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"Disclosure" by Camisha L. Jones (January 2020)

Author: Camisha L. Jones

Jones, Camisha  L. “Disclosure.” Poets.Org, Academy of American Poets, 3 Jan. 2020, poets.org/poem/disclosure-0.


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I’m-sorry-I’m-sorry-I’m-so-sorry-I’m-hard-for-the-hearing

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Hello, my name is Sorry

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To full rooms of strangers

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I’m hard to hear

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I vomit apologies everywhere

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They fly on bat wings

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towards whatever sound beckons

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I’m sorry. I’m sorry. I am so, so sorry

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and repeating

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and not hearing

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Dear (again)

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I regret to inform you

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I am

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here

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by Camisha L. Jones

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Copyright © 2020 by Camisha L. Jones. Originally published in Poem-a-Day on January 3, 2020, by the Academy of American Poets.

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Paul A and/or Thinking Partner (Jan 16 2026 10:19AM) : Can you give me a citation for this poem? more
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Paul A and/or Thinking Partner (Jan 16 2026 10:21AM) : Jones, Camisha L. “Disclosure.” Poets.Org, Academy of American Poets, 3 Jan. 2020, poets.org/poem/disclosure-0. more
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  • What you have in your very first line already has the core MLA pieces in a solid order: author, title, site, publisher, date, URL.
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