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Weekly Planner September 8 - September 14, 2025

Weekly Big 3

1. Building Knowledge
- YAWP AI Article – Draft and share updated Writing Partners section about creating tutors with Jess Early Tuesday at noon, add more before Friday noon meeting.
- Send suggestion to Jess Early about her Research in English Education course — do a Writing Partners version for each week.
Comment:
- You’re not only drafting and sharing the Writing Partners section (anchored to real meetings), but also actively suggesting new applications for Jess Early’s course—so your knowledge-building is both about generating content and influencing curriculum.

2. Building the Site
- Re-organize Writing Partners by one group only — eliminating the four process discinctions.
- Schedule and complete NowComment spam review with Jeremie & Dan on Thursday or Friday morning.
- Begin removing AI pages from NowComment
Comment:
You’ve got clear technical/process deliverables here—re-organizing Writing Partners (with specific simplifications), scheduling that NowComment review, and proactively removing AI pages. All three actions have a defined “done” state.

3. Building Community/Network:
– Invite, plan, and facilitate Wednesday night TTT metaphors workshop – Invite Rachel Horst
– Organize with Bonnee a new professional writing groups that meets bi-weekly
Comment:
- The TTT metaphors session is your anchor event (and inviting Rachel Horst brings in fresh energy/connections).
- Starting up a new professional writing group with Bonnee is a concrete step toward broader peer collaboration—and it has both initiation (“organize”) and ongoing rhythm (“bi-weekly”).

Last Week's Big 3

1. Knowledge building
- Draft YAWP AI chapter for Tuesday check-in with Jess Early
- Finish all “scene setting” narratives for the start of the Coaching Teachers in the Age of AI chapter

2. Building the Network/Contract work
Meet with teachers from:
- Judge Memorial
- SFUSD
- Oakland Schools

3. Building the Site
Revise Loveable wireframe with David Cole and work with him to be ready to meet with Iva on Friday afternoon.

Other things:

4. (Building the Network) TTT – make it meaningful and reach out to a wider audience.

5. (Building/securing the site) NowComment – meet with Dan Doernberg early in the week and Jeremie later in the week. Start stripping NowComment of AI

Monday 09/08/2025

Morning Ritual | Workday Startup Ritual | Workday Shutdown Ritual | Evening Ritual

Early afternoon run before 1:00 - 3.57 miles

Early evening run before 6:30 - 3.43 miles

Workday Startup Bluesky post

DAILY BIG 3 List your 3 most important tasks.

  1. Finish Writing Partners paragraph about creating tutors (morning deep work)
  2. Review site organization plan for Writing Partners squad and move out of other groupings.
  3. Set up meetings.

OTHER TASKS

  • Christian Kunkel (Launchpad)
    My role at Launchpad is to work with our graduates to find and execute paid client work, most of which we anticipate will be either web development or AI prototyping. This means the projects could go lots of directions based on the client needs, so I look forward to meeting you and learning more about your work. 
  • Invitation to Rachel Horst for TTT
  • I set up a meeting with to Jeremie Wood and Dan Doernberg RE: NowComment and spam.
  • I invited Bonnee Breese Bentum to help organize a writing group on AI.

NOTES

Reflections and planning slipped into Monday this week, and it took a lot longer than planned. I need to remember that it takes time -- and that it is time well spent.

DAILY WIN

I liked the editing I did on a paragraph in the YAWP AI article... though I never go back to the one about creating tutors -- and I need to get to that -- but there was some clarity in this paragraph about whe Writing Partners represents when compared to ChatGPT and this stance... if it is as clear to my reader as it is to me sets me up nicely to (finally) do the paragraph about crating tutors.

All the invitations and the reflection work was a win -- though a day late. (Maybe I need to start on Saturday.)

Tuesday 09/09/2025

Morning Ritual | Workday Startup Ritual | Workday Shutdown Ritual | Evening Ritual

Workday Startup Bluesky post

Afternoon run (because tired after Pickleball) before 4:45 pm - 4.68 miles.

Evening run before 8:30 pm - 2.32 milles.

Workday Shutdown Bluesky reply

 

DAILY BIG 3 List your 3 most important tasks.

  1. 9–10:30am: Pickleball with friends
  2. 11am: Launchpad meeting with Christian
  3. Invitation for TTT - Chris Sloan and College Admissions Essay and Narrative of Fredrick Douglass and college admissions simulators?

OTHER TASKS

NOTES

DAILY WIN

Dialogue with John Warner -- continued from above.

