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Oct-31-24 Tickling the ivories
Oct-31-24 Process notes

Leadership that focuses on the needs of the people you are governing over political gain is important in the U.S.A. It's clear that some candidates are more focused on numbers than they are with trying to fix these issues that America faces. Remarks about Haitians and the racist statements without accountability raise concerns about whether he truly cares for all citizens. He should focus on domestic issues like poverty and racial inequality. Leaders should acknowledge their own faults and focus on serving the people instead of projecting blame.

Another issue that I've seen is the growing division in America. Which is often fueled by inflammatory rhetoric. Racist comments and a dismissive attitude towards serious issues, such as climate change and immigration, only serves to polarize this nation further. In the debate, there were moments where his remarks were both inappropriate and borderline insensitive to those who were just looking for a home. And his disregard towards the impact of his words shows a lack of empathy, and due to this, I think that he's unfit for president. I believe we need leaders who are interested in the concept of unity. Someone, someone who can make this country a unified democracy; who focuses more on addressing the concerns we all have and not just what he could gain by selling out.

And Finally, accountability is paramount in leadership. The lack of transparency in the responses during the debate, especially on critical topics like public debt and criminal accountability, were avoided. It's troubling to see a leader who isn't open about what they plan to do with the trust we have for them. A leader must be open and forthright with their intentions, especially when it comes to the well-being of the nation's most vulnerable. Leaders who ignore these issues show their dishonesty and have a disinterest in meaningful progress. America deserves someone that's transparent, empathetic, and forward-thinking in the face of challenges. America deserves like racial justice, climate change; America was forged with love, why must we change that now under the rule of someone who isn’t worth being our leader?

DMU Timestamp: October 30, 2024 20:08

Added October 31, 2024 at 12:16pm by Kalin Gray
Title: Tickling the ivories

DMU Timestamp: October 30, 2024 20:08

Added October 31, 2024 at 1:31pm by Kalin Gray
Title: Process notes

I think that some to most of the thinking partners helped out as much as it could if not alot. Albeit i feel as though it got repetitive after a while, every time i wanted the ai to say more about what i could have done to change it, i have to directly tell it instead of it just giving its entire thought. While that isnt that bad of a thing its more of a pet peeve than a problem. though it was a great help to see a view from something thats infinitely smarter than i can be but is kind of a stickler for my kind of writing style. While writing in a uniform way under the guide of the ai was kind of annoying, i got used to it after awhile of just testing out my words to see if they could feel professional and asking for more outside help than just what was originally said.

Ai as a whole seems like something that could be a great help for students and teachers alike, asides from the students just generating an essay out of thin air. It just takes time to make it an actual companion that can help us learn much better than how we are now. But back into my experiences with this.

The writing partners as a concept is honestly superb, yet I think if they weren't so uniform, it'd make the advice they give us feel much more real, genuine even, I think it'd be interesting to see an AI write how I do normally, and give advice as I'm writing for me to follow and or to not. And I'd like to see the writing partners here do that as well. I feel as though they should highlight the things that they want us to fix, change or just give some advice for as well. Overall a unique and fascinating idea though.

DMU Timestamp: October 30, 2024 20:08





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