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*One - Strong Topic Sentence:*
Does my essay have a thoughtful topic sentence that clearly identifies a main personality trait of the protagonist.
Do I identify the character name and novel?
4 - Your essay begins with an exceptionally thoughtful and insightful topic sentence that clearly and precisely identifies a significant main personality trait of the protagonist.
The character's name and the novel's title are explicitly stated, providing a strong context for the discussion.
3 - Your essay starts with a clear topic sentence that identifies a main personality trait of the protagonist.
The character's name and the novel's title are mentioned, though the insight into the trait may not be as deep or nuanced as in Level 4.
2 - Your essay has a topic sentence that attempts to identify a personality trait of the protagonist, but it may lack clarity or depth.
The character's name or the novel's title might be mentioned, but one of these elements could be missing or unclear.
1 - Your essay either lacks a clear topic sentence or presents one that does not effectively identify a personality trait of the protagonist.
The character's name and/or the novel's title may be missing or incorrectly stated.
The sentence may be vague or off-topic
*Two - Supportive Evidence:*
Is the character trait that I have identified in my topic sentence well supported with accurate evidence from the text.
Do I use the protagonist’s actions, dialogue, feelings, and thoughts as evidence?
Do I use these relevant, telling, quality details to give the reader important information that goes beyond the obvious or predictable?
4 - The character trait identified in your topic sentence is supported by abundant and accurate evidence from the text.
Your use of the protagonist's actions, dialogue, feelings, and thoughts is skillful and comprehensive, providing a nuanced understanding of the character.
Rich and relevant details are consistently included, offering deep insights that go far beyond the obvious or predictable.
3 - The character trait that you identified is well-supported with accurate evidence from the text.
The protagonist's actions, dialogue, feelings, and thoughts are effectively utilized to reinforce the trait.
Relevant details are often included, providing insights that extend beyond the surface level, though they may not be as rich or comprehensive as in exemplary paragraph.
2 - The character trait that you identified is somewhat supported but lacks consistency or depth in evidence.
The use of the protagonist's actions, dialogue, feelings, or thoughts is limited, resulting in an incomplete portrayal of the character.
While some relevant details are present, they tend to be predictable and lack the depth needed to provide meaningful insights.
1 - The character trait that you identified is poorly supported with little to no accurate evidence from the text.
There is minimal use of the protagonist's actions, dialogue, feelings, or thoughts, resulting in a shallow understanding of the character.
Details are sparse or irrelevant, offering little meaningful information beyond what is explicitly stated in the text.
*Three - Powerful Quote:*
Do I use one direct quote from the novel to illustrate the protagonist’s personality trait?
Was the quote selected for its quality, depth, and/or uniqueness?
Would it have been difficult to paraphrase or rewrite the quote without losing some of its power?
4 - You use a highly relevant and impactful direct quote that perfectly illustrates the protagonist's personality trait.
The quote your chose is exceptional in quality, depth, and uniqueness, making it extremely difficult to paraphrase without losing its power.
Its integration significantly enhances the overall analysis.
3 - You use a relevant direct quote that clearly illustrates the protagonist's personality trait.
The quote you chose demonstrates good quality and depth, and while it may be challenging to paraphrase without some loss of effectiveness, its integration supports the analysis well.
2 - You included a direct quote, but it may not be the most relevant or impactful.
The connection to the protagonist's personality trait is somewhat clear, though the quote lacks quality and depth.
It could be paraphrased without significant loss of meaning, and its integration provides limited support to the analysis.
1 - You do not use a direct quote, or your selected quote is irrelevant or misinterpreted.
The quote fails to illustrate the protagonist's personality trait effectively and lacks quality or uniqueness.
It could easily be paraphrased without losing meaning, and its integration does not enhance the analysis.
*Four - Engaging Organization:*
Is my evidence placed in a logical order and does the way I present them effectively keep the interest of the reader?
It is obvious that my essay was well thought out?
Do I seem to follow a plan that I laid out in an outline?
4 - You have more than 5 paragraphs, an optimal number of paragraphs with a logical flow.
