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The “Why I’m interested in my topic” section of the project Google Doc
“Where’s my thinking” update on Writing Partners (Feb. 19)
Summaries of my sources from my project Google Doc or from Writing Partners
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The “Why I’m interested in my topic” section of the project Google Doc
(see step 1 of the Week 2 assignment)
I ski very often, which requires me to travel up them multiple times a week. Almost every day I go up, especially with a snowstorm, lines are backing up out of the canyon. This causes emergency issues and an overall annoyance to customers of these ski resorts.
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“Where’s my thinking” update on Writing Partners (Feb. 19)
From the articles that I have read I believe that the solution to traffic does not rely on the gondola being put in place. The gondola is a commodity that will be used mostly by tourists. The main population of skiers who are going up during traffic will not want to park, put their gear on, carry all their stuff over to the gondola, and then wait in a line to get on. The gondola also will destroy ecosystems and be an eyesore. I propose a couple of solutions. For starters, we need more bus transportation and infrastructure, as well as wider roads and more trailhead parking. After this, we need traffic cameras that toll people for going up the canyon. However, you can drive up free if you have 3+ people in your car. This encourages people to carpool. Finally, we need to invest in more traction law enforcement. A large amount of traffic is due to cars with improper tires and only 2-wheel drive crashing during slick conditions.
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Summaries of my sources from my project Google Doc or from Writing Partners
The cottonwood canyons have been facing an ever-growing problem of traffic especially on powder days. This article highlights the problems and crash data involved with the traffic, along with the three proposed solutions from the local government. The article also talks about how the gondola option was chosen and why that is a poor decision.
This article dives into the phases of traffic infrastructure being built and the question of the gondola. Phase 1 is mostly bus infrastructure and increasing public transit. Phase 2 widens the roads, builds snow sheds, and implements better trailhead parking. Phase 3 constructs the gondola and a massive parking structure.
This article is of a tourist's perspective of driving up Little Cottownood Canyon on a powder day. This highlights the struggles of traffic and how dangerous it is. This point of view shows how the traffic issue is for people driving up, and how dangerous the avilanch conditions are. It also gives an interesting point of view from a tourist, which shows how the traffic issues are affecting the tourism industry.
This article is from the official website of the Gondola Plan for Little Cottonwood Canyon. It addresses common questions, environmental impacts, price, and specifications of size, noise, and travel time. Something I noticed in this article is that it is heavily biased. Although it makes many good points, it often does not share the whole truth. An example of this is bending the truth of how the IKON pass has affected travel time. Another one is not including any information on how long lines will be to get on the gondola. These not being transparent is concerning.
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This was one of my main concerns, and I am glad they are taking it into account. I think tolling/limmiting the amount of people traveling up is a neccesisty.
This is a partial lie. Yes, traffic has been an issue with Little Cottonwood Canyon pre-IKON. However, the amount of traffic created from IKON access has blown it up multiple times over. Without the IKON it would be very manageable.
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I disagree. These snowsheds are only for 3/64 paths, however, they are where avalanche paths are much more frequent and dangerous. Adding snowsheds in these places would increase safety ane reduce traffic wait times.
These towers will be built by rivers and water supplies. Although they are not touching the impact from construction trash and new construction roads will be great.
I am not confinced that people will willingly leave there cars and put all there gear on just to get in the gondola.
This article does not address wait times and lines to get into the gondola.
Many people try to cut each other off and shove people out of line to get up faster. This creates a safety hazard.
This is a common issue among travelers who wait in line. Public restrooms must be implemented along the route up.
Parking is another main issue with traffic. Many people wait for hours for the canyon to open. Then, when they finally get up there, they find the parking lot is completely full. This results in people parking along the highway and in dangerous positions.
This article discusses the Cottonwood Canyons’ phases and whether the Gondola is a solution. I agree with phases 1 and 2 which increase infrastructure and bus options. Phase 3 is where the gondola comes into play. This gondola will destroy ecosystems and is not going to help as much as people seem to think.
This article does a good job of explaining the scope and possible solutions. However, it does not touch on data.
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It looks like you’re working on a writing project, specifically a Problem-Solution synthesis essay. Let’s break this down a bit and explore the key elements of your work.
First, let’s explore five inquiry topics that seem to be of interest to you based on your notes and comments:
1. Traffic Solutions in Ski Areas: Why are current traffic solutions like the gondola not sufficient for reducing congestion in ski areas?
Why this is interesting: This topic is crucial as it affects both locals and tourists, and finding an effective solution could enhance the skiing experience and safety for everyone. In your notes, you mentioned, “The gondola is a commodity that will be used mostly by tourists,” and “Almost every day I go up, especially with a snowstorm, lines are backing up out of the canyon,” highlighting the significance of traffic congestion to you.2. Environmental Impact of Infrastructure Projects: How does the construction of ski infrastructure, such as gondolas, impact local ecosystems?
Why this is interesting: Environmental sustainability is a critical issue, and understanding the balance between development and conservation is essential. You noted, “The gondola also will destroy ecosystems and be an eyesore,” pointing to your concern for environmental impacts.3. Ski Resort Customer Experience: How do traffic issues affect the overall customer experience at ski resorts?
Why this is interesting: This topic is relevant because the ski industry heavily relies on customer satisfaction to thrive. You wrote, “This causes emergency issues and an overall annoyance to customers of these ski resorts,” indicating the importance of customer experience in your analysis.4. Public Transit and Infrastructure Development: What role does public transit play in alleviating traffic issues in mountainous areas?
Why this is interesting: Public transportation can significantly reduce traffic congestion and environmental impact. Your proposal includes “more bus transportation and infrastructure,” showing your interest in public transit solutions.5. Safety Concerns in Mountainous Traffic: How do traffic and infrastructure issues contribute to safety hazards in ski areas?
Why this is interesting: Safety is a primary concern for both locals and tourists, and addressing these hazards can prevent accidents. You mentioned, “A large amount of traffic is due to cars with improper tires and only 2-wheel drive crashing during slick conditions,” emphasizing the safety aspect.Would you like to see more on how a writer might start composing on one of these topics?
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This topic is crucial as it affects both locals and tourists, and finding an effective solution could enhance the skiing experience and safety for everyone. In your notes, you mentioned, “The gondola is a commodity that will be used mostly by tourists,” and “Almost every day I go up, especially with a snowstorm, lines are backing up out of the canyon,” highlighting the significance of traffic congestion to you.
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Let’s dive into how a writer might begin composing on the topic of “Traffic Solutions in Ski Areas.” As a writer, I would start by asking myself several questions to guide my thought process and structure my essay. Here’s what that might sound like:
Imagined Think-Aloud as a Writer:
“When tackling the issue of traffic solutions in ski areas, I first need to clarify the scope of the problem. How severe is the traffic congestion, and who does it impact the most? I remember the note that ‘lines are backing up out of the canyon,’ which suggests that this is not just a minor inconvenience but a significant issue affecting many people.”
“Next, I need to consider the current solutions in place. The gondola, for instance, is mentioned as a ‘commodity mostly used by tourists.’ This makes me wonder: What are the limitations of the gondola as a solution? In what ways does it fail to address the needs of local skiers and the broader community?”
“Another important aspect to consider is what alternative solutions might exist. I’ve mentioned the need for ‘more bus transportation and infrastructure,’ so I need to explore how viable these options are. What are the potential benefits and drawbacks of expanding public transit in these areas? How would this impact the environment, cost, and overall efficiency?”
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