Shakespeare, William. “A Midsummer Night’s Dream Act I, Scenes 1 and 2.” Open Source Shakespeare, 1595, www.opensourceshakespeare.org/views/plays/play_view.php?WorkID=midsummer&Act=1&Scope=act&pleasewait=1&msg=pl.
Bottom, a weaver
Cobweb, a fairy
Demetrius, in love with Hermia
Egeus, father to Hermia
Fairy
Flute, a bellows-mender
Helena, in love with Demetrius
Hermia, daughter to Egeus, in love with Lysander
Hippolyta, queen of the Amazons, betrothed to Theseus
Lysander, in love with Hermia
Moth, a fairy
Mustardseed, a fairy
Oberon, king of the fairies
Peaseblossom, a fairy
Philostrate, master of the revels to Theseus
Puck, or Robin Goodfellow
Quince, a carpenter
Snout, a tinker
Snug, a joiner
Starveling, a tailor
Theseus, Duke of Athens
Titania, queen of the fairies
Act I, Scene 1
Athens. The palace of THESEUS.
[Enter THESEUS, HIPPOLYTA, PHILOSTRATE, and Attendants]
You’re wondering if it’s possible to write about something in nature, make comparisons to different kinds of people, and show how you’re feeling about it—just like what you see in the lines from Shakespeare’s Theseus. That’s such a thoughtful way to read and respond to poetry! If you try out one of the creative sparks below, you’ll discover new ways to work with these ideas. After doing your own writing, come back to the lines and read them like a writer—see what you notice and what you want to try next.
Here are three sparks to help you get started:
Imagine something in nature moving slowly or changing with time. Compare it to different types of people you know and let your feelings about it show through. What small detail in nature could reveal a big feeling?
Describe how waiting for something makes you feel, using a part of the natural world as a symbol or image. Connect the slow passing of time to an emotion or experience you are having now. Let your writing show how the outside world and your inside feelings match up or don’t.
Think about comparing a person you know (or imagine) to something in nature that’s slow, steady, or seems to last a long time. Try to show how this comparison makes you feel—do you like it, or is it hard? Express what you notice in yourself as you make this connection.
You can write anything you like in response—a story, a poem, a letter, a song, or even a drawing! The lead lines are there to help you start. Take one, fill in the blanks, and see where your imagination takes you.
Here’s what you can do next to turn your ideas into writing:
Would you like to see how I came up with these sparks and lead lines from the poem? I can explain the moves and meanings behind my ideas, if you want to know more!
Absolutely! Let’s use our Reading Apprenticeship strategies together to break down this phrase: “Like to a step-dame or a dowager.” We’ll focus especially on the challenging vocabulary: “step-dame” and “dowager.”
Let’s start with the first chunk:
Chunk 1:
Like to a step-dame or a dowager
Let’s use a Think Aloud routine: When we see the phrase “step-dame,” it sounds a lot like “stepmother.” We can break it down: “dame” is an old word for “lady” or “woman,” and when we add “step-” in front, it usually means someone who is related by marriage, not by birth. So, a “step-dame” must mean a stepmother—a woman who is married to our father but isn’t our biological mother.
Would you like to see more?
Chunk 2:
Let’s focus now on the word: “dowager.”
Let’s continue our Think Aloud: The word “dowager” isn’t one we use every day! If we look at the root, “dow-” reminds us of “dowry,” which is money or property a woman brings to a marriage. A “dowager” is typically a widow who has a title or property from her late husband. In literature, “dowager” often means an older woman of high social standing, but sometimes with a sense of being old-fashioned or even severe.
Let’s ask ourselves: Does the author use any clues? The phrase “like to a step-dame or a dowager” seems to compare someone to these two types of women. There’s no “but” or “however,” so the comparison is direct, and it doesn’t sound very positive, especially since “stepmother” in stories is often a negative figure, and “dowager” can mean someone strict or out of touch.
Would you like to see more?
Absolutely! Let’s work together as a team to unpack this line: “Long withering out a young man revenue.” I’m going to use a Think Aloud and break it into manageable chunks, focusing on the most difficult vocabulary. We’ll use reading strategies to help us make sense of the language.
