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I want to spend less time on my phone, but my parents and teachers make it impossible

Author: Hillary Kimball

Kimball, Hillary. “Voices: I Want to Spend Less Time on My Phone, but My Parents and Teachers Make It Impossible.” The Salt Lake Tribune, 18 May 2025, www.sltrib.com/opinion/commentary/2025/05/18/voices-i-want-spend-less-time-my/.

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I want to spend less time on my phone, but my parents and teachers make it impossible

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sltrib.com/opinion/commentary/2025/05/18/voices-i-want-spend-less-time-my

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(Illustration by Christopher Cherrington  |  The Salt Lake Tribune) RBeyond the eyes buried in screens are teenagers itching to make a change to our bad habits, but we just canRt seem to get away from the daily usage of screens,R writes Hillary Kimball in an op-ed.

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(Illustration by Christopher Cherrington  |  The Salt Lake Tribune) qސBeyond the eyes buried in screens are teenagers itching to make a change to our bad habits, but we just canqސt seem to get away from the daily usage of screens,qސ writes Hillary Kimball in an op-ed.

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Editor’s note • This is part of a collaborative project between The Salt Lake Tribune and the Highland High School Rambler. Read more about these young Utahns’ experiences and perspectives here.

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In early March, one of my teachers asked us to grab our phones and pull up our screen times. I went to my phone settings, looked at the daily average and was shocked: eight hours and nine minutes!

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It made my head hurt — how is that even possible?

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I am a straight-A student with a challenging schedule. I’m a cheerleader. I have a job. How is it possible that I spend one-third of my day on a screen?

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Although much of this is doing schoolwork, I must admit that my love of Block Blast and Instagram has contributed to this.

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Phones in the hands of every person over the age of 11 is normal, but the unwelcome result is a rising amount of average screen time, and, with it, health concerns.

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According to the Centers for Disease Control, half of teenagers ages 12-17 had an average screen time of four hours or more in 2021 through 2023.

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Most of my classmates shared with me that they spend more than four hours a day on their phones. Some even reported more than seven, eight or even nine hours a day. No matter how much our parents tell us to get off our phones, we can’t get away from them. Sure, we have games and social media, but much of our world depends on — and takes place on — our phones.

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When I was 13, before I had a single social media account, my parents handed me an iPhone, clueless about the addiction that would soon follow. I had strict screen limits and app restrictions, but as I got older, the restrictions were removed, and my screen time increased drastically. My parents constantly criticize my screen usage, but aren’t they the people who put the phone in my hand?

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Teachers — another group who criticizes our phone use — keep giving assignments that need to be completed on our screens or turned in with our phones. Once we have our phones out to do the assignment, we are but one swipe away from Instagram.

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Starting in the fall, cell phones are supposed to be banned from public schools due to SB178, which was passed in the 2025 Utah legislative session. This will likely help, but I worry that it will lead to binging after school is out.

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I am aware of how my actions affect my health. As I scroll through my phone, I think to myself, “I need to do something more productive than this.So then I make a change. I stop for a week and my screen time plummets. I feel good again. But inevitably, my teachers assign work on Canvas. I need to order something for dinner, so I go online. I need to plan activities with friends, so I am back on the screen. And the vicious cycle starts again.

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Adults call us “screenagers.” They tell us we are “addicted.” But this is a hollow criticism. The very generation who created the internet and smartphones are the same people who tell us we have a problem.

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Ironic, right?

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We are just kids following the societal norms that the people before us created, but we are being criticized for falling into the trap they set.

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They must understand that the internet is what connects our entire world. It’s where we socialize, learn and entertain ourselves. This is how we all live.

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Not everything needs to be accessed through a link or QR code, but criticism must be reserved for those who continue to make using a screen a daily activity. The parents who criticize us for being on our phones must understand that we follow the example that they set.

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Beyond the eyes buried in screens are teenagers itching to make a change to our bad habits, but we just can’t seem to get away from the daily usage of screens.

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We are known as the “problem,” and we’re told that we are addicted to our screens, but the problem we should really be considering is how to break the chain of screen time when the world constantly demands we pull out our phones.

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Hillary Kimball is a sophomore at Highland High School who writes for The Rambler, her school newspaper. She is on the varsity cheer team and enjoys tumbling.

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The Salt Lake Tribune is committed to creating a space where Utahns can share ideas, perspectives and solutions that move our state forward. We rely on your insight to do this. Find out how to share your opinion here, and email us at voices@sltrib.com.

