consistent with the party’s position and aims to ensure that reproductive health care remains accessible.

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Climate change a hoax?Then wanting to invest in it to kill more people and hes for the people huh??

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how did kamalas polices use moe energy?

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What do he mean, yo he didnt even answer the question you??

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illegal aliens is crazyy

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So is he saying his alleged aliens are trafficking children

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Is kamala younger than vance

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No, Kamala Harris is not younger than JD Vance or Michael Walz. Kamala Harris was born on October 20, 1964, which makes her older than both JD Vance, who was born on August 2, 1984, and Michael Walz, who was born on January 31, 1974.
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Thats literally the same thing you said in different fonts?

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ts giving uneducated mmh

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So is not that your presidents job to implement talk about him?

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clock it!!!

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Does trump pay his taxes?

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To address your question directly: the issue of whether former President Donald Trump pays his taxes has been a matter of public scrutiny for years. It’s important to note that paying taxes and the amount of taxes paid can vary greatly depending on an individual’s income, deductions, and the complexity of their financial dealings.

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Its not your turn stop interrupting very unqualified

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The kids joke is enough now not funny

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s this accurate

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Let’s dig into this claim that Donald Trump created the largest trade deficit in American history with China.

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To start with, it’s important to get a clear picture of what the trade deficit actually looked like during Trump’s presidency. According to data from the U.S. Census Bureau, the trade deficit with China did hit record levels in some years under Trump. For example, in 2018, the trade deficit with China reached $418.9 billion, which was the highest on record at that time.

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I dont get how kamala is behind the bad economy is then joe biden was the president

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id like to know more about this topic

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Walz Fact-Checking Simulator with Ipa O's edits:
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Absolutely, let’s dive into that! JD Vance has made several claims about both Trump’s and Harris’s economic records that warrant closer scrutiny.

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To start with Trump’s economic record, Vance has often highlighted the Tax Cuts and Jobs Act (TCJA) of 2017 as a pivotal achievement. However, it’s crucial to note that the benefits of this tax cut were distributed unevenly. According to the Tax Policy Center, in 2018, the top 1% of earners received about 20.5% of the tax cut benefits, which increased to about one-quarter by 2025. By 2027, when the individual tax cuts are set to expire, about 83% of the benefits would go to the wealthiest 1%. This contrasts with Vance’s portrayal of the tax cuts as broadly beneficial to all income groups.

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s this claim true?

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Okay, let’s dive into Vance’s claim that if Trump gets reelected, “we will go back to being affordable.” This is a broad statement that touches on various aspects of the economy. Let’s break it down piece by piece.

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First, consider the economic policies Trump implemented during his presidency. He signed the Tax Cuts and Jobs Act in 2017, which lowered corporate tax rates and aimed to boost economic growth. According to the Tax Policy Center, while this law did reduce taxes on average for all income groups, the benefits were skewed towards higher-income earners.

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bahahhahahaha yet hes helping him I know he know whats in for him

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JD vance lowkey knows trump is a bad descion but hes in for something else

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I agree theyre propagating propaganda

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I notice Jd is speaking a lot about his childhood but not on how it makes him a better person hes basically saying that because he went through some trauma he feels like we are obligated to vote for him because we relate to him

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Overall, it was a lively and engaging debate! Looking forward to hearing more from all the candidates.

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to be honest trumps sounds insane and kamala is just bashing him and not saying what she will change we might be cooked

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Now I know he aint better than that.He def lying

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Shouldn't it be women rights to do what they want with their bodies why is an old man deciding what women can do with their bodies huh?

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Daangg

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s it me or is he orange than usual

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whoever becomes president yall were cooked

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Kamala is looking at him like'oh really this mans crazy'

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wild

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If they do get 50\50 votes they should do WWE now that would be interesting as a compromise

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shes standing on business she dont play

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He also should be fired he should not have been president

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calling millions of people terrorists and criminals is crazy

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What helping people is now a bad thing huh

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better proffesional ways to say that

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I think people who have crimes still pending should not be allowed to vie for presidency till all crimes are cleared

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se at all and he should be educated more of being a president

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All trump is doing is propagating proganda to his people

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giving controlling

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its concerning

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after hes been selected for presidency he will do everything to stay in power

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o say in front of billions of people

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Kamala says Trump will provide a tax cut for billionaires and adding a sales tax

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Alright, let’s dive into organizing your thoughts and comments. I’ll give you three different outlines, each with a unique approach to structure your text. One of these will honor African American English Rhetorical Patterns. Let’s get started!

