snow day

Try this:

1. Clear and Engaging Lede: Your lede should grab the reader’s attention and clearly convey the main point of the story right away. Consider this revision:
– Original: “On a cold February night, high school students around the valley are faced with anticipation, rumors have been circling that school will be canceled due to a snow day.”
– Revised: “High school students in the Salt Lake Valley eagerly anticipated a snow day as rumors of school cancellations swirled on a cold February night.”

2. Proper Attribution of Quotes and Clear Introduction of Sources: Ensure that names and quotes are clearly attributed to their speakers and sources are introduced properly.
– Original: “Junior George F left the night before the day off and went up to Solitude Ski Resort.”
– Revised: “Junior George F. said he left the night before the snow day to spend time at Solitude Ski Resort.”

3. Logical Flow of Information: Ensure the story flows logically from one point to the next.
– Original: “This is a common occurrence in Utah, kids around the Salt Lake Valley hope that there will be at least one snow day during the winter season.”
– Revised: “Snow days are a common occurrence in Utah, and students across the Salt Lake Valley hope for at least one each winter.”

4. Clarity and Conciseness: Simplify and clarify sentences for better readability.
– Original: “This news made just about everyone who lived in the Salt Lake Valley ecstatic.”
– Revised: “The news thrilled everyone in the Salt Lake Valley.”

5. AP Style Guidelines: Ensure grammar, punctuation, and the introduction of numbers follow AP style.
– Original: “Sophomore Jack F and some of his friends hiked up Jacks Peak and went sledding and skiing.”
– Revised: “Sophomore Jack F. and his friends hiked up Jack’s Peak to sled and ski.”

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Image Type: A realistic photograph

Main Subject: High school students enjoying a snow day in the Salt Lake Valley

Background Scene: A snowy winter landscape featuring the Salt Lake Valley, with notable locations such as Solitude Ski Resort and local residential areas.

Details and Descriptors: Joyful kids, illustrating different activities: some are sledding down a hill with laughter, others are skiing with skillful maneuvers, and a few are performing ski tricks in a snowy alleyway. The students have expressions of excitement and happiness, bundled up in colorful winter clothing. The sky is overcast, with large, fluffy snowflakes gently falling, adding to the picturesque winter scene.

Artistic Style and Composition: Captured in a vibrant, realistic style with a mixture of wide-angle and close-up perspectives to showcase the expansive snowy landscapes as well as the details of the individual activities. Soft, natural lighting to emphasize the cold yet inviting atmosphere of a snow day.

Additional Modifiers: High resolution, high detail, 4k quality

Example Prompt: A realistic photograph of high school students enjoying a snow day in the Salt Lake Valley. The scene features a snowy winter landscape with views of Solitude Ski Resort and local residential areas. Joyful kids are seen in various activities: some sledding down a hill with laughter, others skiing with skillful maneuvers, and a few performing ski tricks in a snowy alleyway. They are wearing colorful winter clothing and have expressions of excitement and happiness. The sky is overcast with large, fluffy snowflakes falling gently, creating a picturesque winter scene. Captured in a vibrant, realistic style with a mixture of wide-angle and close-up perspectives, with soft, natural lighting to emphasize the cold yet inviting atmosphere. High resolution, high detail, 4k quality.

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