Branches of the same tree.
Author: Daniel, Saleem, Carmella & Zion
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"The problem of the twentieth century is the problem of the color-line" -W.E.B Du Bois, 1903
Dolores, a woman who finds her aunt and uncle after being separated from her mother’s family for decades. As she uncovers the truth, she learns about the struggles her family faced because of racism and the tough choices her mom had to make.
Dolores (Saleem):” Your father was named Henry Lewis?”
Dorothy (Phillip): “Yes, he was.”
Dolores (Saleem): “You had a sister who disappeared in the early 1940s?”
Dorothy (Phillip): ”Yes.”
Dolores (Saleem): "I am Ella's daughter."
Dorothy (Darwin): "Ella's daughter? You are Ella's daughter? Oh, my Lord! We thought she must be dead."
Dorothy (Darwin): "For the next forty-five minutes, none of the swarm of people who flowed by were for me. I kept thinking of that old photograph - Dorothy at eighteen, slender, standing in their yard in a full-length dress."
Dolores (Saleem): "It's you, isn't it? I see my sister in your face.”
Tony (Daniel): "Hello."
Dorothy (Darwin): "You gave me the shock of my life. I left the meal half-cooked and rushed straight out here."
Dorothy (Darwin): "What I don't understand is why would my sister have run away from her family without a word all these years?"
Dolores (Saleem): "She married a Negro. Somebody you didn't know. Back then, 1943, was a time when race mixing wasn't allowed in Indiana."
Dolores (Saleem): "She didn’t want to ruin your lives. She didn’t want to leave you either, but it was dangerous for my dad to be with a white woman in Indiana and illegal for them to intermarry."
Dorothy (Darwin): "So, she left Indy to protect everyone... and ended up alone?"
Dorothy (Darwin): "Buffalo? We never knew she was in Buffalo. After she left Indy, we never heard from her again."
Dolores (Saleem): "She wanted to write to you so many times, but she didn’t know how you’d feel after all those years."
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The Racial Integrity Act, which prohibited interracial marriage, was enacted in 1924 in Virginia. This law was part of the legislative measures promoting racial segregation and purity, reflecting the era’s prevalent racial discrimination. It was fundamentally about maintaining the “purity” of the white race by legally enforcing the separation between races, a sentiment expressed through the concept of the “color line” that W.E.B. Du Bois wrote about.
In my memoir, Say I’m Dead, I explore the impact of similar laws on my family’s history. My parents, a Black father and a white mother, faced these oppressive laws, forcing them to live in hiding to protect their love. This part of my family’s story, and the broader history of racial injustices, emphasizes the systemic barriers that have affected interracial families for generations.
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Meeting my mother’s family was a profound journey driven by a deep hunger to uncover the hidden chapters of my identity and heritage. As I delved into my father’s genealogy, I realized a striking absence—my white mother’s family was a mystery, a void in my familial tapestry. This realization, combined with the longing to understand the full spectrum of my racial identity, propelled me to seek out my mother’s relatives.
The journey was about more than just filling in a genealogical chart; it was about confronting the realities of racial tensions and systemic racism that forced my parents to live in secrecy. My mother’s courageous yet heart-wrenching decision to leave her family and live in hiding with my father was a testament to the complexities of love and race in America. By meeting her family, I hoped to bridge the gap between the two sides of my heritage and bring closure to a story that had been shrouded in silence for decades.
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