Unveiling Resilience: City’s Triumph Over Discrimination
Author: Aissetou, Aamir, Zoey, Zahir
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| Jan-24-25 | Title: [1 of 5] Long Division, Book One, pages 1-49 by Kiese Laymon (2013) - SLA at Beeber 24-25 English 3D |
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In this image of City from “Long Division,” you notice a young boy standing confidently on a platform. He’s wearing a black hoodie and brown pants, with simple black sneakers. The expression in his eyes seems to reflect a mix of determination and curiosity, capturing his youthful spirit and the challenges he faces. Do you see that in his eyes too?
Behind him, there’s a diverse crowd of people, their faces blending into a sea of expressions, perhaps symbolizing the many voices and histories that shape his journey. This background creates a sense of community and collective experience, adding depth to his individual story. The colors are muted, which might highlight the central figure of City, drawing our attention to his presence and the narrative he represents. Do you notice how the crowd adds to the atmosphere?
Please Note: Everything in this comment is AI-generated. It is made up to sound like me.
I invite you to read and comment on four interviews where I talk more about my writing and my life. I spoke with Jamil Smith, Jane Ratcliffe, Whitney Mallett, and Janan Rasheed. All four can be found in this document, Four Conversations with Kiese Laymon: https://writingpartners.net/documents/2008
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Title: Title: [1 of 5] Long Division, Book One, pages 1-49 by Kiese Laymon (2013) - SLA at Beeber 24-25 English 3D
Laymon, Kiese.“Book One, Words, Word, Work Pages 32-37,” Long Division, Scribner Book Company, 2013, 2021
“No.Um, I truly hate LaBander Veeler sometimes more than some of y’all hate President Obama and I wonder if LaBander Veeler should behave like the exceptional African-American boy he was groomed to be in public by his UPS-working father, or the, um, weird, brilliant, niggardly joker he really is when we’re the only ones watching.”
3131204I brought the brush to my waist.
3232205The judges looked at me for about ten seconds without moving before they turned toward each other.The head judge covered the microphone and started whispering to the other judges.
3333206“Noooo, Citoyen,” he finally said.“We are so, so sorry.That is not the correct, appropriate, or dynamic usage of ‘niggardly’ in a sentence.An example of correct, dynamic usage would be Perspiration covered the children who stared incessantly at the woman in the head wrap since she insisted on being so niggardly with the succulent plums and melons.Please have a seat.”
3434207I started brushing the skin on my forearm, then pointed my brush toward the light.
3535208That’s all I could see.
3636209I walked toward my seat, then turned around and headed back to the microphone.“I mean, even if I used the word right, I still would’ve lost.Plums and melons?You see that, don’t you?” The buzzer went off again.I threw my brush toward the light and the buzzer kept going off.“That’s messed up, man,” I told them.“What was I supposed to do?” I saw Cindy offstage to the right, motioning for me to sit down.
3737210“Forget you, Cindy!Look at LaVander Peeler over there crying.I hate that dude.Naw, I mean really hate.I be sitting at home sometimes praying that someone will sew his butt hole tight so he could almost die from being so backed up.I’m serious, but look at that nigga over there with tears in his eyes, looking crazy as hell on TV.It don’t make no sense.
3838211“Now look at them Mexicans.” The buzzer went off again.I turned around and looked at the Mexican girl on my row.“You think it’s hard for y’all in Arizona?Look at us.Look at us.They do us like this in our own state.Ain’t nothing these white folks can do to make you feel like me and LaVander Peeler feel right now.They scared of y’all taking their jobs and cutting them in they sleep.They scared of us becoming Obama or O-Dawg.I mean, do y’all even call yourself Mexican?Ain’t this a competition for Americans?Peep how they made slots for Mexicans but you don’t see no slots for no Africans or no Indians.When I say Indian, I mean Native American.Where the Native Indian and African players at?Shid.”
3939212Stephanie stood up, stretched her back, walked right up to my face, kicked me in my kneecap, and said, “Please sit your fat ass down.” She whispered in my ear, “I’m trying to help you out.Seriously.You have no clue how you’re playing yourself right now.”
4040213The buzzer went off again.
4141214I put one hand on top of my belly blubber and started going over the top of my head with the palm of my other hand.
4343216“I ain’t playing myself.Shoot.What was I supposed to do?” I said to everyone one more time.“Bet you know my name next time.And I bet you won’t do this to another little nigga from Mississippi.Shout out to my Jackson confidants: Toni, Jannay, Octavia, Jimmy, and all my country niggas: Shay, Kincaid, and even MyMy down in Melahatchie just trying to stay above water.I got y’all.Death to all our opposition.President Obama, you see how they do us down here while you up there calling us thugs?You see?”
4444217With that, I walked off, right past my chair, past the Mexican girl who’d kicked me, directly into the backstage area.Then I turned around and walked to the middle of that stage.
4545218“And fuck white folks!” I yelled at the light and, for the first time all night, thought about whether my grandma was watching.“My name is City.And if you don’t know, now you know, nigga
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