  1. Outline 1: Traditional Logical Sequence

1. Introduction
– “What does he mean the american dream because everyone has a different perspective on the american dream”
– Establish the central theme of differing perspectives.

2. Political Critique
– “put people first but when he was president he put him his family and his billionaire friends first so what will make him change?”
– Discuss perceived inconsistencies in political behavior.

3. Policy and Leadership Analysis
– “Climate change a hoax? Then wanting to invest in it to kill more people and hes for the people huh??”
– “how did kamalas polices use moe energy?”
– Evaluate policy decisions and their implications.

4. Fact-Check and Clarification
– “Let’s dig into this claim that Donald Trump created the largest trade deficit…”
– Provide factual information and analysis.

5. Conclusion
– Summarize the various points and leave open-ended questions for reflection.

Affordances: This outline provides a clear and linear progression through your ideas, making it easy for readers to follow and understand your argument.

  1. Outline 2: African American English Rhetorical Patterns

1. Topic Association/Circumlocution Introduction
– “What does he mean the american dream because everyone has a different perspective on the american dream”
– “is this accurate”
– Introduce the theme with open-ended questions and implied connections.

2. Recursion/Repetition on Leadership and Policy
– “put people first but when he was president he put him his family and his billionaire friends first so what will make him change?”
– “Climate change a hoax? Then wanting to invest in it to kill more people and hes for the people huh??”
– Repeated questioning of leadership motives.

3. Parallelism in Critique
– “how did kamalas polices use moe energy?”
– “What do he mean, yo he didnt even answer the question you??”
– Parallel structure in questioning political actions.

4. Anaphora and Fact-Checking
– “Let’s dig into this claim that Donald Trump created the largest trade deficit…”
– “to be honest trumps sounds insane and kamala is just bashing him and not saying what she will change we might be cooked”
– Begin sections with “Let’s” to explore claims and critiques.

5. Conclusion with Recursion
– “Shouldn’t it be women rights to do what they want with their bodies why is an old man deciding what women can do with their bodies huh?”
– Circle back to key questions and themes.

Affordances: This outline embraces a dynamic and associative approach, engaging readers through rhythm and repetition, encouraging deeper reflection on interconnected ideas.

  1. Outline 3: Thematic Clusters

1. Perspectives on the American Dream
– “What does he mean the american dream because everyone has a different perspective on the american dream”
– Explore varying interpretations and their implications.

2. Leadership and Integrity
– “put people first but when he was president he put him his family and his billionaire friends first so what will make him change?”
– Discuss the trustworthiness of leaders.

3. Policy Impact and Critique
– “Climate change a hoax? Then wanting to invest in it to kill more people and hes for the people huh??”
– “how did kamalas polices use moe energy?”
– Analyze policy decisions and their real-world effects.

4. Fact-Checking and Clarifications
– “Let’s dig into this claim that Donald Trump created the largest trade deficit…”
– Provide detailed analysis and factual context.

5. Rights and Representation
– “Shouldn’t it be women rights to do what they want with their bodies why is an old man deciding what women can do with their bodies huh?”
– Discuss themes of autonomy and representation.

Affordances: This thematic approach groups related ideas, allowing for a focused exploration of each topic, which can help readers navigate complex discussions.


Now it’s your turn to shine! Each of these outlines takes a different approach to your content and can shape how your audience might respond. Which one resonates with you? Or maybe you have your own unique spin to add?

Inspire yourself to write a plan for reorganizing your text, step-by-step. What are you gonna do first, second, and third? And hey, if there’s anything else you wanna work on while revising, just let me know! Let’s get to it! 