Your evidence is presented in a highly logical and engaging order, effectively maintaining reader interest throughout.
Your essay structure demonstrates clear planning and thoughtful organization, strongly reflecting a well-developed outline.
3 - You have 4 or 5 paragraphs, a appropriate number of well-organized paragraphs.
Your evidence is generally presented in a logical order that mostly keeps the reader engaged.
Your essay shows signs of planning and organization, with a clear connection to an outline, although minor inconsistencies may exist.
2 - You have a basic structure, but paragraph numbers are inadequate, only 2 or 3 paragraphs Your evidence order is somewhat logical but could be improved, occasionally losing reader interest.
Your paragraph indicates some planning, but the organization is not fully effective, and the connection to an outline is inconsistent.
1 - You have just one paragraph, too few or poorly structured paragraphs.
Your evidence is presented in a confusing or illogical order, frequently losing reader interest.
Your paragraph lacks clear planning and organization, with little to no adherence to an outline.
*Five - Purposeful Conclusion:*
Does my conclusion wrap my essay up nicely by reiterating the protagonist’s personality trait?
Do I give the reader a sense of closure and that there was a purpose for reading this essay?
4 - Your conclusion expertly reiterates the protagonist's key personality trait, providing a strong sense of closure and clearly demonstrating the significance of the information presented.
You leave the reader with a memorable insight and you seamlessly connects to the overall theme or message of the larger work.
3 - Your conclusion adequately restates the protagonist's personality trait and offers a satisfactory sense of closure.
Your sentence shows relevance to the essay's content and provides a final thought that connects to the broader theme or message, though it may lack some depth.
2 - Your conclusion mentions the protagonist's personality trait but lacks clarity or emphasis.
You attempt to provide closure but your conclusion feels somewhat abrupt, hinting at the essay's purpose without fully articulating it, and may offer a final thought that is too general or slightly off-topic.
1 - Your conclusion fails to reiterate the protagonist's personality trait and lacks a sense of closure.
Your conclusion does not convey the purpose of the essay, ends abruptly or introduces unrelated information, and shows no clear connection to the overall theme or message of the work.
Here are three exemplar Character Analysis Essay for reference. Quote from these essays to give me examples of what to do. When you quote examples from these essays, do not assume that I have seen them or have access to them. Just say something like this: "In another student's character analysis, they wrote..."
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*Exemplar 1 of 3: A Character Analysis of Mrs. Jake Grimes in Sherwood Anderson’s “Death in the Woods.” *
The value a person places on himself or herself is largely determined by the value others give to that person. Those who grow up loved and cherished learn to feel worthwhile and develop a healthy sense of self. Such a background of love and caring can even sustain a person through periods when he or she feels unloved and insignificant. But those who have never known love, who have never been given any human warmth, soon come to see themselves as worthless. Such an emotionally starved person is Mrs. Grimes of Sherwood Anderson’s “Death in the Woods.” Mrs. Grimes is a woman who has been denied any vestige of love or tenderness, she exists only to be used.
From her childhood on, Mrs. Grimes has been trapped in a cycle of exploitation. As an orphan, she became a “bound” girl, legally contracted to work as slave labor for a farmer who terrified her with his lust, and for his wife, who frightened the girl with her jealousy. The girl’s only escape from this prison was marriage to Jake Grimes, a shiftless farmer who beat her and expected her to work the farm alone. When the couple’s son grows up, he joins the father in abusing the mother. They demand that she feed them, and somehow she must also sustain the animals of the farm:
How was she going to get everything fed? – that was her problem. The dogs had to be fed. There wasn’t enough hay in the barn for the horses and the cow. If she didn’t feed the chickens how could they lay eggs? Without eggs to sell how could she buy things in town, things she needed to keep life on the farm going?
Her life is nothing but an endless battle to meet the demands of the animals --- and men – who devour her strength and youth, turning her into an “old woman when she isn’t even forty yet.”
