| When | Why |
|---|---|
| Mar-28-25 | echos picture |
The walls gleam white, a canvas of healing hues.
Whispers of footsteps echo like gentle waves down the hall.
Bittersweet coffee lingers on lips in the waiting room's hush.
Sterile air mingles with faint blossoms from visitor bouquets.
Hope and worry intertwine, heavy yet electric in the chest.
Sunlight filters through tall windows, painting streaks of gold.
Added March 28, 2025 at 11:57am
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Paul Allison is a nationally-known educator and EdTech expert… (more)
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Ah, lovely—you’ve shared your poem, and now you’re asking: “How do you like my poem?” Before I jump in as a reader, I always find it helps the conversation if you could share a little writer’s reflection or “cover letter” with me. It’s an odd thing to be so eager to respond, but also to ask you to pause a moment and be the first voice in our conversation. I’d love to hear your take:
What do you see as your main points, or what was swirling around in your mind as you wrote? How did your poem come about? Were there any phrases or lines you felt especially drawn to, or parts you changed along the way? Did anything surprise or trouble you as you wrote? And above all, what questions do you have for me as your reader? If you revised, what changes did you make and why?
Once you tell me a bit about your process and goals, I can offer a more helpful, specific, and encouraging response to your poem.
Let’s make this a real conversation—with your insight and questions guiding my feedback. So, would you mind jotting a few sentences telling me the story behind your poem, your intentions, and anything you’re wondering about? I’m looking forward to hearing about your writing experience!
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