Context:
H. L. Mencken famously wrote, “The average man does not want to be free. He simply wants to be safe.” His words suggest that while people claim to value freedom, most are more motivated by the desire for stability, protection, and comfort. In the modern world—where digital technology, global conflict, and social expectations shape our everyday lives—Mencken’s observation continues to feel relevant. Today’s society is filled with situations where individuals must choose between independence and security, and more often than not, the need to feel safe wins.
Claim:
Mencken’s idea largely applies to contemporary society. Although freedom remains an important ideal, many people willingly trade parts of it for convenience, reassurance, or a sense of control. The choices people make—online, in politics, and in their social lives—show that safety often outweighs complete freedom when the two come into conflict.
Concession:
This does not mean people no longer care about freedom. Throughout history and in the present, individuals and groups have fought passionately for civil rights, equality, privacy, and independence. Movements for racial justice, protests for democratic rights in several countries, and debates over personal data all show that freedom still matters. However, these moments of resistance typically arise when restrictions become extreme. In everyday life, most people quietly choose comfort over risk, predictability over uncertainty, and security over absolute liberty.
Evidence/Support:
1. Technology and privacy:
In the digital age, people regularly give up personal freedom for convenience. Millions allow apps to track their location, record their preferences, and collect private data in exchange for easier navigation, personalized recommendations, or faster service. Tools like facial recognition, smart home devices, and online accounts store sensitive information, yet people continue to use them because the sense of safety and convenience outweighs concerns about losing privacy.
2. Government and security:
When societies face threats—such as terrorist attacks, pandemics, or crime—citizens often accept stronger government surveillance and stricter laws. After major security events, people support increased monitoring, airport screenings, and emergency powers because safety feels more urgent than the freedom to move or act without restriction. This pattern shows that in times of crisis, the desire for protection grows stronger than the desire for complete liberty.
3. Social pressures and expression:
Even in everyday interactions, many people limit their freedom of expression out of fear of judgment, conflict, or social backlash. Instead of expressing honest opinions, they choose the “safe” option—staying quiet or agreeing with the majority. Whether online or in person, people often avoid political discussions, controversial topics, or personal truths to maintain social harmony and protect themselves from negative reactions. This shows how the need for acceptance can outweigh the freedom to speak openly.
So What / Further Thought:
Mencken’s observation matters because it warns us about how easily freedom can slip away when safety becomes our main priority. Some level of safety is necessary—no society can function without rules, protections, and systems that keep people secure. But when safety becomes the automatic choice in every situation, citizens may slowly lose rights without realizing it. Recognizing this pattern encourages us to question our decisions and find a healthier balance. We can value safety without surrendering our freedoms, and we can demand protection without giving up what makes a society open, fair, and democratic. In the end, Mencken’s point reminds us to stay aware: freedom must be actively protected, or it can be quietly traded
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Your argument is already clear and thoughtful; what you mostly need now is more signposting and sharper connections so the reader sees exactly how each example proves Mencken right (or shows the limits of his claim). One move you could make is to go back to your claim paragraph and add one specific sentence that previews your three main areas: technology, government, and social life. For example, you could name those three directly so your reader knows what is coming and how each one relates to “trading freedom for safety.” How would you describe each of your three body-paragraph topics in one short phrase that clearly connects to Mencken’s quote?
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Your evidences are solid and definitely on the right track for supporting your claim. Each one clearly shows a situation where people choose safety or comfort over full freedom. What they need now is mostly tightening, not replacing.
Here’s the next thing to think about: for each of your three evidence sections (technology, government, social pressure), how clearly are you answering this question:
> “How does this specific example prove Mencken’s idea that the average person would rather be safe than free?”
If you look back at each evidence paragraph, where do you explicitly connect the example back to Mencken’s quote or to your main claim, and where is that connection only implied?
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