Trapped by life, Mrs. Grimes never thinks of fighting back. Because she had always been brutalized by the world, she learns to expect nothing from it. Life, to her, is merely survival. As the narrator says, “Whatever happened she never said anything. That was her way of getting along.” Even her death is not a conscious suicide; it is just a surrender to circumstances that dominate her, as events have always dominated her. She dies, dreamily fading into the cold, “softly and quietly.” Even her dreams could have provided no escape, for she had no happy past to dream of because “not many pleasant things had happened to her.” In dying, as in living, Mrs. Grimes knows of no way but to give in, because she has never seen herself as someone worth fighting to save. Deprived of the love that teaches one she is valuable, Mrs. Grimes places little value on her life.
As the narrator of the story says, Mrs. Grimes was “one of the nameless ones,” the insignificant ones, but, after her death, others began to notice her, to see her value. Lying frozen in the snow, the body of Mrs. Grimes seems somehow transformed into “the body of some charming young girl.” The townsmen who cover her body regard it with a kind of respect and awe, and they want to avenge her mistreatment at the hands of her husband and son. The sight of the dead woman creates a “strange mystical feeling” in the minds of the adolescent narrator and his brother. Too late, someone sees the beautiful person inside of the mistreated, broken woman.
Mrs. Grimes died as she lived – exploited, for “even after death [she] continued feeding animal life,” her sack of scraps is ripped open by her dogs. Treated not as a person but as a thing, Mrs. Grimes died without ever seeing her own value. Her tragedy is not so much the account of her death as it is the story of her life, lived without love or even respect, and of attention paid, too late.
*Exemplar 2 of 3: A Good Man is Hard to Find*
Mary Flannery O’Connor authored the short essay “A Good Man Is Hard To Find” in a style and manner that is not often seen in women writers. She chose to deal with the real-life issues of parent-child relationships and violent murders. Certainly not a genre that women authors are known for and yet a genre within which the author seemed to thrive imaginatively and symbolically. By telling the story in a 3rd personal manner, she manages to concentrate on telling the story through the eyes of only one main character. That of the grandmother.
We first recognize that the grandmother in the story is a neglected member of the family. Most often seen as a bane by her son and ridiculed by her grandchildren due to her age and different beliefs about life, religion, and everything else under the sun. Fully dependent on her son for almost everything in her life, she is viewed by the family as nothing more than excess baggage that they wish they did not have to deal with. For me, the treatment she received from her family depicts the way some of the elderly are treated in these modern times. Ignored and not valued, they often crave attention like a bratty child when all they really want is to feel a little love, care, and affection from those around them. To feel like a part of a family and not like an irritable thorn in the side of her son and his family.
The grandmother, being from the south and highly religious tends to be very trusting of the people around her. Chalk it up to an obviously religious upbringing but, she believes that there is well hidden away in everyone around her. No matter how evil they seem to be in reality. So, I was surprised to realize that she also used her religious beliefs mostly for selfish reasons as later depicted in the story. She was actually the driving force of evil within an innocent family that should not have had such an unexpected demise.
It is during this fateful trip that she learns the lesson about how not all men are “good” and not all men are “bad” either. There is also a lesson to be learned from her experience. That religion and belief in God are not things that you pull out of a hat during a time when it is most convenient for you. And not everybody is a religious fanatic who believes that prayer can change a darkened soul. Unfortunately, this would turn out to be a lesson learned too late. I found it highly disturbing to realize that all of the evil acts that unfolded within the story were all brought about by a selfish whim of the grandmother who came along on the trip against her will and did everything within her power to get her way. A way that eventually led down the road to a horrific culmination. By taking the detour on the dirt road, she alters the life of the family and all the while believes that religion and prayers can alter an unalterable end.
Progressing in my reading of the story, I begin to question the honesty of the grandmother in forcing her will upon her son’s family, even if she has to lie to get her way. Her son tries to humor her when she gets his children to believe in a trumped-up story about a plantation that does not exist. Without realizing it, his mother had set up their death road and he had, in a manner, signed the order of execution upon all of them by allowing himself to be waylaid from his original decision. Indeed, the grandmother is to blame for the massacre of the family because she refused to admit her error the minute she realized it simply because she finally got her way. I believe that, had the mother taken the advice of her grandchildren and had she simply stayed home since she did not want to go on the trip anyway, the family would still be alive.
