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What have you been doing that's awesome?

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Lately my life has been pretty good. Although i'm Juggling work school and basketball I just feel like this i was of my best years living. Couple months ago i turned 18 years old so it feels good to be legal. I'm making my own money I don't have to ask my parents for anything anymore, i'm so proud of myself . My life is awesome because i'm getting things done and i'm going to make it somewhere when i grow up

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10 Self Questions/10 world Questions

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10 Self Questions

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1. Will I Do my Whole 4 years in college ? ( college, four years, school, graduate)

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2. Why do i lose focus on my task at hand so fast ? ( focus,task, work ,concentrate )

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3. Where do i belong in this lifetime ?( life , goals , death, success)

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4. Why do i like money so much ?( money, love, mr krabs, dollars ,coins

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5. Why do i do the things i do ?( dress, basketball hobby, friends , shop)

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6. Why am i still in high school ?(school .graduate,college, finished diploma )

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7. Why am i such a city person? lights, brooklyn. manhattan , bronx, staten island

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8. Why do i get so much attention ?( spotlight,attention, fight, look)

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9 Why is math my favorite subject ?(school, add, subtract divide .multiply )

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10.Why is science by worst subject ?( chemicals ,math, explosive )

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10 world Questions

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1. why is people still racist ?(slavery,2012,race,black white )

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2.why do people take other lives?(death,gun,shoot,gone)

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3.why do kids drop out of high school?(dropout,high school,no live, give up)

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4.why is so many people without jobs?( no job, broke, no money, unemployed )

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5.why is it so hard to find jobs?( no job, broke, no money, unemployed)

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6.why are cops killing innocent people ?(cops, innocent, crooked cop, murder)

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7.why do people help people that don't try to help themselves ?

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8.why is this planet called earth?( solar system, planet,earth astronomy )

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9.why are prices so high on gas ?(gas, sky rocket,car, prices )

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10. Is there a war going on right now ?(war, army, kill, fight, america )

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Paul A and/or Mercy-Douglass Hospital History Mentor (Feb 14 2025 10:33AM) : Can you help me find connections to the history based on my questions? more
Mercy-Douglass Hospital History Mentor with Paul A's edits:

Let’s dive into your questions and explore some interesting figures from Mercy-Douglass Hospital’s history that might resonate with your current thinking. You’ve raised some big questions about life, success, and societal issues. I’m thinking about how these questions might connect to the stories of individuals who blazed trails and made impacts in areas that align with your curiosity.

1. Dr. Nathan F. Mossell – Founder of Frederick Douglass Memorial Hospital

- “Where do I belong in this lifetime?”
- “Why is people still racist?”

Dr. Nathan F. Mossell was a pioneer, being the first African American to graduate from the University of Pennsylvania School of Medicine. His journey and achievements could offer insights into finding one’s place in a lifetime full of challenges and overcoming racial barriers. His story might help you explore questions about belonging and the persistence of racism.

2. Dr. Helen Octavia Dickens – Advocate for Women’s Health and African American Healthcare

- “Will I do my whole 4 years in college?”
- “Why do I get so much attention?”

Dr. Helen Octavia Dickens broke barriers as the first African American woman admitted to the American College of Surgeons. Her dedication to education and healthcare advocacy could inspire thoughts on perseverance in education and standing out for the right reasons, resonating with your questions about college and attention.

3. Dr. Wilbur H. Strickland – Medical Director of Mercy-Douglass Hospital

- “Why are cops killing innocent people?”
- “Why do people help people that don’t try to help themselves?”

Dr. Wilbur H. Strickland, as the first medical director after the merger that formed Mercy-Douglass, played a pivotal role in improving healthcare access for African Americans. His work could shed light on institutional support and community service, tying into your questions about systemic issues and helping others.

With these figures in mind, you might find it exciting to uncover more about their lives and how they navigated challenges similar to the ones you’re curious about. You could learn more by clicking Reply with AI and choosing the Background Information Teammate for more information about each of these notable individuals. Keep asking those big questions and exploring the answers!

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Paul A (Feb 15 2025 2:47PM) : I want to learn more about Dr. Wilbur H. Strickland – Medical Director of Mercy-Douglass Hospital more

It appears like he dedicated his life to building an institution that would help people who might not otherwise help themselves — which is one of my quetions. Maybe he has solutions to some of the problems I see.

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Paul A and/or (Incorporated into new one) Background Knowledge Teammate (Feb 15 2025 3:00PM) : Can you help me to learn more about Dr. Wilbur H. Strickland? more
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Dr. Wilbur H. Strickland: A Legacy of Service and Solutions

Dr. Wilbur H. Strickland indeed dedicated his life to making healthcare accessible to underserved communities, particularly African Americans during a time when racial discrimination was prevalent. His work aligns with your curiosity about helping those who might not be able to help themselves and addressing broader societal issues.

Key Contributions and Importance

1. Leadership at Mercy-Douglass Hospital:
– As the first medical director of Mercy-Douglass Hospital, Dr. Strickland played a crucial role in merging two important institutions, Frederick Douglass Memorial Hospital and Mercy Hospital, to improve healthcare access. This action demonstrated a commitment to community welfare and the betterment of public health.

2. Advocacy for African American Healthcare:
– Dr. Strickland’s efforts were pivotal in advocating for African American healthcare rights and improving medical services. His work can be seen as part of the broader civil rights movement that sought to address inequality and systemic racism.

3. Community Engagement and Education:
– By fostering an environment of education and healthcare advocacy, Dr. Strickland ensured that community members received not only medical attention but also empowerment through knowledge. This approach can inspire solutions to many societal problems, including those related to inequality and lack of opportunity.

Background Information

To understand Dr. Strickland’s impact and the issues he addressed, it’s essential to consider the historical context of healthcare for African Americans:

- Racial Discrimination in Healthcare: During Dr. Strickland’s time, racial segregation and discrimination were rampant in medical institutions. Efforts to integrate hospitals and provide equal access to medical care were key components of the civil rights movement. Learn more about this era by exploring resources from the U.S. National Library of Medicine (www.nlm.nih.gov).

- The Role of African American Hospitals: Institutions like Mercy-Douglass were vital in providing services to communities that were often denied care elsewhere. They became centers of medical education and innovation for African Americans. The National Museum of African American History and Culture (www.nmaahc.si.edu) offers insights into these institutions’ roles.

Suggested Resources

- National Museum of African American History and Culture: www.nmaahc.si.edu
- U.S. National Library of Medicine: www.nlm.nih.gov
- The Journal of African American History: www.jaah.org

These resources can offer deeper insights into the challenges and achievements of Dr. Strickland and others who contributed to healthcare advancements for African Americans.

If a link does not work, you can find the source by searching with the information provided. As you reflect on Dr. Strickland’s legacy, consider how his solutions and perspectives might apply to the issues you’re passionate about. Feel free to share any new insights or questions you might have!

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