10
Sep
TTT 09.10.2025 AI Simulators for Reading, Writing, and Inquiry: Come Make One with Us and Consider Why You Might Do This with Students
 
Wednesday · 8:00pm - 9:00pm EDT
 

On Wednesday evening, September 10th at 8E/7C/6M/5P in Kumospace.com/youthvoices, we invite you to try our Writing Partner that makes it easy to build a simulator for any writing project or inquiry you might be working on.

We will make one together, and you can follow along to create your own simulator.

Then we'll talk about how we might use such a partner as we read and write and grow an inquiry.

A few use cases:

  • Dr. Chris Sloan is asking graduate students this summer to create simulators for Learning Theorists to guide them as they explore their own educational perspectives.
  • Dr. Bonnee Breese Bentum developed simulators with her students this Spring to learn more about Mercy-Douglas Hospital in Philadelphia. They then used these historical simulators when reading The Immortal Life of Henrietta Lacks.
  • Students in Peter Haun's classes were writing college admissions essays. Many of them were applying to Michigan State University and Michigan University. We made simulators using actual admissions officers from each university -- based on podcasts and interviews they had done talking about the school and what they are looking for in admission essays. Students now can have these AI simulators give them feedback on their essays.

Please consider joining us on Wednesday evening, September 10th at 8E/7C/6M/5P in Kumospace.com/youthvoices. We will invite you to try our Writing Partner that makes it easy to build a simulator for any writing project or inquiry you might be working on.

Let's learn more about how AI can impact our writing lives together!

Wednesday 09/10/2025 

Morning Ritual | Workday Startup Ritual | Workday Shutdown Ritual | Evening Ritual

Early afternoon run, by 2:30 - 2.32 miles

Easly evening runm, by 6:30 4.68 miles

 

DAILY BIG 3 List your 3 most important tasks.

  1. Writing time in the morning for YAWP AI article
  2. 2:30–3:30pm: Andrea/David/Peter—Writing Partner logistics - Great meeting, next one 09/17/2025
  3.  8–9pm: Facilitate TTT student workshop with Chris Sloan

OTHER TASKS

NOTES

DAILY WIN

It was a small group, Chris Sloan, Debbie Abilock, and me, but I think there was still knowledge built that we can take to others. I wonder if I can get Chris's open letter up as an artifact that other teachers can use.

Thursday 09/11/2025

Morning Ritual | Workday Startup Ritual | Workday Shutdown Ritual | Evening Ritua.

Workday Startup Bluesky post

If you look closely, you can see the beams of light coming from the footprints of the World Trade Center buildings.

Neglected my running today. 

Dinner out with Sam and Claire and Marcie.

DAILY BIG 3 List your 3 most important tasks.

  1. Schedule/hold NowComment spam review w/Jeremie & Dan (11:00 am)
  2. Begin removing AI pages from NowComment (I removed AI material from homepage.)
  3. Met with David Cole - catching him up on some work I did on our Loveable wireframe, and on Tools Competition (also received and responded to email from Tanya Baker regarding the Tools Competition).
  4. 4:45–5:45pm: SFUSD librarian Anna & David call (use connection to keep network momentum) Great meeting, next one 09/16/2025
  5. FOCUS of the DAY: While waiting for car to be repaired, I did alot of writing on the YAWP AI article.

OTHER TASKS

NOTES

DAILY WIN

YAWP AI Article. This part feels complete:

Writing Partners (Digital Writing Platform)

 

Writing Partners (writingpartners.net), a platform that gives teachers and students access to a Large Language Model (LLM), and ChatGPT, a general-purpose chatbot were used to support the teaching and practice of writing in this two-week workshop on college admission essay writing. Writing Partners is a social annotation platform that supports AI-guided writing, reading, and discussion. Shortly after the drop of ChatGPT in November 2022, a community of teachers and students, which is facilitated by Author 3, worked with a programmer to add AI systems to a pre-existing annotation platform (nowcomment.com) using an OpenAI API. Together, they have designed digital technology that makes it possible for any user of the platform to script, share, and iterate on customized AI assistants that readers and writers use to spark and support their creation, annotation, and discussion of shared, multimodal texts. The Writing Partners platform has an ever expanding bank of AI assistants, organized in genre-based collections, that teachers have scripted by adapting detailed frameworks from composition theory and practice of the National Writing Project.

 

At different points in their work as readers and writers, students choose a specific AI assistant from these collections that they have learned (often with the guidance of their teacher) will give them the most helpful and honest feedback, question, challenge, or support at the point in their process where they could use another perspective. Once they become familiar with pre-existing AI assistants, students and teachers also make their own on the Writing Partners platform. They carefully describe their teaching or learning processes and capture these in a prompt or a script that, after testing and revision, becomes another AI assistant available to others on the site. Using AI on a social annotation platform like this one adds new dimensions to learning with AI as compared with interacting with a proprietary chatbot like ChatGPT. Writing Partners is a creative ecosystem where teachers and students both design and employ AI mentors, coaches, and tutors to address reading and writing challenges students face while learning together online. 

