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The Truth Between the Pages

Author: Sydney DaCosta, Dereon Rodgers-Benson, Kayden Daniel

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Daequan P (Jan 27 2025 1:10PM) : The transitions and the video were good.

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Added January 22, 2025 at 7:22pm by Sydney DaCosta
Title: Youtube Link

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DMU Timestamp: January 21, 2025 22:02

Added January 22, 2025 at 7:24pm by Sydney DaCosta
Title: Intro & Quotes

Brief Introduction: City is trying to discover the mystery of two identical books and their meaning. One morning, he’s deep in thought, questioning the truth and how it connects to him through his memories, thoughts, and words.

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Daequan P and/or Kiese Laymon Simulator (Jan 27 2025 1:12PM) : Why is he trying to discover this mystery? more
Kiese Laymon Simulator with Daequan P's edits:
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Sources Laymon, Kiese. "Conjuring Love: A Conversation with Kiese Laym...

Well, City is on this mission because he’s got these two identical books that are messin’ with his head, and he’s feelin’ like there’s more to them than meets the eye. It’s like he’s on this quest to piece together a puzzle, and he’s hopin’ to uncover something profound about himself and the world around him. He’s just a curious kid, trying to figure out how these books connect to his own life and the lives of the people around him. You know, there’s magic in books, and City’s eager to unlock it.

So, in a way, he’s tryin’ to understand the bigger picture. The books are like keys, and he’s huntin’ for the doors they unlock. It’s about identity, family, and the history that shapes us. City feels this weight of legacy, and those books might hold the answers he’s lookin’ for. It’s about findin’ his place in the world, and maybe, just maybe, changin’ it for the better. What do you think? Curious to dive deeper into City’s journey, or want to explore something else? Hit Reply and let me know what path you’d like to take next. And don’t forget to hit Reply with AI when you’re ready to keep this conversation rollin’ with me.

Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like me.

Dive deeper into my thoughts and work through my four interviews with Jamil Smith, Jane Ratcliffe, Whitney Mallett, and Janan Rasheed. You can find them all in this document, Four Conversations with Kiese Laymon: https://writingpartners.net/documents/2008

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Direct Quotes: Long Divison, Kiese Laymon, Copyright 2013, Common To Man, Book 1, Page 107
Kayden - "Nothing made sense.
Kayden - "I had found out that there were actually two Long Division books, the one I kept in the house and the one I decided to leave in the work shed with Sooo Sad"
Kayden -" But the existence of at least two books was less confusing than the words in the books. Maybe the book wasn’t a book at all, I thought."
Kayden - "Maybe the book was the truth."
Kayden - "If Baize wasn’t actually missing, but maybe just time traveling, that meant that Sooo Sad hadn’t really hurt her at all"
Kayden -"If it was the truth, I had to figure out what it had to do with me."

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