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DMU Timestamp: May 18, 2025 19:27


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✅ Please Note

  • The information reviewed here comes from a student commentary published on sltrib.com (The Salt Lake Tribune) in May 2025. As of now, AI models are only updated with knowledge up to June 2024, so some information about future events may not be verifiable.
  • This analysis is for fact-checking expressed claims and cited facts, not personal opinions or experiences, unless those are stated as facts.
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Overarching Claim

Moderate version: The structure of school and family life makes it hard for teens to reduce phone use, even when they want to.

Strong version: Adults are responsible for teens’ high screen time because they create an environment that pushes teens toward phone use, then criticize them for it.


✅ Verified Facts Table

Statement Status Clarification & Correction Confidence (1–5)
Phones in the hands of every person over the age of 11 is normal. ✅ Correct (for most U.S. teens) Most U.S. teens own or have access to a smartphone by age 13 (Pew Research Center). Search keywords: “teen smartphone ownership”, “Pew Research Center”. 5
CDC reports half of teenagers ages 12-17 had an average screen time of four hours or more in 2021 through 2023. ✅ Correct CDC data confirms many U.S. teens have high daily screen time (CDC.gov). Search keywords: “teen screen time”, “CDC”, “Data Brief”. 5
Much schoolwork requires phones or internet-connected devices. ✅ Correct (in most schools) Multiple studies and news outlets confirm growing reliance on devices for homework (EdWeek.org, NYTimes.com). Search keywords: “school device requirement”, “homework technology”. 4
Utah passed SB178 in its legislative session to ban phones in public schools starting fall. ✅ Correct (for legislation passed in spring) SB178 was passed by Utah lawmakers in early spring and covers cell phone use in schools (Utah Legislature site). Search keywords:
“SB178 cell phone ban Utah public schools”
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Paul A (May 19 2025 11:02AM) : The third fact about schoolwork requiring phones or internet-connected devices is going to create a challenge in Utah (and New York BTW) because of the laws banning the use of phones in schools. However, I guess students will still be able to use laptops>
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⚠️ Errors and Corrections Table

Statement Issue Correction Correction Confidence (1–5)
Phones in the hands of every person over the age of 11 is normal. ❌ Incorrect (overstated) While most U.S. teens have smartphones by age 13, not “every” child over age 11 does. In some families or communities, access may be lower. (Pew Research Center)
Keywords: “teen smartphone ownership”.
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No matter how much our parents tell us to get off our phones, we can’t get away from them.  Opinion/personal experience This is a personal feeling. Some teens report they can cut back with support or changes in habits. Outside scope for factual correction. N/A
Teachers keep giving assignments that need to be completed on our screens or turned in with our phones. ❌ Incorrect (overstated/all schools) Many teachers use online platforms, but not all assignments require a phone specifically—often computers or tablets are used. Law changes may shift this further (EdWeek.org). Keywords:“school devices”, “homework”. 4
The very generation who created the internet and smartphones are the same people who tell us we have a problem. ❓ Unable to substantiate / Overgeneralization Generational blame is too broad—many adults did not work on such technologies and opinions vary widely among older generations about tech use. Factual corrections can’t be made for generalizations about “a generation.” 3
We are just kids following the societal norms that the people before us created, but we are being criticized for falling into the trap they set.  Opinion/generalization This statement expresses an opinion about society, not a verifiable fact. No correction possible; outside factual scope. N/A

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Paul A (May 19 2025 11:22AM) : I appreciate these notes or corrections. The overgeneralizations did make me want to learn more about what the facts are.
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 Corrections Summary:

  • Overgeneralization Correction: The claim that “phones in the hands of every person over the age of 11 is normal” is an exaggeration. Most, but not all, teens in the U.S. have smartphones by age 13 (Pew Research Center). Keywords: “teen smartphone ownership”.
  • Device Use Clarification: Not all school assignments have to be done on a phone; computers and tablets are often acceptable and may be emphasized more with new phone bans. (EdWeek.org). Keywords: “school device use”.
  • Opinion vs. Fact: Statements about generational blame and youth “traps” reflect personal or group feelings, not verifiable facts. These are outside the scope of factual corrections.