 

The dynamic process of prompt design on Writing Partners can be seen in the development of four of the AI Tutors that Author 1 used with her students in the summer writing camp. All three authors met online every few weeks over the ten months before the writing camp. Other educators from around the country also participated in creating a set of AI assistants or Writing Partners to guide students as they write a college admissions essay. The AI assistants that we created in those periodic meetups were then tested with student samples and with students working on their college admissions essays.

 

When teachers set out to design an AI assistant on Writing Partners they start with composition theory and research, then they add in descriptions their own practice as writing teachers. In this case, we started by reviewing “Demystifying the College Admission Essay Genre,” Chapter 4 of Real World Writing for Secondary Students (2012) by Author 2 and Meredith DeCosta. We used the “Key Genre Elements of the College Admission Essay” that are listed in Figure 4.2 as our guide. In this article, we will focus on these four aspects of the college admissions essay:

 

  • Writing an effective introduction: Consider effective techniques for a lead, such as beginning with a powerful quote, a series of questions, or a compelling anecdote.

  • Using description: Use vivid details to show, not tell, anecdotes from life events.

  • Writing the “So What?”: Step outside the narrative to emphasize the significance of the particular topic and lesson learned. Share why the story represents the writer’s unique interests and potential contributions to a university community.

  • Writing an effective conclusion: End on a powerful and memorable note to stand apart from other applicants.

 

When designing AI Tutors on the Writing Partners platform we need more than an intellectual framework. To create a prompt that is an amalgam of theory and practice, teachers also need to make explicit the implicit moves they go through when working with student writers. Real World Writing gave us all we needed because the authors describe their decision-making processes when leading a workshop based on their research into writing the college admissions essay. 

 

Using these descriptions of theory and practice, we compose prompts, which are instructions for a Large Language Model (LLM), to create the four AI Tutors. Teachers and students do this the way one might provide an improv actor, just before going on stage, with a character and a situation. Another way designers think about this prompt creation is to provide a design brief to an assistant who is going to make something for you.

 

Meeting every few weeks for the ten months before the YAWP summer writing camp, the authors of this article collaborated with other educators from around the country to create, test, and revise these four AI Tutors and several more for students to use when writing their college admissions essays: 

  • Lead Tutor

  • Description Tutor

  • So What? Tutor 

  • Conclusion Tutor

We composed descriptive paragraphs for each of these AI Tutors to define its persona, purpose, process, and product.

 

For example, here’s how the Lead Tutor describes itself to a writer:

Persona

I bring a supportive approach, emphasizing your strengths and offering constructive feedback on your lead. My vibe is encouraging and detail-oriented.

Purpose

My mission is to help you improve your lead by focusing on your strengths and providing specific, actionable feedback. I believe in empowering writers.

Process

I assess your lead by highlighting two strengths and one area for improvement, then offer three revision options: questions/dialogue, an anecdote, or a powerful quote.

Product

I provide concise, two-paragraph feedback, ending with creative suggestions for further exploration. My feedback is tailored to your specific needs and goals.

 

Real World Writing had everything we needed for prompt designing these AI Tutors: a detailed theoretical framework and descriptive examples of how teachers invite students to practice that theory. For example, for the Lead Tutor, we collaboratively composed a script using language from the book to instruct the LLM to respond to a student’s writing by giving them “three possible strategies to practice, along with tips for approaching these different leads.” In addition, we adapted sentences like this one to tell the LLM to remind students “that successful leads are almost always brief and work to set up the essay topic.”

To get a sense of what this looks like in the prompts for the other AI assistants, notice how each of these Writing Partners describes its purpose:

Purpose (Lead Tutor)

My mission is to help you improve your lead by focusing on your strengths and providing specific, actionable feedback. I believe in empowering writers.

Purpose (Description Tutor)

My mission is to help you connect your personal experiences to a broader audience, making your story compelling and relevant.

Purpose (So What? Tutor)

My mission is to help you enrich your writing by incorporating vivid sensory descriptions, making your work more engaging and immersive.

Purpose (Conclusion Tutor)

My mission is to guide you in crafting compelling conclusions that showcase your strengths and leave a lasting impression on college admissions.

