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“Striving for social justice is the most valuable thing to do in life,” a quote from Albert Einstein, underscores the profound significance of pursuing social justice. Social justice is the principle that everyone deserves equal rights, opportunities, and treatment. Notable examples of social justice movements include women’s suffrage and the Civil Rights Movement. Both of these movements aimed to benefit oppressed people and reduce the gap between them and total equality and justice. The fight against injustices is essential to improving the quality of life for people everywhere. Combatting social injustices includes the promotion and labor, through media or movements, should be continued. Social justice is significant and a major part of the world, and a socially just country is a remarkable country.

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LeNaijah C LeNaijah C (Nov 05 2024 10:22AM) : Agreeing with another comment , I like how this shows that social justice isn't just a trend but something that has been around for a long time
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AlexanderD C AlexanderD C (Nov 01 2024 8:44AM) : I like this quote from Albert Einstein because it shows that social justice is something that people will always have to strive for. This is important because striving for social justice is important for the betterment of humanity.
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Social justice and its concepts hold great importance for me as an Asian American male,as well as many other minorities. My parents, both Asian immigrants, were able to live here safely, free from extreme racism and discrimination, thanks to legislation like the Civil Rights Act of 1964. Campaigns and movements for equality have helped to create a safer country, offering a refuge for immigrants seeking a better life. Similar acts continue to be created, furthering the development of our society, and help numerous people everywhere. Social justice has been instrumental in shaping the nation and the community we live in today, allowing it to flourish. People of all backgrounds and groups should continue to spread these ideas and advocate for equality for all through the discussion and practice of these principles.

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JacobC C JacobC C (Oct 31 2024 12:59PM) : This paragraph which centered around Cason's parents is effective in conveying the message of social justice being delivered, Cason uses the Civil Rights Act of 1964, this highlights the progress that society has made in beating social injustice.
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Renzo C Renzo C (Oct 31 2024 1:01PM) : Using THUG allows the readers to relate to a very popular literary piece, and connect ideas they had in the book, to the rest of your Essay [Edited]
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Martin C Martin C (Oct 31 2024 2:09PM) : Comment more

I can relate as I’m Asian American and I’ve only faced a minor amount of racism. Although I do believe it could be better as we reinforce the idea that everyone is equal through more time of interactions between different groups of people.

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Sammy C Sammy C (Oct 31 2024 12:49PM) : Cason Lee gives an adept explanation of his parents' chain of causality that follows his line on the Civil Rights Act of 1964.
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Brian C Brian C (Oct 31 2024 12:42PM) : Diction [Edited] more

I love the diction you used, particularly how you used powerful words like advocate and principles to nail your idea of the importance of spreading ideas for equality.

The promotion of social justice ideas through media such as literature, is vital and the strongest way to spread it. A renowned novel that promotes social justice and explores themes of racism is “The Hate U Give.” This contemporary story from 2017 addresses racism and police brutality. The story is a significant story for many, highlighting real and pressing societal issues. One of the characters, Khalil, is killed early on due to racist stereotypes against African Americans, which are used to justify his murder. This is a real issue that happens to many in real life, which should be addressed as it is in this story. “The Hate U Give”, as well as many other pieces of literature, is a vital narrative that exposes the uncomfortable truths about inequality and injustice in society, and more pieces of media should be continue to be produced to spread awareness of social injustice.

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Sean C Sean C (Oct 31 2024 12:48PM) : Good examples included women's rights personal experience, racism, and unfairness in rights. Overall it's good to go in full depth of freedom rights, racism, bias, and just overall the freedom that people get or given based on if they're a certain race.
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Roman C Roman C (Oct 31 2024 12:39PM) : Hi Cason lee [Edited] more

I like the literature you used in the essay. It really complements your talking points as it builds on what you’ve discussed by showing other points of view from professionals.

In conclusion, social justice embodies the belief that equal rights, opportunities, and treatment should be common and accessible to everyone. The advancement and encouragement of social justice principles are crucial for improving the quality of life for everybody. People should advocate for fair treatment and equal rights and opportunities for everyone, and actively voice their support. Movements are the driving force towards achieving total social justice; thus, participating in or initiating movements is essential. Considering people’s backgrounds and experiences is vital for continuing the progress towards equality and equity. Ultimately, the pursuit of social justice is a continuous journey that requires vigilance and commitment, and calls for a willingness to challenge our own biases. By fostering a culture of empathy and understanding, we can create an environment where everyone has the opportunity to thrive.

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Renzo C Renzo C (Oct 31 2024 8:37PM) : The conclusion paragraph captures that social justice as an ongoing journey. It emphasizes the importance of self-reflection and challenging our biases.
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JasonL91 C JasonL91 C (Oct 31 2024 9:56PM) : Comment more

This conclusion is very well done, it summarizes your original point and adds the new added examples to display your point.

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Saadiq C Saadiq C (Oct 31 2024 1:07PM) : This is a great essay, and I also love the reference to the book, THUG. I also agree that people should advocate for social justice.
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