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Long Division: Novel 2

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DMU Timestamp: January 20, 2025 22:44

Added January 22, 2025 at 5:50pm by Serena Tyson
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Dr. Bonnee B and/or (Incorporated into new one) Background Knowledge Teammate (Jan 24 2025 12:58PM) : I love the image, tell me how the student ended up with it? more
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I identify and add to three important points in your text or an image, ...

The image evokes a sense of warmth and connection, reminiscent of themes in “Long Division” by Kiese Laymon. The student might have chosen or created this image to complement an excerpt from the book that emphasizes family bonds, heritage, and emotional support, which are central themes in the novel.

The setting, with family photos and a cozy environment, mirrors the novel’s exploration of identity and the significance of personal and familial history. The comforting embrace in the image highlights the importance of community and relationships, key elements in the narrative.

For a deeper understanding, you might explore “Long Division” itself, focusing on passages that delve into family dynamics and personal growth. The novel is rich with insights into how past and present intertwine in shaping one’s identity.

Feel free to revisit the image and reflect on any additional connections you notice with the themes of “Long Division.”

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Jauziyyah H (Jan 24 2025 1:01PM) : I really like how they added pages and references from the book in between scenes. The best part of the video for me was their ending, the dance and explosion was unexpected yet funny. One question I have is what was the hardest part to record/memorize
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The acting is very spot on and the script at the beginning made it interesting. I really like the sense of humor in the video and including other people to make it fun to watch. At the end, I really liked the little dancing with the music to end off the video.

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Jaeden R (Jan 24 2025 1:03PM) : I liked how the video has comedic elements and pulls the watchers attention. I also liked the themes it had as well.A question more

I liked how the video has comedic elements and pulls the watchers attention. I also liked the themes it had as well.
A question I have is did you have fun making this video?

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Malcolm G (Jan 24 2025 1:04PM) : From what I watched the video seemed enjoyable and eye catching, I liked the dance break and the plot along with the sound effects and the edits very creative
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Zoey S (Jan 24 2025 12:57PM) : Something I liked was the quality of the video and how well put-together it is. The lesson in the video is also empowering as well.
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Idrissa C (Jan 24 2025 1:00PM) : the end was extremely funny seeing yall dancing.
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a chapter from Kiese Laymon’s, Long Division.

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Serena T (Jan 24 2025 1:03PM) : Baize pages 10-35
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Aissetou G (Jan 24 2025 1:03PM) : Something I liked about this video was the quality and all the edits. Also, It was very funny and entertaining to watch
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Morgan C (Jan 24 2025 1:06PM) : Overall I like that the video was interesting and entertaining. It felt much shorter then five minutes.
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I liked how confident they were speaking

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I liked the dance at the end

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Dayyan P (Jan 24 2025 12:57PM) : My favorite part is the explanation, it really brings everything the book teaches us together and it makes me want to reread the book to find examples of these ideas!!!
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Morgan C (Jan 24 2025 1:02PM) : In my opinion this was the best part. Although I wonder what was the significance behind the dance. [Edited]
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DMU Timestamp: January 20, 2025 22:44

Added January 22, 2025 at 6:00pm by Serena Tyson
Title: Introduction

When watching this video, you will see a series of scenes from the book Long Divison by Kiese Laymon acted out. We specifically choose the chapter “Baize” which is pages 10-35 in the second book. The themes we discussed in this book are Self- Development, Communication, Relationships, And Racism. A quote that stood out to us in this book was “Oh,” She said. “Unfold your arms. You ain’t gonna cover them with fat breasts. What I’m saying is that your mind, your mouth, and your heart are finally working right. You are finally sprouting out.”” You make me feel funny saying I got ‘breasts’, Mama Lara.”

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Dr. Bonnee B (Jan 24 2025 1:04PM) : which chapter? You were supposed to stay away from Chapters 1 through 3. more

I love it, yet very confused as to why you didn’t follow the instructions.

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“All I’m saying is that you are ready to move,” she said and looked me right in my eyes. “Yeah, you ready in mind, body, and soul.” pages 10-15 Reading this quote you can get a sense of one of the key themes which is self development and very prominent in this book.

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I like how they break down the skit they just acted out to make sure the watcher understands

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I liked how their group separated their video into multiple sections. This made it easier for the viewer to understand. I also like how they implemented acting and scenes in their video as well as information. I wonder, how can we work on leveling audio? I also think that their captions were very helpful.

I really liked the part where Iman also started rapping. I think this was a very creative project and that is why the video and the part where she raps in my favorite part of their project. The part where they danced was also nice. Why did they start dancing? What was the meaning of this?

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Alana M (Jan 24 2025 1:00PM) : I love the different themes and backgrounds of the video. Along with using other people as an audience in your video
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Alana M (Jan 24 2025 1:04PM) : I like your video but I think that making sure the audio on some parts of the video would be helpful.
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Aamir R (Jan 24 2025 1:01PM) : I like the creativity put into this video, and my question is that who was this rap for or against ?
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Zahir J (Jan 24 2025 1:04PM) : I like how the video came together and they explained what happened in each scene also I like the rapping and dancing part
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