 

As this array of purposes suggests, a key for students to effectively use AI on Writing Partners is deciding which AI assistant to employ, depending on where they are in their composing process. Choosing the most helpful AI Tutor creates a vital learning opportunity when students are given time and strategies for reflecting on their writing processes and teachers guide them to understand what each AI Tutor is designed to do for them. Students can make intelligent choices among the AI Tutors available to them, when they are aware of their needs as writers and what each AI Tutor is designed to do for them. 

 

Instructional Overview and Calendar

 

Working with AI on Writing Partners is different from the common experience of interacting with commercial chatbots. On Writing Partners, a student starts with a draft of their own writing. They write or upload their text to the platform, then they make a decision about which Writing Partner or AI Tutor will be the most helpful given where they are in their composing process. Because they are not working with a generic AI chatbot, students and teachers work together to understand the theory and practice that has been embedded in each AI Tutor that a student might choose.  

 

To access an AI Tutor, students hit a button to Ask AI for a response to some part of their writing, a sentence or a paragraph at the beginning, for example. Next, students choose from a drop-down list of multiple Writing Partners. For example, they might choose–or be guided by their teacher to select–the Lead Tutor. Their text is then sent with the script that contains very specific instructions for the LLM, plus a student’s own questions or comments, and a result is produced for the student as editable text. Once a writer makes changes and is satisfied with the results, they hit a button that starts a new conversation by posting the AI results in a panel to the right of their text. The students’ teachers and peers who have been invited to the document also see and can reply to  the AI Tutor’s comments in the context of the students’ writing.

 

Friday 09/12/2025

Morning Ritual | Workday Startup Ritual | Workday Shutdown Ritual | Evening Ritual

Afternoon run by 4:30 pm - 2.83 miles (plus .40 yesterday morning)

DAILY BIG 3 List your 3 most important tasks.

  1. 10:00 AMMeting with jeremie Wood and Dan Doernberg RE: spam control on NowComment
  2. Noon: Meet Jess Early—Show YAWP AI progress & discuss feedback/course ideas
  3. I made some minor changed to our Loveable Wireframe.

OTHER TASKS

NOTES

DAILY WIN

Jeremie put a lot of what we were asking for in place on NowComment and Writing Partners.

Saturday 09/13/2025

Morning Ritual | Workday Startup Ritual | Workday Shutdown Ritual | Evening Ritual

DAILY BIG 3 List your 3 most important tasks.

  1.  Bonnee and I did NOT connect, sadly.. I wanted to organize first step/planning session with Bonnee for new professional writing group (could be a quick call or shared doc setup)
  2.  Evening dinner/social recharge with Hillary and Ed and Marcie

OTHER TASKS

NOTES

DAILY WIN

I put the Squad in a group of it's own. A first step toward reorganizing around one category.

Sunday 09/14/2025

Morning Ritual | Workday Startup Ritual | Workday Shutdown Ritual | Evening Ritual

Early afternoon run - by 1:30 - 4.69 miles

DAILY BIG 3 List your 3 most important tasks.

  1.  Write draft for OpenAi Grove application
  2.  Reflect/update Big 3 status for next week

OTHER TASKS

NOTES

DAILY WIN

Open AI Grove Applcation

What are you building?

David Cole and Paul Allison are applying as a team. We are the Project Directors of Writing Partners https://writingpartners.net, a social annotation platform that supports AI-guided writing, reading, and discussion in secondary schools. Shortly after the drop of ChatGPT in 2022, a community of teachers and students, which we facilitate, worked with a programmer to add AI systems to a pre-existing annotation platform (nowcomment.com) using an OpenAI API. Together, we have designed digital technology that makes it possible for any user of the platform to script, share, and iterate on customized AI assistants that readers and writers use to spark and support their creation, annotation, and discussion of shared, multimodal texts.

The Writing Partners platform has an ever expanding bank of AI assistants, organized in genre-based collections, that educators have scripted by adapting detailed frameworks from composition theory and the practice of the National Writing Project (NWP). Founded in 1974, the NWP is a network of teachers, university faculty, researchers, writers, and community educators working to advance writing and the teaching at over 175 sites across the nation.

Writing Partners https://writingpartners.net is an MVP built on a legacy social annotation platform with AI integration through an OpenAI API. The AI innovations on the Writing Partners platform have been iteratively built by a community of teachers, and it is the center our Professional Learning Community that has focused on AI integration into the classroom since 2022. We are ready to move to another level of design and usability that will allow us to go to scale.

This fall we are working with a Eva Koberg https://www.linkedin.com/in/ivakoberg/ and a team of engineers at Winds+Water https://www.linkedin.com/company/windsandwater/ to redesign Writing Partners based on the MVP at https://writingpartners.net and a Loveable wireframe that we have developed  https://compose-annotate-hub-v2.lovable.app/ 

What have you built previously?