However, I also believe that everything that happened to them happened for a reason. For it is often said that death comes like a thief in the night. Never giving warning, never allowing one to escape. The Grim reaper shall get the soul on his list in any manner he can. In this case, maybe they were all destined to die together.
The killer in the story, a man they call The Misfit, is the person whom I believe signifies a return to God by the family whose virtues had been overridden by the niceties of life and ill regard for their past traditions and cultures that existed in their early lives. In effect, each person in the family needed to recognize the importance of religion and prayer in their lives once again. They were not exactly sinners who needed saving in my opinion, but in the opinion of the writer, they all apparently needed their souls to be saved for one reason or another.
The Misfit, therefore, serves the family by forcing them to realize their humanity and return to their belief in God before it is too late for them. This can be understood as the grandmother encourages everyone, including misfits to “Pray.” Unfortunately, The Misfit, filled with religious confusion and misunderstanding of the word of God, having grown up in the bible belt, has become logically confused and therefore believes that by killing these people, whom he had been observing earlier on, he will have done the will of God that began with the overturning of the car during the accident.
In the end, The Misfit makes a statement that leads me to believe that he is not all evil. He never took pleasure in killing people. He just did it because, in his confused mind, he believed that he was being their savior by helping them unto the direct path to God.
*Exemplar 3 of 3: The Great Gatsby*
“The Great Gatsby” is a novel by F. Scott Fitzgerald, first published in 1925.
When referring to the relationship between money, love, and happiness, it can be said that there is no better example illustrating such relation than Fitzgerald’s novel.
The novel main idea can be described as the portrayal of the destruction of norms and values going up, through the social ladder’s hierarchy.
Nevertheless, the characters of the novel can not be described as weak-willed, where the destiny of each of them was determined through their personal distinctive characteristics, as well as tragic events.
In that regard, this paper compares and contrasts two characters from “The Great Gatsby”, which are Jay Gatsby and Nick Carraway, who represent the novel’s protagonist and narrator respectively.
Describing Jay Gatsby, the question that should be answered is what is so distinctive about him, that Fitzgerald named his novel “The Great Gatsby”. This factor can explain through the dual nature of Gatsby’s character. On the one hand, he is tawdry great in his role of the wealthy man with a mysterious reputation, and the host of absurdly-pompous parties, which he arranges in order to bring Daisy’s attention. Such characteristics give rise to the irony of the moralist narrator – Nick Carraway.
On the other hand, Gatsby is definitely great in the power of his feelings, in his loyalty to his dream, and “extraordinary gift for hope”, which as stated by Carraway, he had never found in any other person. (3) The significance of such attributes in Gatsby, who matured in the art of making money, can be seen in that as soon as he realizes that Daisy, for whom he entered this path, rejected him, loses interest in his wealth and everything related to it, and practically gave up his life before the bullet of the George Wilson reach him. (103)
Nick Carraway’s character can be described from the moment that he met Gatsby, as their friendship produced a moral shift in his moral values’ assessments. Meeting with Gatsby, Carraway said that he represented everything for which he had unaffected scorn (3), while the Buchanans, Jordan were more appealing to him. At the end of the novel, the change in perception can be seen through his statement to Gatsby that “They’re a rotten crowd “and that he is “worth the whole damn bunch put together” (98).
The contrast between the characters can be seen in that Gatsby could not divide between the ideal of love and wealth, where such position was firm throughout the novel, while Nick’s position after witnessing the tragedy made him reject moral compromises, and considered that it was of his moral responsibility to honestly retell what he saw without coloring the truth.
It can be concluded that the main differences were through the rejection of Fitzgerald to moralize Gatsby in the novel, giving the role to the moral counter-part to Nick. The closeness in the friendship, however, can be perceived as a reflection of the same position or as a justification of the events and positions. Both characters acknowledged that as soon as real emotions come to power, the illusion of shine and all this sham are destroyed.
Works Cited
Fitzgerald, Francis S. The Great Gatsby.
Wordsworth Editions, 1993.
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