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The 2024 election cycle debates were filled with lies,controversies and motives that may dictate the next four years and the future of America.In these debates we had documented liars versus the underdog team whose every credential was checked. What mattered most during this event would be the promises that were given such as Trumps, who frequently vows to carry out the "largest deportation" effort in U.S. history.Even though when he was in the chair he was impeached and border control was not at its best what so ever. While on the other hand VP Harris has promising plans, such as providing tax credits to middle-class and lower-income families, lowering drug costs and eliminating so-called junk fees.

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Jumping onto the topic of promises of each candidate the information really given by trump was blatant inorder really “woo his people as i stated when watching his VP Jd vance ,”The crowd for JD Vance just cheer on anything not really understand what he is saying he mainly just talks about pride, then talks about how they are open to ideas like they won't dictate what will happen without the people”.This statement from me describes how the talks and facts did not line up at all.The reason i knew this was because i AI checked the information,It states “Trump has consistently claimed that other countries are “emptying out” their prisons and sending criminals to the U.S. However, experts say there’s no evidence to support this claim”. This quote clearly shows how fraudulent information was given where as though I could not configure a proper argument for trump.The information that was given by the VP kamala harris was backed by many sources including CNN and even when asked by AI it responded “Vice President Kamala Harris has indeed outlined several plans and actions aimed at addressing healthcare issues in the U.S. One of her major focuses has been on expanding access to affordable healthcare, reducing prescription drug prices, and protecting the Affordable Care Act”.This blatantly shows the true plans that will take place instead of the false hope given by the republic party.

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DMU Timestamp: October 30, 2024 20:08

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Let’s begin with the first part of the text: “The 2024 election cycle debates were filled with lies, controversies, and motives that may dictate the next four years and the future of America.”

Now, let’s break it down into chunks:

1. “The 2024 election cycle debates” – Here, we need to visualize the context and timeframe. We’re talking about debates that are part of the 2024 election cycle. This gives us a setting for the events being discussed.

2. “were filled with lies, controversies, and motives” – This chunk is loaded with meaning. The debates are described as being full of lies and controversies, which suggests that there were many false statements and contentious issues. The word “motives” implies that behind these debates, there were underlying intentions or agendas.

3. “that may dictate the next four years and the future of America.” – This chunk is about the potential consequences of the debates. The outcomes of these debates could influence not just the immediate future, the next four years, but also the longer-term future of America.

By using a Think Aloud strategy, we can see how breaking down the sentence into smaller parts helps clarify meaning. We identified key elements—the timeframe, the contentious nature of the debates, and their potential impact. This approach helps us understand not only the content but also the significance of the information.

Let’s open the floor for discussion. What do you all think about this Think Aloud? How might you chunk the rest of the sentence or the remaining parts of the paragraph? Let’s practice our Think Alouds, one chunk at a time, and deepen our comprehension together. Who’s ready to take the next chunk?

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