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Long Divisio, Kiese Laymon, Copyright 2013, Chapter That Work Shed, Section 3 of 5

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"Nothing makes sense" (Chapter Common To Man, pages 107-115)

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"That Workshed" is a short film adaption of Chapter That Work Shed (103-106), Section 3 of 5

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from Long Division by Kiese Laymon. It's about a curious teenager, City, who sneaks into his grandma's s mysterious shed. Inside, he uncovers an unsettling and unexpected scene: a chained man, an old family secret, and a book that raises further questions. This film explores important themes like family, identity, and racism while presenting humorous moments of self-discovery. This is a story about uncovering truths.

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Direct Quotes from Chapter That Work Shed (103-106) of Long Division by Kiese Laymon, Copyright 2013:

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Iman b (Jan 27 2025 1:45PM) : i like it made us feel like we were in the scene
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Kimor D (Jan 27 2025 1:56PM) : the music went with the scenes very well and it was well planned.
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It sounds like you enjoyed the video for its mix of humor and horror vibes. The image of the house with a path leading up to it adds an interesting visual element. The setting looks peaceful, yet there’s something about it that could lend itself to a spooky story. What aspects of the video do you think contributed most to that unique mix of humor and horror?

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I really like the cover photo that they used to introduce their presentation. It feels very cinematic and I also like how they talked about the importance of their chapter in the overall story.

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- I really enjoyed their intro music. I also like their opening shot because it felt eerie and nostalgic.
- Why did they choose to make their film in portrait mode
- Could there have been captions?

My favorite part was when the character found a book in the shed and the book was Long Division. I thought this was cool because the book they are re-enacting is Long Division.

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Kiese Laymon’s “Long Division” is a novel that intertwines narratives of time travel, self-discovery, and racial identity, set against the backdrop of Mississippi. The book delves into complexities of race, family history, and the challenge of personal identity. Here, we’ll focus on the section titled “That Work Shed,” from the novel.

Important Sentences and Their Significance

1. “When I made it home, Grandma wasn’t there. I was swelling from the stings, but I realized this was my chance to see if that white man was really in the work shed.”

This sentence sets the stage for the suspense and mystery central to the chapter. It introduces the protagonist’s curiosity, the absence of the grandmother, and the secretive element of the work shed. The tension is palpable, suggesting a deeper family secret or conflict that needs uncovering.

2. “On the floor of the shed, lying in a fetal position, was SoooSad, covered in dried blood, sweat, and sawdust.”

This description of SoooSad not only adds to the eerie atmosphere but also introduces a significant, unsettling discovery. The imagery of blood, sweat, and sawdust evokes a visceral reaction, highlighting the gravity of the situation and the potential violence involved.

3. “My name aint nigger, you know, like you said it was. My name is City. Really, it’s Citoyen.”

This statement addresses issues of identity and racism. By correcting the derogatory name and asserting his true identity, City (Citoyen) challenges the racism he faces and reclaims his personal dignity. It underscores the theme of self-identity amidst societal prejudice.

Background Information

- Kiese Laymon: As an author, Laymon often writes about the African American experience in the American South, addressing themes of race, identity, and family dynamics. Understanding his background and previous works can provide insight into the thematic depth of “Long Division.”

- Historical Context of Racism in Mississippi: The racial dynamics in Mississippi have a profound historical context, with deep-rooted issues of segregation and racial violence. The setting of “Long Division” taps into this history, influencing the narrative and character experiences.

- Theme of Time Travel in “Long Division”: The novel uses time travel as a narrative device to explore how past events shape identity and present conflicts. This element allows for a complex exploration of history and personal growth.

For more background, consider these resources:

- [Kiese Laymon’s Official Website](https://www.kieselaymon.com)
- [Mississippi Historical Society](https://www.mshistorynow.mdah.ms.gov)
- [National Museum of African American History and Culture](https://nmaahc.si.edu)

These sources provide valuable context on the themes and setting of “Long Division.” If any links do not work, you can find the source by searching with the information provided.

Now that you’ve got a deeper sense of the background, why not dive back into the text? Maybe you’ll spot more threads or themes that you can share when you reply!

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