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Paul A (May 19 2025 11:26AM) : The device use clarification is helpful to get to some understanding of how the cell phone bans will impact classrooms. And the overgeneralizations and opinions expressed take away agency and personal decision-making.
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How will phone bans in Utah and New York change classroom device use? Look for recent news and district policy updates after new laws. Check school websites or local education boards. 5 “Utah SB178”, “NY phone ban schools”, “classroom device alternatives”
Do most assignments actually require a phone, or are other devices (like laptops) acceptable? Ask teachers, review school tech guidelines, or look for student surveys about required devices. 4 “school device policies”, “student technology survey”, “homework laptop vs phone”
What percentage of teens lack regular smartphone access in the U.S.? Check Pew Research Center and CDC reports for up-to-date statistics. 5 “teen smartphone statistics”, “digital divide teens”, “Pew teen access”
Are there alternative digital tools (besides phones) allowed under new laws? Read text of SB178 and similar bills. Look for Q&A on school or state education sites. 4 “Utah SB178 text”, “school device alternatives”, “policy FAQ

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 Source Usefulness Assessment:

Source Usefulness Assessment Notes Rating (1–5)
The Salt Lake Tribune (sltrib.com) ✅ Good for perspectives and local reporting; primary for editorial opinions, not always factual news. Op-eds are student voices, useful for understanding lived experience. Need to verify any facts or statistics cited here elsewhere. 3
Pew Research Center (pewresearch.org) ✅ Excellent for national-level teen tech trends and demographic data. Reliable, nonpartisan social science data. Great for verifying U.S.-specific phone usage rates among teens. 5
CDC (cdc.gov) ✅ Very strong for health stats, screen time studies, and risk research. Official government source—regularly updates reports on youth health, including digital behavior data. 5
EdWeek (edweek.org) ✅ Trusted education journalism—good for policy change, school tech practices. Covers K-12 tech integration and evolving rules—helpful for understanding device use trends in the classroom. 4
Utah Legislature Site (le.utah.gov) ✅ Best source for law text, bill status, and official summaries of SB178 and other new legislation. Go-to spot for bill language—make sure to look at final versions and any implementation guidance. 5

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 Source Usefulness Assessment (Another Round):

Source Usefulness Assessment Notes Rating (1–5)
New York Times (nytimes.com) ✅ Strong for national coverage, policy news, and case studies on technology in schools. Often provides deep reporting on state-level policy changes, interviews with teachers/students, and trends. Check paywall status. 4
Common Sense Media (commonsensemedia.org) ✅ Great for research about children’s tech habits and school device guidance. Publishes reports on media use, advice for parents/teachers, and tools for digital well-being. 4
KSL NewsRadio (kslnewsradio.com) ⚠️ Good for local Utah perspectives—check for firsthand reactions or news updates on SB178 implementation. Local coverage—can show early effects of law or concerns from community members. Needs verification elsewhere for national trends. 3
National Education Association (nea.org) ✅ Reliable source for teacher views, education policy briefs, and classroom management strategies. Posts articles about best practices, effects of tech bans, and guides for educators dealing with new rules. 4
Pew Research Center (pewresearch.org) ✅ Still top tier for reliable survey data and trend tracking on device ownership and media use by age group. Can break down stats by state when available—handy for finding differences between Utah/New York and nationwide patterns. 5

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 Revised Summary (Corrected & Accurate):

Many teens in the U.S. have high screen time, especially as schoolwork and social life are often connected to phones or computers. Surveys from groups like Pew Research Center show that most teens have smartphones by age 13, but not all kids do. The Centers for Disease Control (CDC) reports that about half of U.S. teens had four hours or more of screen time a day between 2021 and 2023 (Pew Research Center, CDC.gov). Search: “teen phone ownership”, “CDC teen screen time”.

While new rules in places like Utah (SB178) will ban cell phone use during school hours, many assignments might still need the internet or devices like laptops. Not every homework assignment requires a phone—many can be done on computers or tablets instead (EdWeek.org). Search: “Utah SB178”, “school device policies”. Students, teachers, and parents may all have different feelings about these changes, so it’s important to check both personal stories and official data to get the full picture.

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Paul A and/or Fact-Checking and Historical Analysis Teammate (May 19 2025 11:35AM) : What would a fact-checker say? more
Fact-Checking and Historical Analysis Teammate with Paul A's edits:
Fact-Checking and Historical Analysis Teammate
I have 8 sections for you to read and respond to. Basically, I help you...

 What a Fact-Checker Might Say:

Most facts in the student’s essay are mostly true, especially those citing national surveys and the new Utah law. Some claims use strong language or overgeneralize (like saying “everyone” has a phone), but the big picture—teens face real challenges with screen time, much of it connected to school and society—is supported by good evidence. Still, personal experiences shouldn’t be confused with universal facts.

If you were talking to someone about this topic, what would you highlight as most important or most fair? Share your verdict or questions!

My final section is a Tip Suggestion for checking these kinds of claims yourself. Ready to see it? Write “Continue”!


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Paul Allison is a nationally-known educator and EdTech expert… (more)

May 19
Paul A

Paul Allison is a nationally-known educator and EdTech expert… (more)

Paul A (May 19 2025 11:37AM) : I'm thinking that it might be better to leave all blame out and, instead, to say that most of us are in the middle of these issues looking for good ways out.
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