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Stand Together, Rise Together: The Fight for Social Justice


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“Injustice anywhere is a threat to justice everywhere.” This quote by Martin Luther King emphasizes the urgency with which we need to address social injustice and how much small acts of injustice can truly impact our society. Social justice, to me, means advocating for equality and the rights of all individuals, ensuring everyone has access to opportunities and paths they deserve. It also involves recognizing the problem and seeing what injustices cause and how they hurt our society. Social justice is essential for creating a fair and equitable society that ensures everyone gets a chance, with access to all the necessary resources.

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Sean C Sean C (Oct 31 2024 12:53PM) : I liked how you gave an example of Philly, where most if not all, of us live. You showed relatable things such as insufficient funding, wealth disparity, and the struggle for health services.
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Ashley C Ashley C (Oct 31 2024 2:54PM) : Your title is very attention grabbing and gives the readers insight to what your point in your essay is about which is that its important that people as a whole understand injustice and fight for equality.
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LeNaijah C LeNaijah C (Nov 04 2024 12:51PM) : I like how intriguing the hook sentence is; it helps to make this more interesting before starting to dive into the rest of the essay.
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Sammy C Sammy C (Oct 31 2024 12:45PM) : I enjoy how the author gives clarification and clear understanding of what the quote means to them. Allowing the reader to eliminate ambiguity that readers may have when reflecting on said essay.
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Living in Philadelphia, one glaring injustice that I see every day is stark wealth disparities. With the large divide between the upper and lower classes, many low-income families face a lack of access to essential resources like health services and education. Schools in lower-income neighborhoods often suffer from inadequate funding, outdated materials, and fewer extracurricular programs that are crucial for a well-rounded education. Without proper access to these basic needs, opportunities are limited, and the cumulative effect perpetuates communities into cycles of poverty. Witnessing this so closely made me realize the importance of providing more equitable access to resources and support for all these low-income communities.

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Kylayah C Kylayah C (Oct 31 2024 12:25PM) : This paragraph really does show how income can affect things. The funding of schools in different income areas shouldn't be the determining factor of access to education.
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Roman C Roman C (Oct 31 2024 12:59PM) : Hi Renzo Huffman [Edited] more

I like how you used Philly in your paragraph. It gives it a sense of familiarity as I and many others live in Philly. That familiar feeling makes your paragraph more engaging and makes you want to read.

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Martin C Martin C (Oct 31 2024 1:54PM) : Comment more

It’s very informative of what happens in a low income neighborhood, however the essay fails to discuss the possible solutions in ending this issue. This is likely because it’s very difficult to solve this without the funding of several people. However, I do believe if we work together, we could prevent this issue from occurring again.

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Valeria C Valeria C (Oct 31 2024 2:23PM) : I agree with this paragraph. The society expects so much from us, while they aren't providing enough for others who are in need.
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One example of a literary work about social justice is Night by Elie Wiesel. His account of the events of the Holocaust shows the devastating consequences of accepted injustices. It’s a reminder of what horrors a society looks like without social justice and equality. The scenes Wiesel remembers are insights into the extent to which injustices can go, to a point where they are a norm, accepted by society. Something to take away from the book that connects to Martin Luther King’s quote is the importance of standing up in the face of injustice before it escalates and inflicts more pain onto others.

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In conclusion, social justice is a pillar on which strong civilizations are built. Societies that are equitable and allow everyone access to all the resources they need give everyone an opportunity to follow their dreams. By educating ourselves and others on injustices and taking action in communities, we can work towards slowly changing civilization to one where everyone stands up for each other, taking action to create a lasting, positive impact on the world.

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DMU Timestamp: October 30, 2024 20:08

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Cason C Cason C (Oct 31 2024 12:59PM) : Your title is good at grabbing attention and bring in readers.Your claim about social justice being more about the effort and work put into social justice, rather than the actual idea, is good as well.
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Renzo C Renzo C (Nov 06 2024 1:08PM) : I made 19 changes on this document, suggested by AI
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