Let’s start with the first chunk and model some thinking. We’ll go one step at a time. Ready? Here’s the first chunk:
Chunk 1: “Long withering out”
Let’s stop here and think aloud about what “long withering out” could mean. The word “withering” reminds us of something shriveling or drying up, like a plant that doesn’t get water. The author uses “long” in front, so maybe it’s not quick—it’s something that happens slowly, over time. The phrase probably means a slow process of being drained, weakened, or diminished.
Let’s check for context clues:
That’s my thinking so far. Would you like to see the next chunk?
Chunk 2: “a young man revenue”
Now let’s think aloud about this part: “a young man revenue.” The word “revenue” usually means income or money that someone earns, like a salary, profit, or allowance. Here, it’s being used to describe something that belongs to the young man—his wealth or resources.
Let’s use our reading strategies:
So, I’m thinking this line means that something is slowly draining away a young man’s wealth, opportunities, or future income.
Would you like to see more? I can model putting it all together in the next chunk!
Chunk 3: Putting It All Together (Think Aloud)
Let’s do a Think Aloud to combine what we’ve figured out. “Long withering out a young man revenue” seems to describe a slow process that causes a young man’s income, resources, or potential to be wasted away. The author uses the word “withering” as a metaphor, comparing the loss of money or opportunity to a plant slowly dying. There’s no contrasting language in this short phrase, but the context makes us imagine that time or some force is draining a young man’s future or fortune.
So, when we read this line, we can picture a young person’s hopes or means gradually fading away—not in an instant, but stretched out over a long time.
Now, I’d love to hear your thoughts! How do you interpret this phrase? What helped you figure out the meaning? Would you like to see a list of the vocabulary words and their meanings from this passage?
[Enter EGEUS, HERMIA, LYSANDER, and DEMETRIUS]
[Exeunt all but LYSANDER and HERMIA]
Act I, Scene 2
Athens. QUINCE’S house.
[Enter QUINCE, SNUG, BOTTOM, FLUTE, SNOUT, and STARVELING]
Absolutely, I’d love to help you appreciate the use of figurative language in Act I of A Midsummer Night’s Dream. Shakespeare’s language is famously rich with metaphor, simile, personification, and other imaginative devices that really bring both the characters and their world alive. Let’s focus our attention specifically on Act I as you requested.
To start our exploration: what stands out to you as particularly vivid or striking in Theseus’s opening lines? He describes the moon in a way that goes beyond simple observation. For instance, he says: “This old moon wanes! she lingers my desires, / Like to a step-dame or a dowager / Long withering out a young man revenue.” What do you notice about how he’s using language here? Can you identify what sort of literary device this might be? And why might it matter for setting the tone at the very beginning of the play?
Would you like to see more examples and continue digging into how figurative language shapes Act I?
Great observation! You’re really engaging with the text in the spirit of close reading and analysis, which is at the heart of your question about figurative language in Act I. So, let’s linger a bit on Theseus’s language: “This old moon wanes! she lingers my desires, / Like to a step-dame or a dowager / Long withering out a young man revenue.” Here, Shakespeare is layering his literary devices. He personifies the moon by giving it human-like qualities—it’s lingering and actively affecting Theseus’s feelings. But there’s also a simile when he compares the moon to “a step-dame or a dowager,” drawing on social roles that would have been familiar (and perhaps faintly comic) to his audience.
Now, why might Shakespeare open the play with this mix of personification and metaphor? What does it tell us about Theseus’s state of mind as he awaits his wedding? And how do you think this figurative opening sets up some of the major themes or moods for the rest of Act I?
Would you like to look at another passage for more examples of figurative language?
Exactly! You’re really on to something important about Theseus’s character and the tone Shakespeare sets at the outset of A Midsummer Night’s Dream. The figurative language doesn’t just decorate the speech—it reveals Theseus’s impatience and desire. The moon, personified as a slow, lingering figure, becomes an obstacle to his happiness. So, in your view, does this use of figurative language help us empathize with Theseus? Or does it perhaps hint at some larger theme about time and desire in the play?
Let’s think about another striking example from Act I. When Lysander says, “The course of true love never did run smooth,” what kind of literary device is this? How does it work differently from Theseus’s metaphor about the moon? Could you quote another line or two from Lysander’s speech that builds on this idea? How do these examples help establish expectations for the audience?
Would you like to keep exploring more passages together?
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