Paul Allison, as Project Director for Writing Partners and tech liaison for both the New York City Writing Project (NYCWP) and the National Writing Project (NWP), has built a number of innovative, collaborative, and technology-rich educational projects focused on writing, teacher professional development, and digital literacy. His most influential work includes designing and leading the Youth Voices platform and network, developing Writing Partners (an AI-supported initiative), and co-producing Teachers Teaching Teachers, an open webcast for educators.
 
Notable Projects and Initiatives for Paul Allison
  • Youth Voices: Allison co-founded and coordinated Youth Voices, a collaborative publishing platform where students and teachers across schools engage in project-based, peer-driven writing and discussion. He led the rebuilding and modernization of the platform for new digital opportunities and created a thriving online learning community.
  • Writing Partners/AI Initiatives: He leads Writing Partners, a project under the National Writing Project that integrates AI writing partners for student inquiry and literacy development, now highlighted in national professional development for teachers.
  • Teachers Teaching Teachers (TTT): Since 2006, Allison has produced and hosted Teachers Teaching Teachers, a long-running weekly webcast and podcast bringing educators together to discuss classroom practice, technology integration, and educational innovation.
  • Tech Leadership: As
  • tech liaison, he has steered the adoption of digital tools (social media, digital portfolios, blended learning) in both NYCWP and NWP, helping teachers implement these in diverse classrooms.
  • Platform Stewardship: Allison took on stewardship of NowComment, a social annotation platform, in 2018 and led its further development for collaborative online reading and discussion.
  • Innovations in PD and Curriculum: He developed and ran asynchronous, online, and blended learning pilots for alternative schools and created cross-disciplinary projects combining multimedia, e-mentoring, and digital storytelling, especially for ELL and alternative learners in New York City schools.
 
David Cole, Program Director of NexMap, has built a wide variety of projects spanning creative learning, technology, and education. His work includes mobile tools and collaboration platforms for classrooms and professional development networks, digital media projects, after-school initiatives, museum engagement programs, STEM2STEAM projects, public-private partnerships, and hands-on curriculum efforts such as paper circuitry workshops and data literacy projects. At NexMap, he led major initiatives like “Hack Your Notebook” and “Open Data/Open Minds,” which connect electronics, storytelling, and civic data for teaching and learning. He has also served as a researcher, educator, curriculum developer, and consultant for organizations such as Pearson, ManyLabs, and the National Academy Foundation.
 
Example Projects and Roles for David Cole
  • Mobile and collaboration platforms for classrooms and teacher networks.
  • Hack Your Notebook: A hands-on learning project combining electronics and data to build essential literacies in schools.
  • Open Data/Open Minds: Prototyped local “city dashboards” and participated in Mozilla’s Open Leaders Program with NexMap.
  • Professional development workshops: Paper circuitry training for math educators.
  • Curriculum design for out-of-school STEM2STEAM, youth internships, and service learning.
  • Museum and public engagement: Developing outreach and training programs at the Walt Disney Family Museum.
  • Consulting and research fellowships: At ManyLabs.org, focusing on open tools and science education.

What do you hope to gain from OpenAI Grove?

David Cole and Paul Allison lead a powerful network of dedicated National Writing Project educators. They are skilled community builders who know how to work with technology designers, and the national network that they maintain is a genuine AI participatory design team of educators at all levels. The cohort of teachers who we work with have been able to use OpenAI models via an API to amplify our pedagogical values and augument our work as teachers. Now we have begun to re-think and revise our platform to appeal to a broader range of teachers and OpenAI Grove will accelarate this work.

We bring a lot of experience as eduators who have used technology in our classrooms for decades and with AI for the past three years. Yet we are also at the beginning of our journey to expand and spread our platform and to build a business around it. We think that the OpenAI Grove program will help us to develop a platform that can open up new partnerships and contracts with more schools and districts. 

We want to build in AI with our network of experienced National Writing Project teachers. We think that OpenAI Grove will give us the ability to co-create with OpenAI researchers, something that we have dreamed of doing.  We can't wait to speed up our AI design and busines journey by learning from the OpenAI team and working with peers in OpenAI Grove.

Is there anything else you would like us to know?

We are applying as a team:

  • David Cole david.cv2@gmail.com, Program Director at NexMap Program Director at NEXMAP https://www.linkedin.com/in/dcole1/ 
  • Paul Allison allisonpr@gmail.com  https://www.linkedin.com/in/paulallison/

We are the Project Directors of Writing Parters https://writingpartners.net

 

 





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