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Alright, let’s dive into organizing your thoughts and comments. I’ll give you three different outlines, each with a unique approach to structure your text. One of these will honor African American English Rhetorical Patterns. Let’s get started!

  1. Outline 1: Traditional Logical Sequence

1. Introduction: Differing Perspectives
– Begin by revisiting your question, “What does he mean the American dream because everyone has a different perspective on the American dream,” to set the stage for discussing diverse viewpoints.

2. Political Critique: Leadership and Integrity
– Explore your observation about leadership: “put people first but when he was president he put him his family and his billionaire friends first so what will make him change?”
– Discuss perceived inconsistencies in political behavior.

3. Policy and Leadership Analysis
– Examine your questions on policy: “Climate change a hoax? Then wanting to invest in it to kill more people and hes for the people huh??” and “how did Kamala’s policies use more energy?”
– Evaluate policy decisions and their implications.

4. Fact-Checking and Clarification
– Fact-check specific claims such as, “Let’s dig into this claim that Donald Trump created the largest trade deficit…”
– Provide clear information and analysis.

5. Conclusion: Autonomy and Representation
– Conclude with your thoughts on representation: “Shouldn’t it be women rights to do what they want with their bodies why is an old man deciding what women can do with their bodies huh?”
– Encourage readers to reflect on your questions.

Affordances: This outline offers a structured flow, guiding readers through your arguments systematically and clearly, culminating in a strong conclusion about rights and representation.

  1. Outline 2: African American English Rhetorical Patterns

1. Topic Association: Inquiry and Introduction
– Weave open-ended questions with your statement about the American dream and perceptions: “What does he mean the American dream because everyone has a different perspective on the American dream.”

2. Recursion/Repetition: Leadership and Policies
– Circle back and forth on leadership values: “put people first but when he was president he put him his family and his billionaire friends first so what will make him change?”
– Repeat your critiques on policy stances repeatedly.

3. Parallelism: Critique Through Connection
– “how did Kamala’s policies use more energy?” and “What do he mean, yo he didn’t even answer the question you?”
– Establish parallel criticism by linking similar ideas.

4. Anaphora and Fact-Checking: Reiterating Facts
– Focus on fact-checks like, “Let’s dig into this claim that Donald Trump created the largest trade deficit…”
– Use repetitive initiators like “Let’s” to reinforce critical examinations.

5. Drawing Back to Recursively Engaging Themes
– Reengage the audience with poignant questions and statements about autonomy: “Shouldn’t it be women’s rights to do what they want with their bodies why is an old man deciding what women can do with their bodies huh?”

Affordances: Incorporating a dynamic and associative rhetoric can create an engaging dialogue that connects emotionally and intellectually, stimulating deeper reflection.

  1. Outline 3: Thematic Clusters

1. Perspectives on the American Dream
– Explore what differing perspectives entail, starting with: “What does he mean the American dream because everyone has a different perspective on the American dream.”

2. Leadership and Accountability
– Delve into the theme of leadership integrity: “put people first but when he was president he put him his family and his billionaire friends first so what will make him change?”

3. Critical Policy Analysis
– Assess political policies and their consequences: “Climate change a hoax? Then wanting to invest in it to kill more people and hes for the people huh??” and “how did Kamala’s policies use more energy?”

4. Fact-Check and Data-Driven Argumentation
– Systematically address your concerns with factual analysis: “Let’s dig into this claim that Donald Trump created the largest trade deficit…”

5. Rights and Representation Emphasis
– Conclude by addressing representation and autonomy issues: “Shouldn’t it be women’s rights to do what they want with their bodies why is an old man deciding what women can do with their bodies huh?”

Affordances: This approach organizes your comments into focused themes, making it easier for readers to follow your line of thought within each cluster, leading to a comprehensive and nuanced discussion.


It’s time to act! Each outline offers a distinct approach to structuring your comments, guiding how readers engage with your thoughts. Do any of these outlines resonate with you? Or do you have another creative structure in mind? Let’s go step-by-step and craft your narrative in a way that truly speaks to your perspective. And if there’s anything specific you want to refine during this process, just let me know! Let’s transform your text together! 

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